You could make this so much cooler by adding some fucked up faux 3d thing in the background or something atleast.
The manual bit needs to be more intresting too, try and cut down on the text. I've looked at this thread abot 3 times and only just bothered to play it because the instructions were boring to get through.
It seemed alright though whyile playing, I dont like the way you bounce off of stuff you hit, seemed annoing, maybe if you like graxed along them instead or something, that woulkd feel nicer.