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At 9/10/06 07:14 PM, EdpR wrote: animation done, i'll add sounds tomorrow.
Click me!!!

enjoy!

Not bad! Yes, sounds would be nice.

Chris_productions, forget it. We have enough authors in the collab.

What? Please don't spam in my collab.

i got some good music for the menu.............if u include me in the credits ill give it to you........

28% done

Judge harshly. Tell me the areas of improvement. Unless they're really easy improvements don't expect them until i'm 100% done with the first draft. Specifically tell if it lags anywhere, and the flow of it in general. If there are places where you think somethings missing, speak up about it. thx.

At 9/10/06 08:44 PM, EKublai wrote: 28% done

Judge harshly. Tell me the areas of improvement. Unless they're really easy improvements don't expect them until i'm 100% done with the first draft. Specifically tell if it lags anywhere, and the flow of it in general. If there are places where you think somethings missing, speak up about it. thx.

Right.

1) The guy in the beginning looks alright, but his face is shaped a bit too strangely.

2) The two iPods weren't drawn by you. Draw them yourself!

3) The blurred background looks a bit ugly. And did you even draw it? If not, then do draw it.

4) The scrolling looks very choppy. When you use a blur filter in Flash, it sometimes lags your movie, so you may want to fix that.

5) The text on the signs is a bit messy, so please tidy it up.

6) When it shows the two iPods, the white brush strokes on the glass attract too much attention. Give them an alpha of 25% or so, and see how it looks.

7) The shelf looks a bit unnappealing. Could use a lot of neatening.

My best advice would be too start it over from scratch, redo the background, don't use so much blur, and smooth out the scrolling. I don't know if you're quite up to being in this collab, so try to improve a bit before continuing your part.

yep same problems i had with Mad World Collab and Widow. Thankfully i was able to improve enough to get in it. I see what you mean and I agree. I'm scrapping this idea anyway. I really need something with more fbf to get away with this cuz I compeltely sucked at tweening.

At 9/10/06 09:21 PM, EKublai wrote: yep same problems i had with Mad World Collab and Widow. Thankfully i was able to improve enough to get in it. I see what you mean and I agree. I'm scrapping this idea anyway. I really need something with more fbf to get away with this cuz I compeltely sucked at tweening.

Good idea, I didn't like the previous concept too much.

By the way, EdpR, the style of your animation reminded me of Big Mistake.

At 9/11/06 07:27 PM, Irk wrote: By the way, EdpR, the style of your animation reminded me of Big Mistake.

really? you think so? ^_^

can i do another part? (i'll not use stickmen in this one)

May I Join This collab?

which is better? A) or B)?

A) B)

EdpR, you aren't supposed to put your own music in the collab. Seeing as how the only difference between the two parts is the music, they're both fine. Just take out the song.

ugh... ^_^ hehe... k... so i send it???

Still alive so you know and still working just been swamped with school I should have something cool to show by Sunday.

At 9/11/06 10:20 PM, EdpR wrote: ugh... ^_^ hehe... k... so i send it???

Yes, go ahead and send the .fla via PM. (you can just send a Denvish link, since I rarely check my email).

RampantLion, that's good to know.

Ha! I might join when I got the time :P

At 9/12/06 04:50 AM, Barbeq wrote: Ha! I might join when I got the time :P

Alright. I suppose you're doing a war-themed movie?

At 9/12/06 07:27 PM, Irk wrote: Alright. I suppose you're doing a war-themed movie?

No. I was thinking of doing a part about all those thoughts you get when your computer crashes and deletes all those important files that took over 50h of your life to do.

But someone might already be working on this idea...

At 9/13/06 05:29 AM, Barbeq wrote:

At 9/12/06 07:27 PM, Irk wrote: Alright. I suppose you're doing a war-themed movie?

No. I was thinking of doing a part about all those thoughts you get when your computer crashes and deletes all those important files that took over 50h of your life to do.

But someone might already be working on this idea...

The idea doesn't really appeal to me. Not sure why, but it just doesn't.

i have one problem. the file size is gigantic (19mb) that's why i can't host it.

At 9/14/06 07:50 PM, EdpR wrote: i have one problem. the file size is gigantic (19mb) that's why i can't host it.

Very well then, email it to me.

liamdixon@earthlink.net

can i join?

At 9/15/06 07:48 PM, Honto wrote: can i join?

Alright, but just be sure to keep the graphics neat. I saw your previous work and couldn't help noticing a lot of the lines were jagged. Remember to put your ALL into this.

At 9/15/06 07:21 PM, Irk wrote:

At 9/14/06 07:50 PM, EdpR wrote: i have one problem. the file size is gigantic (19mb) that's why i can't host it.

Very well then, email it to me.

liamdixon@earthlink.net

okay, wow this is really dying, i shall keep it alive.

At 9/16/06 11:15 PM, EdpR wrote:

At 9/15/06 07:21 PM, Irk wrote:

At 9/14/06 07:50 PM, EdpR wrote: i have one problem. the file size is gigantic (19mb) that's why i can't host it.

Very well then, email it to me.

liamdixon@earthlink.net

okay, wow this is really dying, i shall keep it alive.

Don't worry about it. If it dies, it dies, and there's not much we can do about it. I'm perfectly willing to continue this collab as long as everyone else keeps me updated. It seems about every one of us has chickened out, and I'm afraid this collab will no longer continue unless you all pull yourselves together.

I'm not suggesting giving this collab up, it just seems the lot of you (excluding EdpR and a few others) haven't the willingness to keep this collab going. Just know that from now on, if you want to join you must promise not to chicken out without a decent excuse to do so.

I've been watching this for a while and I think I'll join it. I have a pretty good idea featuring a nature preserve. :D

Recent work:
http://www.newground..m/portal/view/330299

At 9/17/06 10:21 AM, CybermonkeyStudios wrote: I've been watching this for a while and I think I'll join it. I have a pretty good idea featuring a nature preserve. :D

Recent work:
http://www.newground..m/portal/view/330299

I've seen the Standup Comedy Collab before, your part made me laugh my ass off XD

Alright, you can be in.

That's good. My idea is actually different than what I previously said. I'm busy but I'll try to get it done soon.

I've done a rough non-animated storyboard of my part. With this done I have more than enough time to animate and add extra violence. Click Me

Lookin' gooooooood.