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Noone should take you seriously,
1/ Your grammar speaks as if your 5
2/ You hav like 250 posts.
3/ Get off level 1, than come back to us.

I think you might have the wrong forum topic or something mate, unless you seriously do have a problem with us....

Ah i have used the ancient art of chinese mind reading crossed with the power of Nergal's orby thing and Vancha's sacred weapon to determine why that guy (2 posts above) said what he said.

I think he is one of those people that read the first post and ignore all other pages of the topic because DSK is a low lvl, has abotu 250 posts and didnt have the best spelling and grammar....

Or maybe it was me he was reffering too....

Let's remove Vancha from my last story also.
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The opposing army was fighting bravely but were losing. They decided to try to escape into Gyallian but they were met by reinforcements. They relized what they ran into was a trap. The enemies decided to charger there way through. They tried a phalyx method to get through but Ramun had cast an explosive Hitomi. Blowing them up from the inside.

All of a sudden a great dark army came. It had nearly 100,000 soilders. They seemed fearless and painless as well. There forces were great but I forces were weakened and dwindling. "There are too many of them." said Robert hopelessly.

I sent a PM to the intruder, as for SSI, you can go with the new addition that you wrote. Good job guys, and next time someone comes here and insults us, dont respond. I will handle it over PM, okay?

The dark army closed in on them. They seemed to be with no leader. Just mindlessly ravaging anything not like them animals as well. "This looks bad." said Robert. Jaffar stole a elixer from a doctor and drank it. He shuddered at the taste but he could fee all his strength coming back. "We are in for a hell of a fight." he said as he switched his sword hand.

Cornelius flew high into the air to get a good guesstimate of how many there are. He flew down and said "There are too many to even guess. And they seem to go on for miles." The dark army finally reached them. One by one they took out all the foot soilders. The only ones left were the heros and a few skilled warriors.

Ramun and Kratos stuck next to each other since they fought well together. Cornelius took out the Falcon Blade Edge he recieved from Gromir. Jaffar redied himself. Fisk wiped the sweat of his forehead and took out another knife. Gromir took out a silver Edge, and Sheena mounted to dragon. "If this is going to be our last fight. Let's go out in a blaze of glory. FOR CZARINA!" yelled Robert. The morale of the remaining troops rose.

The dark army surrounded them. Kratos cast a Ragnarok which caused a ring around them and Ramun fortified it with Hitomi. Only twenty were taken out. They could see the warriors on fire and act like they aren't feeling it. Cornelius attacked the army with spear and sword in hand. Fisk jumped from soilder to soilder taking them out. The dragon flew into the air and sent down a hail of fire down onto the dark army and came down on the survivors. Gromir was taking out the weaker ones with his silver edge. Jaffar was attacking the foot soilders. And Robert attacked to paladins.
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I am not good with fights. You guys can add on to it.

At 9/27/06 10:00 AM, Dejanus wrote: I sent a PM to the intruder, as for SSI, you can go with the new addition that you wrote. Good job guys, and next time someone comes here and insults us, dont respond. I will handle it over PM, okay?

I PMed him last night and he didn't know what i meant by him posting on the FE club so i think it must've been an acciedent or soemthing. Anyway, how often can we RPG post again?

At 9/27/06 07:01 PM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote:
I am not good with fights. You guys can add on to it.

Boo-hoo. Do I suddenly not exist? I am not included anywhere.....:'(

I am not good with fights. You guys can add on to it.

The forces of light fought bravely, but they were severly outnumbered by Nergal's men. Defeat seemed inevitable; Slow coming, but it was inevitable. An hour passed and Cornelius could already see the distance in which the forces of light retreated. They were fighting a defensive battle.

Kadrian had managed to find Robert and he and his unit began to make sure Robert wasn't flanked or taken by surprise. The king of Czarina was toward the front of the battle, leading his troops. Ramun and Kratos had ceased casting their sacred weapon spells, as they were running out of energy and their spells didnt seem to be working to full effect. Jaffar did what he could with only one hand and had to be saved a few times by his armour. Sheena and the dragon had retreated behind the front lines becasue they were just too exposed to archers on the frontline.
Fisk's weapon tore apart any enemy who had gaps in their armour but the weapons seemed to be failing him as the battle continued.

Slowly and slowly, the defenders were losing numbers and ground while Nergal's army just seemed to be bolstered by knowing that the Czarian army was on the retreat.

Cornelius tried to judge the enemies numbers again. He could not guess how many, but saw the Czarians at a 10:1 disadvantage....

Kratos retreated behind the frontline for 5 minutes to take a quick break and recompose himself. He wondered why his sacred weapon wasn't being as effective as it shoudl've been. He thought it might have something to do with the darky aura that surrounded the enemy. Before returning to the frontline, he decided to test his theory.
He faced the edge of the battlefield, focusing his spell on some trees in the nearby forest. He cast Ragnarok and a huge lighting bolt came and turned the tree into a burning pillar of flame. He then faced Nergal's army and cast the spell again. A lightning bolt about a tenth of the size as the one that hit the tree sparked down and hit some enemy soldiers, killing 3. He had confirmed his theory.

He looked at the forest to the side of the battlefield and spoke to one of the Czarian generals about his plan. He managed to get someone to withdraw Ramun from the frontline so he could discuss his plan with him. He contacted the king about the plan and told him to slowly start sending men into the forest to retreat. The king agreed once he heard his plan and slowly, the army of light started retreating into the forest.

Kratos knew he wasn't a tactician, but any idiot knows that fire can wipe out any sum of people....
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Hack. Slash. Block. It was all a blur. Robert spun, avoiding a deadly poisoned lance, rode in under his guard, and slammed his blade as hard as he could into the Paladin. He crumpled to the ground in an instant.

Kadrian hacked his way to Robert. "Christian says to fall back! He'll cover us!" As to mark his words, a Light Spear smashed into four Paladins, killing them instantly. "Very well! Let's get moving!"

The rag-tag remnants of the Czarinian army and her allies made their way to the treeline. Nergals forces did not pursue, as they took heavy casualties. Robert and Kadrian approached the high command tent. "So, you guys have a plan?"

The generals of high command cursed, Nergal's army did not follow them into the forest. They needed some way to lure them in.
The majority of the Czarian army had retreated deeper into the forest and only a few intact battalions remained observing Nergal's army on the frontline.
"If they don't follow us in, we'll have to make them chase us", said Robert. He told Kadrian to get his archers ready and any others who could use a bow. He told them to mount themselves on horses and ride by teh enemy, firing arrows at them. He hoped it would make them angry enough to chase the army into the forest.

The mounted archers set off and harassed the enemy. THe majority of Nergal's fronline troops were footsoldier or knights, so they couldn't hurt the archers without putting themselves at risk. The archers werent being very effective, as they were used to firing as a unit and on foot, as opposed to riding by the enemy on horse and firing. THe enemy did not get affected much by this, and the archers were ordered t retreat.

Robert cursed. Kadrians men returned intact, but none of them said they made a kill.
"At least we have time to rest, Nergal's army can't really turn arround and invade elsewhere if we're at his rear." Ramun said. "He can't do anything unless he is sure we are all eliminated. We should set up camp here and focus on defending this forest."

And so the army of light prepared to defend itself in the forest, in a last ditch effort to lure Nergal's army into it...
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Vancha sighed, he had been stuck in the past for a few days now and he had no way of getting back to his time. He had decided to camp outside in the wild, a few 100 metres walk from town to save money on an inn.

From nowhere, a figure approached, it was Azuz (Nergal's brother). "So you have returned Vancha, something bad happen". Vancha told him what had happened and how Eltosian cast him back in time. Azuz was amused. "Vancha, from what i see, the only way back to your time, is to live to it. Think about it, you are back in the past but you know all what will happen in the next 15 years or so. You should use this time to train hard and defeat Nergal when he arrises".

Vancha thought on this for a time and thought that it made sense. He thanked Azuz and asked him why he hated his brother. Azuz replied "Nergal was always greedy, he was always obsessed with power, we were like exact opposites. He always stole from me and now i am just a shadow of the man i once was. " After saying this, he vanished.

Vancha woke up the next morning and calculated that he had about 15 years till Nergal's army would approach the Czarian main. He began training.

I will now post an RP to get us out of the third page.

Nergal held his men back, few of them were rational, most taken entirely by dark energy and tried to charge anyway. With a pshycic command of "HALT", he made them stop in thier tracks. He felt, weaker somehow, as if some of the power he had taken from his brother Azuz was gone. Nergal thought nothing of it and decided to continue anyway.

Nergal's special contengent of assasins moved through the forest and towards the Czarinan camp. They sncuk through thier tents and headed to the tents that housed the leaders of Czarina's military. The night-watchmen had already been killed and the bodies hidden. Nergal's senior assasin, Gosamel, approached the tent of the king and entered...

At 9/28/06 04:07 PM, Dejanus wrote: Nergal's senior assasin, Gosamel, approached the tent of the king and entered...

And was forced back instantly by a storm of blades. A light assassin dropped from the tent's top with a few cohorts.
"You fools, did you really think the king would be left with a guard that easy to beat?"

Kadrian tried to look through the dark clouds to see the stars. It was his favorite thing to do as a child, to go outside at night and count stars until he fell asleep. He still liked doing that...in times of peace. However, no one could count stars through these thick clouds. It even blocked out moonlight, leaving the priests' torches to be the only source of light in the night. He sighed, and cleaned his blade. The last he had seen action had been a stalemate, there were no enemy casualties, seeing as his men were pushed in such a tight clump, that you could barely swing a cat-much less a sword. He heard a racket from the direction of the forest.
"Hmm?"
It couldn't be a host of Nergal, they were traveling too loudly. Two guards stepped up in front of him. They must have heard it too. They stood in a position where their knight armor would most benefit them, and waited. Several horsemen rode in, and-speak of the devil- wore the mark of Nergal.
"What?"
"They must be scouting out our defenses. Let's take 'em out."
The riders were suddenly joined by a bunch of other riders.
"I guess not. Let's go back to the command tent."

"Huh?"
In front of them, were two groups of assassins fighting it out.
"Let them do their thing, we cannot be seen by them."
Kadrian and the guards quietly rushed to a tent where there was no fighting assassins. It was the tent of General Christian.
"General Christian! Robert! There are foes outside!"
Christain threw a spear at Kadrian. Kadrian flinched, but it flew past him, and struck the assassin primed to kill him.
"You need to be more aware of your surroundings."
Christian turned to Robert.
"Go rally the men. There shouldn't be many enemies, if they're making a night raid, it's a hit and run."
"Understood, father."

Kratos was startled by a loud noise outside. He went to check it out. All of a sudden a man coated in black jumped in front of him and attempted to stab him. Kratos jumped back and hit him with an Elthunder and the man fell. Kratos decided he had to check up on everybody.

He went through everybodies tent and couldn't find anybody. "Could they already know?" thought Kratos. All of a sudden he turned around to find Cornelius in battle with several men. Kratos took them out and asked Cornelius what is going on. He said " Assassins are attacking the camp and we need to fight them off." Kratos knew what he had to do.

He ran towards the kings tent in an attempt to protect it. There he could see Robert and Kadrian fighting the assassins. Kratos went up to help them. He stood behind them in an attempt to protect himself since he wore light armor. Everytime Kratos cast Elthunder all the land lit up and everyone could see the assassins.
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Someone continue...

(this is a side event to get Vancha back intot he battle)
15 years had nearly passed and Vancha was nearly back in his own time. He was much stronger from training and Azuz even gave him some of his power. Vancha had unlocked his sacred bow's second technique. It allowed his arrows to soar at his enemy almost instantly, preventing them from dodging the shots.

(this event occurs while the battle was raging)
Vancha had already sensed Nergal's forces teleport to face the main Czarian camp. He set off at a fast pace on his horse toward the battle, he guessed he was a day and a bit's ride from it.

(one day and a bit later)
It was night and smoke could be seen coming from a forest. Vancha went in and found a large camp of Czarian soldiers who told him of what was happening and how they planned to lure Nergal into the forest to burn his troops. THey told him they were at a 10:1 disadvantage and that the king and his generals were to the southern end of the forest.

(Vancha is now back with the main story)
Vancha approached the edge of the forest and saw taht it was being attacked by enemy assasins. He summoned some of the power Azuz gave to him and created a circular sheild around himself. He drew his bow and started aiding the Czarian soldiers in disposing of Nergal's assasins. Some assasins leapt at Vancha from the trees, but bounced off the sheild he had around himself. Vancha easily dispatched of them with his sacred bow.

Azuz had told him alot about how the sacred weapons worked. He was told that they will not work to their full effect when they are near Nergal because Nergal's prescense zaps their energy. Azuz told him to counter this by casting the sheild, to protect the weapon and yourself.

The majoriy of assasins had retreated and by dawn, they were sure that all of them had been killed or had retreated. No one recognised Vancha, as he had aged 15 years, but when he told his story they beleived him.
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Nergal cursed. He had hoped that his assasins would have killed enough enemies for him to summon Khalenth (or however you spell it)....

He needed another plan....

Everyone was shocked when they heard Vancha's story. He looked different but his friends could tell it was him since he gave off the same eneregy. Vancha taught them how to use the shield technique and how it works only when you have unlocked the sacred weapons second ability.

Morning came and they set out for battle. The army was still there standing at the edge of the forest. They were like zombies, never needing to eat or sleep. It is like their humanity was stripped away from them. They redied themselves for a fight.

Kratos' weapon had started to feel stronger. It seems he has unlocked it's second ability. He remembered how Vancha told him to use the spell. He preformed the chant and an energy surrounded him. He took out his spell book and cast Ragnarok. It let out a fierce thunderbolt which took out over twenty of them. Kratos relized that the second ability was that it was much faster and stronger.

Fisk was bobbing and weaving out of attacks and killing anyone with any holes in thier armor. Gromir took out two silver edges and ran straight to a big group of them and started to slash them up. Sheena and the dragon stayed back since they were both succeptible to archers. The rest of the group was taking out anyone that they could. The sacred weapons were weakened except for Kratos and Vancha's since they ulocked the second ability.

Nice chaps guys, I am really liking all of the development in the story. I will post every day untill the end, which is now PERMANENTLY set at next Saturday, 11:59pm. I will post ending it. Keep the dream alive.

Also, anyone going to make us a Freewebs or something? Hell, I would take a half-ass Myspace at this point.

By Sunday do you mean the one coming in a days time(maybe 2 days where you are), or do you mean another whole week Sunday.

I've never tried using freewebs before. I can use some basic HTML but nothing flashy enough to make a decent looking webpage so i'll try this template of theirs. I'm just got experiment with it now and stuff so yeah.

At 9/29/06 11:06 PM, Dragonman11 wrote: By Sunday do you mean the one coming in a days time(maybe 2 days where you are), or do you mean another whole week Sunday.

I meant in a week, I have big plans and want some time to fulfill them.

I've never tried using freewebs before. I can use some basic HTML but nothing flashy enough to make a decent looking webpage so i'll try this template of theirs. I'm just got experiment with it now and stuff so yeah.

I hate to make you do it, you do so much. If anyone else will, let them, you already do way too much for this place in my opinion.

Gah, since you have your heart set on it, I'll give it a shot, Dej. I'll make this, "webpage" for the crew, since I too know HTML.

There better be a lot of South Carolinian cookies waiting for me.

At 9/29/06 11:22 PM, HitTheTarget wrote: Gah, since you have your heart set on it, I'll give it a shot, Dej. I'll make this, "webpage" for the crew, since I too know HTML.

I really apreaciate it, man. The crew needs a presence outside our thread.

There better be a lot of South Carolinian cookies waiting for me.

Once again, if you are willing to drive down here, I will give them to you.

At 9/29/06 11:19 PM, Dejanus wrote:

I meant in a week, I have big plans and want some time to fulfill them.

Ah, sounds Evil

I hate to make you do it, you do so much. If anyone else will, let them, you already do way too much for this place in my opinion.

At 9/29/06 11:22 PM, HitTheTarget wrote: Gah, since you have your heart set on it, I'll give it a shot, Dej. I'll make this, "webpage" for the crew, since I too know HTML.

I think i'll yield to HTT then, but im still gonna screw round with this freewebs thing, its got me interested. I never knew about it till you suggested it.

There better be a lot of South Carolinian cookies waiting for me.

lol

I just made a site but it is not finished yet. I will need some art to upload to it.
Link

What the? Where is everybody. It has been nearly a day and no one has posted here yet. Where are you people?

At 9/30/06 06:03 PM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: What the? Where is everybody. It has been nearly a day and no one has posted here yet. Where are you people?

Sleeping. Working. Having some element of a personal life. You know, that kind of stuff.

At 9/30/06 06:06 PM, HitTheTarget wrote:

At 9/30/06 06:03 PM, Some-Stupid-Idiot wrote: What the? Where is everybody. It has been nearly a day and no one has posted here yet. Where are you people?

Sleeping. Working. Having some element of a personal life. You know, that kind of stuff.

Pretty much, I get the feeling we will speed up a bit tonight. A lot of our members are in countries with some really different time zones, and others are busy. We get all of our posts at night.

Seeing no one has posted about what happened to Eltosian i think i might add a bit seeing Vancha fired his arrow at him.
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Eltosian stood beside Nergal. Neither of them spoke as they watched the minor skirmish. Eltosian had been wounded by Vancha's arrow and was not in the state to fight. After he cast Vancha back to the past, he had fled the camp injured and rejoined Nergal's army.

Suddenly, amiss the silence, Nergal spoke to Eltosian.
"Eltosian, it seems that you did not permantanly dispose of that pesky nomad"
Eltosian took a close look at the battle. An expression of disbelief showed on his face. Vancha was tearing apart Nergal's soldiers and looked like he had gained years of combat experience.

"It seems by casting him into the past, you forgot that he would come back the long way, you fool", said Nergal. He continued, "Now the fool has taught his friends the full potential of the sacred weapons".

Eltosian felt disapointed, but Nergal's tone changed. "No matter", he said.
"My dream is nearly whole, the faster those fools kill my men, the sooner Khaleth can be commanded and victory will be mine!"

Icharo emerged and stood beside Nergal... Nergal told him to get his generals.
Several minutes later, all of Nergal's generals were with him. He spoke.
"My fine generals, long have you served me and proven your worth. Victory is near, for I have a plan"......

I'll leave that for Dejanus to think of..... (Dejanus, you can disregard this whole post if you want, if it messes up what you were planning).

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Anyway, this will be my last post for a few days, im going away for a bit. I've uploaded another summary update and i look forward to seeing the website when its done. I should be back Wednesday night, my time..... Have fun.

Robert lept foward on his horse, and struck down a swordmaster with his lance. He noted the Silver Lance was a vast improvement on the iron one he used to carry around, as was the Silver Sword. A Paladin rose up to face him, and he shoved his lance in the lance holster he kept on his saddle, drew his sword, and engaged him.

Robert finally bested him, as his father pulled up. "We can't keep fighting like this." he paused, turned, and picked a gargoyle out of the sky. It fell to the ground with a piercing shriek. He went back to what he was saying as calmly as he swatted a fly. "The men are tired, we're grossly outnumbered, and soon to be surrounded."

Robert dodged a fighter's axe, and lopped his head off. "I sent for reinforcements! They should be arriving anytime now!" As if his words were a cue, a man yelled, "Look alive! Unidentified Flying objects!" Christian frowned, and pulled out a telescope. "Riders. From Yelena. Did you know of this?" Robert shook his head.

Below the Pegasus riders were more of the scattered Czarinian Armies, as well as troops from other nations. They inserted in to the mass of fighters, and the scales evened out. The winged horses fought gargoyles overhead, and when they could get away with it, dived into the mass and picked off soldiers.

Lufis approached the General, along with several Royal guard. "Greetings, General...?" The man finished the sentence. " Spears. Pleased to meet you, your highness." The Royal Guard and the two knights that flanked the general exchanged dirty looks, but that was all they could do.

"Shall we dispose of the pleasantries, and return to battle?"

Since more troops had arrived, Kadrian was taking a much-needed break at the back of the lines. He had several long cuts down his torso, and a particularly deep cut in his cheek. It had been healed so there would not be much of a scar, but the healers didn't have the time to take care of his other wounds, and Kadrian had given away his vulnerary. The pain of the cuts was not very bad, but it was still excruciating. He could feel his blood leaking out, trying to coagulate into much-needed scabs. It wasn't scabbing over, though, and Kadrian couldn't think of a more pathetic death than by bleeding to death from wounds that could be healed. Quite stupid of him.
"All of the healers are at the front line, I can't go back up there. Robert's up there too, for some reason."
Kadrian couldn't understand knights. Their nobility and courteousy confused him, but he was just beginning as a royal guard, and had already been told to wash his mouth out at least forty times, for his breath smelled. Kadrian sighed.
"To hell with it, I might as well go back up there. I can hope in one hand that a healer will come, and shit in the other, which one will fil up first?!"
Kadrian was obviously not going to try that, but just followed it's meaning. He unsheathed the silver sword, starting to tarnish and rust from exposure to blood and bodily fluids.
"I need to polish this."
Kadrian sheathed the sword again, and ran into the mass.

"Hey! Sake!! I have a wound!"
Sake was taking care of someone else. He was right up at the line, and was constantly summoning phantoms to cover him.
"Sake!! I'll cover you if you heal me!"
Sake obviously heard this, because he stopped summoning and focused on his patient. The poor soldier was really bad, probably just clinging to life. Kadrian ran up beside Sake's phantom protector and started slashing.
"Hey, what's your name, phantom?"
Kadrian said jokingly. He knew it wouldn't answer, for it only did the will of it's master, which was killing bad guys, right now. Kadrian once again paid attention to the battle and stabbed a mage who was about to try and conjure a thunder upon Sake's patient. Sake's magical resistance was too great for him to harm, so he was trying to kill someone else. Asshole. Kadrian kicked the mage off of his sword, pulling out of his body. With the same move, he cut the tendon of a hero charging up. The hero, no longer able to manuever his wrist, put his sword into the ground and kneeled, accepting defeat.
"Nergal's troops have a shred of honor? This must be a mercenary."
Thought Kadrian. He let the valiant mercenary retreat, and focused upon a rival myrmidon. This was more dangerous. As a fellow soldier of swordplay, he knew this soldier knew where his sword would do the most damage. The swordsman lunged, angling his sword towards the space in Kadrian's ribcage, for his heart. Kadrian leapt sideways, let the sword graze his stomach, and let out a lash with his blade. He pierced his enemy's heart in the same way the rival swordsman had tried to do to him. His enemy crumpled, quickly bleeding to death. Then, he noticed a face he though he had come upon far too muchly as a coincidence.
"Hey, Robert. Need help?"
"I need every single piece of-"
Robert dodged an incoming arrow.
"-help I can get."
Kadrian assumed a position on Robert's flank, cutting the hapless fool who ignored him.
"Kadrian! Your wounds!"
Oh.
Sake ran up as quickly as he could in his thick robe layering. He chanted a few words, his heal staff glowed slightly, and the pain and cuts disappeared.
"Great, thanks Sake."
"I live to serve mankind."
As Sake paced off to engage a Druid, Kadrian encountered another adept swordsman.
"Here we go again..."

Kratos and Ramun were standing side by side using their sacred weapons. Since Vancha showed them how to do the barrier and Kratos' second ability was unlocked Ramun stuck close so the barrier would protect him. Kratos and Ramun cast a simultaneous Hitomi, Ragnarok into a group of archers. Their resistance was low and they fell easily.

Ramun looked up and could see Cornelius fighting along side his mother in an attempt to protect her. Ramun's book started to glow heavily and Ramun could feel power surging from it. He had unlocked his second ability. He threw his hand down to make the barrier and cast his spell. A large fire barrier surrounded him. It was to protect him from physical attacks so he wouldn't have to worry about archers as much. "Nice on ya." said Kratos as he cast bolting at a distant healer. "Thanks." said Ramun casting elthunder at a knight.

Gromir with his silver blade easily took out several bandits who tried to sneak into the fight. He took his blade out of the last bandit and used that momentum to stab a knight through the armpit of his armor.

Fisk could be seen running up onto enemy horses and slitting the back of the users throut. He was to fast for axes and spears to hit him so he was pretty set. He saw a pikeman and jumped onto his spear and took him out. He continued like this.

Sheena dismounted the dragon and preceeded to heal all the wounded soilders she could find. The dragon stood by and guarded. "Hey doesn't that dragon remind you of something?" asked Elostian to Nergal. "I believe it is that dark dragons child." he replied.