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FourStAr-NinJa-JC
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what do you think of this 2006-09-11 21:54:19 Reply

This is a movie I have been working on for about a week. This is also my second attempt at a real flash movie. It is based off of the 7th ending for bleach. I am trying to make it look as much like the real thing as I can, but instead of using bleach characters I am using some of my favorite flash artists/artists for Newgrounds and Sheezy. This is still a work in progress and I know I need to add in certain things in certain places. As for the animation, its mostly gona be tweens (like the real thing) but there is also gona be some frame by frame when people turn their heads or things like that(if you know what the Real ending looks like then you’ll know what I’m talking about)

http://media.putfile.com/hanabi-60

I know how bad the audio is and if anyone knows how I could make it better that would be great. I really need almost crystal clear audio because the animation it not to intricate and good audio may compensate a little bit.

Current audio settings:
Compression-mp3
Bit rate- 160kbps
Quality- best

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Response to what do you think of this 2006-09-11 22:26:40 Reply

Looks awesome! Nothing really wrong with it. IF you want me to help with naything id be happy to. Pm me if your interested.

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Response to what do you think of this 2006-09-11 22:43:25 Reply

I think, instead of drawing anime, work on your anatomy. Take some boring figure study classes, it makes your art like 60% better. The body structure on your characters is wrong, they look 'wonky'. You should actually try to animate too, instead of using tweens. Making the eyes blink makes an animation look really alive.


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Response to what do you think of this 2006-09-11 22:59:52 Reply

It looks great. Only suggestion is make the fireworks in the background of that one part look better. And to the fist guy, anime is a style, he doesn't need ultimate realistic drawing to make a good movie or use a good art style. Cartoons don't take anatomy seriously, thats what drawing is for, freedom of creativity.

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Response to what do you think of this 2006-09-11 23:07:08 Reply

looks great. Well....i loved the start, the animation of him jumping. The rest was pretty borring, just tweened drawings. Your drawings themselves look good, but more work could be put into them. Like putting better shaded detail maybe. Overall well done though.


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Response to what do you think of this 2006-09-11 23:11:51 Reply

Great job. The intro was pretty cool, but the animation itself without the intro could use some more actual animation, rather than tweening. At least add some blinking and what not to give it some flavor. Your drawings area great! And this movie will be too, so I would get going on the improvements =)