My Un-Finished Flash.

[wtf97ds]

See it here.

Do you think I should submit it? (once it's finished of course). I really un-sure about whether this will get blammed or not, so I don't want to be wasting my time - the fbf animating is getting hard, and I thought I'd showcase it to get some feedback.

[Old-Style-Clock]

looks good. but that backgrounds need allot of work. try giving some shades of gray to it

[wtf97ds]

Yeah I was planning on doing that.

Do alot of people enjoy watching stickmen tackle obstacle courses?

[Ehwaz003]

I love them, but I think you should post this into the alpha section as well.

[wtf97ds]

At 7/27/06 06:24 AM, Ehwaz003 wrote: I love them, but I think you should post this into the alpha section as well.

Alpha section?

Where can I find that?

[mrazerty]

I think you shouldn't submit it.
It's not original enough.

[BlueFlameSkulls]

At 7/27/06 06:26 AM, LIMY wrote: Alpha section?

Where can I find that?

http://www.newgrounds.com/ngmag/alphas/

[wtf97ds]

At 7/27/06 06:29 AM, BlueFlameSkulls wrote: http://www.newgrounds.com/ngmag/alphas/

On second thoughts I won't submit it tp the alphas, after reading this...

::1. Your submission should have 2-3+ weeks of production involved. Trust us - nobody cares about your 2 day project that you slapped together on your lunch breaks. Worthless content might get deleted...so IF you plan to submit an Alpha, please use your best judgement and make it worthwhile!
::

[LavaBall]

The stickman legs are too short(Make them longer)Otherwise good.

P.S:Add sounds.

[UnknownFury]

His arms are a bit short..

Is he a skillful retard?

[Andro-Pheonix]

wow how do u make that? i want to make 1

[HotDog-Productions]

At 7/27/06 09:48 AM, Andro_Pheonix wrote: wow how do u make that? i want to make 1

Sex.

[Join-Me-In-Death]

I really enjoy stickmen do obstacles and stuff like that, great animation. But you need a background, music or sounds and a bit stunts like maybe some flips and rolls, stuff like that. Keep up the good work!

[Murch]

Uhm, right now, it just looks like a stickman running around. Make the stickman more detailed, and make the obstacles MUCH more detailed. It will be much more enjoyable with moving stuff as well, so you could maybe have him jumping over punching bags, but make sure to make the punching bags move naturally (swinging). Which in that case you could make him running through a gym, jumping over and through everything, but seriously, put some more effort into making it enjoyable to watch, or it will get blammed.

[DarkDragonVX]

yeah very good! a game would be good too just not at that FPS lol your know? either way I liked it just backgrounds...will be good!

[artoonixkid418]

At 7/27/06 06:09 AM, LIMY wrote: See it here.

Do you think I should submit it? (once it's finished of course). I really un-sure about whether this will get blammed or not, so I don't want to be wasting my time - the fbf animating is getting hard, and I thought I'd showcase it to get some feedback.

Finish it first.

[Celarent]

I dont think it would be blammed even if posted like this.
Looking good. The background works, altough it can be worked too (something not too colorful or the animation would be that noticeable). Also a funny song would help.

[garyruler]

Like finish it first.. toch it up a little longer legs and arms and it will be great :D

[gotix]

I lik it, but you should do alot of work on the background, add sounds, maybe music, and then you'll hav something that will hopefull not get blammed...

[Andro-Pheonix]

maybe monsters he kills and stuff but dont make it too..........Madness like, it needs to be origanal and make a kill counter but it shouldnt go past 20 or it will just be a fighting movie and space out enemies also i agree with other people u need a background and some music but yeah should be good cant wait til its done.

[TrueDarkness]

Well.... it isn't that great. The animation isn't too good. The ground is poor and undetailed and there is no background. It wouldn't be blammed, but it would score low, probably around the 2.00's.

The running cycle is really sloppy. When he grabbed and swung on the poles, well... that was...bad. Also, the wall climbing was terrible =p

So, what I would do is spend more time working on the animation, then work on the ground some more and adding some details to things.

It is a good idea and I'd like to see you continue with this. I'm just being honest, hoping to see you improve =)

[Andro-Pheonix]

I think totaly different like this,

Well.... it is great. The animation good. The ground isnt bad and detailed but there is no background. It wouldn't be blammed, but it would score low, probably around the 3.00's.

The running cycle is really good. When he grabbed and swung on the poles, well... that was...well timed. Also, the wall climbing was skillful

So, what I would do is spend more time working on the animation, then work on the ground some more and adding some details to things.

It is a good idea and I'd like to see you continue with this. I'm just being honest, hoping to see you improve =)

[TrueDarkness]

At 7/27/06 01:29 PM, Andro_Pheonix wrote: I think totaly different like this,

Yes well, you just signed up today and obviously haven't seen anything good. And don't edit my posts =p. But really, this needs work, and I hope it does get worked on.

[Andro-Pheonix]

yeah then it would be better?,good?, GREAT!!!

[Trunks]

At 7/27/06 01:09 PM, True_Darkness wrote: stuffs

I completely agree with you, I doubt it will score higher than 2.00 if it even passes, it needs a LOT of work and some good music. Right now, I would hope it get's blammed.

I'm being totally honest here: at it's current state, it sucks. No offense to you or anyhting, but it needs a LOT more work before you even think about submitting it.

[Josh-B]

Make random bombs falling from the sky and narrowly miss him. Also make some platforms fall apart when he steps on them.

[Zac-Donald]

the stick needs to be skinnier, and its porportions are off

[wtf97ds]

Okay thanks for all the suggestions, I've decided to start again fresh.

The stick will start out in the jungle, there will be close ups and blurs. He will then fall down a hole by accident, and find he is in an ancient temple. There are traps everywhere.

He travels through the traps trying to get out, at the end he finnaly gets out of the hole and the movie ends. The traps will be falling bombs, tight ropes - all of sorts of things.

I will do this, I'll post bits of it in the making here if it's still alive.

[Warnox]

looks good...so far even tho it is not fineshed it will come out good =P