At 2/6/13 07:51 PM, LaserKarl wrote:
Did a new piece.
I'm very torn on this piece.
It's well painted, but I feel like the composition takes away from the image. My eyes are immediately drawn to the black mass in the middle of water, and they pretty much get stuck there. It's unfortunate since that part isn't nearly as rendered out or as interesting of a thing to look at as the guy, who I'm pretty sure was meant to be the focal point.
I don't know. It might just be me, but I personally think the composition would benefit if you trimmed down the bottom part a little more.