Rate my comic!

[Snubby]

My Comic

Before I start pumping a bunch of comics out, I want to make sure they are quality. Please tell me what is wrong with this comic, if you find it funny, and what you rate it /10. I want the Snubby Land Comics to be as good as possible! : )

[23450]

i like the idea of the joke, but the punchline was not so good. 3/10

[kenki]

LOL I THOUGHT THAT WAS HILARIOUS

didnt make much sense but i loved it keep it up!

[Snubby]

At 8/10/06 04:03 PM, 23450 wrote: i like the idea of the joke, but the punchline was not so good. 3/10

what i am looking to do is get the rating up to 8. Tell me how i could make it better, unless the punchline is the only problem.

At 8/10/06 04:04 PM, kenki wrote: LOL I THOUGHT THAT WAS HILARIOUS

didnt make much sense but i loved it keep it up!

thanks

[kenki]

At 8/10/06 04:04 PM, kenki wrote: LOL I THOUGHT THAT WAS HILARIOUS

didnt make much sense but i loved it keep it up!

Whoops sry 9/10

[WilliWowza]

Eh, it's so-so 5/10

[23450]

At 8/10/06 04:07 PM, Snubby wrote:

At 8/10/06 04:03 PM, 23450 wrote: i like the idea of the joke, but the punchline was not so good. 3/10

what i am looking to do is get the rating up to 8. Tell me how i could make it better, unless the punchline is the only problem.

artwork does not need to be perfect in these comics, so i dont think you need to work on that to to much. and yah, besides the punhcline, i did not see anything terribly worng i geuss.

[Snubby]

At 8/10/06 04:09 PM, WilliWowza wrote: Eh, it's so-so 5/10

-__- The point of the thread is to improve my comics. How can I improve!?

[Cold]

Graphics 8/10 (clean up your spelling a bit and maybe use a different font.)
Humor 2/10 - not very funny.

[chubbthehippo]

the style of ur drawing doesn't fit the humor of the comic. make the drawings less detailed. good joke :D.
7/10

[Snubby]

At 8/10/06 04:11 PM, Cold_ wrote: Graphics 8/10 (clean up your spelling a bit and maybe use a different font.)

is slowely spelled wrong? Quickly? What's the problem I don't see any (im a crap speller).

Humor 2/10 - not very funny.

I'll try harder...

At 8/10/06 04:14 PM, chubbthehippo wrote: the style of ur drawing doesn't fit the humor of the comic. make the drawings less detailed. good joke :D.
7/10

less detailed?! Why?

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Okay so some people don't like the joke. For the next one the script was...

Person1: Hey Joe!
Person2: Hi!

Person1: So Joe, what did you do this summer?
Person2: Well, I'll tell you what I didn't do...

Person2: ...Brush my teeth.

Is that funny?

[Obi-Kun]

perhaps some fire in his eyes when he says they can burn in hell...perhaps he should be dressed like the devil too...otherwise it was pretty good.

[AAF]

the graphic are good , but the joke are not as good. I say yo ushould change the last picture.

[Cybex]

At 8/10/06 04:20 PM, Snubby wrote:

At 8/10/06 04:11 PM, Cold_ wrote: Graphics 8/10 (clean up your spelling a bit and maybe use a different font.)

is slowely spelled wrong? Quickly? What's the problem I don't see any (im a crap speller).

slowly

Okay so some people don't like the joke. For the next one the script was...

Person1: Hey Joe!
Person2: Hi!

Person1: So Joe, what did you do this summer?
Person2: Well, I'll tell you what I didn't do...

Person2: ...Brush my teeth.

Is that funny?

I don't get it. It'd be better if person1 asked "Brush your teeth?" in the last frame as a sort of insult. But then it still wouldn't be funny. Also, what's with the introduction in the first frame?

[Snubby]

At 8/10/06 04:43 PM, Cybex wrote: I don't get it. It'd be better if person1 asked "Brush your teeth?" in the last frame as a sort of insult. But then it still wouldn't be funny. Also, what's with the introduction in the first frame?

I want 3 frames.