At 10/29/06 06:32 PM, Cartoon-Tut wrote:
This is a remake cause of my laggy azz computer…
Let's make some corrections, shall we?
• Name/ title: Aramos Creed of the Elite Force
• Class: LVL- 8 Tiger Laguz
Great.
• Weapon Proficiency: 79% accuracy (gun) C+
Whoah? I thought we were simply beginning to discover gunpowder now.
• Weapon: Titanium plated claws, titanium plated fangs (kind of like a grill), and a spare gun from the war
First off, no titanium. That is a space age material. Try steel.
War? There wasn't a gunpowder war, mate. Ifsey's legend might've been fairly good, but I have other ideas...
• Items: 200 bullets, 2 elixirs
Bullets?
• Description: White Tiger Fur with dreads around head area forming a small mane. Plated armor from nose to forehead (plated armor mask) Dark rings around eyes. About 5’ 5 in height (easily maneuverable in crowds of tall people). Chain mail on his torso, and plate armor from his waist to his knees
Great description. Just remove the plate and chain mail, laguz don't wear armor in combat. Armor would slow them down, removing their advantage of agility and strength.
• Back-ground: A soldier in the war for gun-powder once the volcano erupted, he took refuge in a dry forest; Claros. Because of high-population he did not stay hidden for long. Aramos was discovered by a member of the Elite Force, he quickly recognized Creed’s talent and immediately offered him a spot into the Elite Force.
Eh.....I'll let you pass with this one, except for the gunpowder stuff. I need to post some laguz info to straighten people up.
*AHEM*
Laguz-Section 1- Relations with Beorc.
Beorc are also known as humans.
Generally, Laguz and Beorc are certainly not friendly. The slang name for laguz 'sub-human' is a result of this hatred. Many beorc do not know this, but when they are referred to as 'human' by a laguz, that is also quite slang. Due to laws made by the gatherings of the rulers of laguz, laguz refuse to defend themselves against unarmed peasants and revolts. Many laguz are often beaten senseless by angry townsfolk who don't support their 'trespassing'. So laguz often conceal their identity with cloaks, hoods, and other apparal.
Laguz-Section 2- Physical features.
Laguz have specific physical features according to what kind of laguz they are.
For example, Beast laguz (Cat, Tiger, Lion) have feline features- cat ears, a tail, and marks on their face that are either so thin as not visible, or as wide across as a fingernail. Bird laguz (Hawk, Crow) have mainly human features, except for great wings sprouting from their backs, which they can fly with. Dragon laguz do not have any defining features, except for the fact that they generally have tan skin, even in cold climate.
Laguz- Section 3- Combat.
Laguz fight in a special way unique to them.
Laguz are not able to fight in their human form, so they transform into an animal, according to their species. They refuse to use Beorc weapons. Laguz morphs, while very powerful, can only be maintained for an amount of time. The use of a demi-band can let a laguz stay in morph for as long as he/she so wishes, but the demi-band saps them of some of their ability. Laguz bands do not sap strength, but they are only, repeat, ONLY found in laguz royalty.
Lesson-End.