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At 1/31/07 06:51 PM, Kurofelis wrote:

Jeez, finally. Thought the wait would never end.

Nor did I. I am LIVID now that Dej is back. Now we can finally continue the Tignir story! Yippee!!!

At 1/31/07 06:47 PM, Dejanus wrote:

YOUR BACK !!!!!!

I feel sorry for you, Andrea'i gonna beat you over the head with her hammer.

At 1/31/07 06:47 PM, Dejanus wrote:
Take your pessimistic side and bitch slap it in the face, I would never leave you guys hanging.

Damn, right before he came back and everything! (I always did have terrible timing.) Welcome back, buddy!

ReOreg argh, HTT.

There is a cliffhanger waiting to be rescued in Sillpar!

At 1/31/07 08:30 PM, Kurofelis wrote: ReOreg argh, HTT.

There is a cliffhanger waiting to be rescued in Sillpar!

And a rescuing shall commence!

What the hell does the top sentence say?

Raphael drug his lance out. He motioned for the party to get down, and they complied. The knights, numbering four, clanked over, alert with lances ready. "Alright, where are those pricks? I've been looking forward to a little lance work." said one.

"Shut up, private, and keep sharp!" reprimanded another, most likely the sergeant. "They should be somewhere here!" Raphael nodded at Ressen, who prepared his sword. As the knights entered the woods, Raphael signalled to the Sages, also hidden. They nodded. Then Raphel and Ressen jumped on one knight each.

Ressen, being able to manuever his sword much easier than Raphael's lance, quickly stabbed the knight in his throat in between his massive chest plate and helmet. Bright crimson blood spat out, as he yanked it out of his defeated foe.

Raphael's enemy was a little more prepared, and tossed him off before he could bring his lance to bear. As the knight stood over him to deliver the final blow, he jabbed up, and wedged his lance in between his leg plates. As he fell to one knee in agony, Raphael kicked him over(very hard, don't try this) He stole his foes lance, and drove it through his neck.

As the remaining knights were preparing to shout for reinforcements, two Sages performed a brutal Sillpar tactic. They jumped behind the knights, and wove the magic nets they were infamous for...over the knights head. They tightened it, cutting off the knights cry for help. With a triumphant expression, the Sages closed their fists, closing the net abruptly, cleanly dicing up the knights heads without a sound.

"Ambush successful, sir." said one of them. Raphael smirked, and said, "Good. Now we need to get moving before the whole camp is stirred." Raphael looked at Ressen, and said, "The Sages stay with you. I'll release the prisoners, and retreat a safe distance. At my signal, unleash hell."

It was hard, tedious work, since he only released small groups, but once those small groups retrieved other small groups, it soon multiplied. After an hour, the army was armed, and ready on the other side of the forest. Raphael could see the sentry entering the empty cages. "Damn! They'll know soon!" he waved to a sniper at his side.

Without words, he knew. He lit his arrow with his torch, and fired it into the air.

At 1/31/07 08:56 PM, HitTheTarget wrote:

At 1/31/07 08:30 PM, Kurofelis wrote: ReOreg argh, HTT.
What the hell does the sentence say?

"Your uncle."

Good night.

Now Dej. You ARE almost done with the "big" chapter right? Since you have had about a month and a half to work out all the kinks right?

At 2/1/07 12:07 PM, Lopezinator wrote: Now Dej. You ARE almost done with the "big" chapter right? Since you have had about a month and a half to work out all the kinks right?

Nope, I lost the file the first time my internet crashed.

By the way, I'm going to have to drop out of this RP cycle, not enough time. Anyone wish to take over my character?

So this is the infamous Dejanus.
Glad yer back. Now we can focus more on Tignir, right?

PS: You have an XBOX 360? Cool!

At 2/1/07 04:05 PM, LtSurge659 wrote: So this is the infamous Dejanus.

Yes it is. Now get on your knees and... well... do what comes naturally for you.

Glad yer back. Now we can focus more on Tignir, right?

I guess so. But since Dej has dropped out someone will have to take over. And for even more added retardidity (I know it's not a word) we can't just kill him off and continue because without him the whole entire plot in Tignir will fall apart.

Can I kill Dejanus? Also welcome back Dejanus. Perhpas Dejanus character can be in an ambush force and I kill her. Please. I have always wanted to take out a main character:D

At 2/1/07 12:54 PM, Dejanus wrote:
By the way, I'm going to have to drop out of this RP cycle, not enough time.

Not enough time on the computer to type one up, or not enough time to do something else? I feel like I'm asking a dumb question, so feel free to give me a dumb answer.

Argh, I based the entire plot around Andrea being possessed by Khalenth (That means you can't kill her, propoganda. Besides, what are the chances of you, a level 5 theif, killing a level 6 or 7 Valkyrie? We do take those things into account.

Hate to disagree Kuro but I do think my RP character not my profile is higher than level 5. I mean he has taken some serious battles.

At 2/1/07 06:53 PM, Kurofelis wrote:.

Argh, I based the entire plot around Andrea being possessed by Khalenth (That means you can't kill her, propoganda. Besides, what are the chances of you, a level 5 theif, killing a level 6 or 7 Valkyrie? We do take those things into account.

Did you have to fucking give that away? I wanted it to be a surprise. It's not like you couldn't get SSI's lazy ass in here to help out with it.

What I meant was I do not have the time to spend three or so hours on a chapter like I normally do.

At 2/1/07 06:56 PM, Dejanus wrote:
Did you have to fucking give that away? I wanted it to be a surprise.

Give what away? You mean...that?

No, of course not. Lopez and Propoganda were RPing, and I noticed that they said 'Hillis' in the attacking army description, and I corrected them. Hillis never attacked Tignus, and never will.

If you're talking about Khalenth, I'm pretty sure everyone knew that. Besides, no one knows if she's possesed or when she will be.

At 2/1/07 07:11 PM, Kurofelis wrote:

No, of course not. Lopez and Propoganda were RPing,

Yah we need to discuss what we're now supposed to do over PMs as not to give anything ELSE away. Whatever that else may be since I don't know.

So who is taking over for Dej's character? If we kill him, there is a chance we can save the plot, but it would be a pretty bland death. Unless of course Yoarn or someone big in T.E.D.S. kills him.

Well, I can't take over Dej's character, since I've gotten so into mine!

Ch. IV

The unknown force had begun its retreat. Corporal Sato's orders resounded in the minds of his men. They began to cut through the stragglers.

" You too, boy!" yelled the corporal. Surge aknowledged, and paced to the front lines. One straggler of exceptional skill remained on the battlefield, a knight, no less than 12th level.
Surge challenged him.

" You? Beat ME?" he bagan to laugh. " C'mon. If yer that good, then show me. I've been dying for a real one-on-one match anyway." Surge declared. The knight paused, puzzled at this man's fearless inpression." Fool. It is beyond words. Let us begin."

The knight lunged at Surge with his steel lance. Despite his attack's irregulrly high speed, Surge was able to dodge it by mere centimeters. Surge immediately switched to counter his enemy's move. The attack landed, but with little effect. The knight knew this and pounded Surge with his detatchable shield. The blunt force echoed through Surge's body, forcing him back four meters! Blood slightly oozing from his wound, Surge got back up and calmed himself. ( Dammit. This is not as easy as I had anticipated.) he thought.

Surge took a deep breath, despite his chest wound.
"Are you ready to give up, boy? We may have lost the battle, but at least I'll have a prize to compensate!"
" You talk a lotta shit. How 'bout you come out of that armour yer hiding in?" replied Surge.
The knight laughed. " Eat me. How 'bout you take my blade as well!"

The knight was even faster now. In under six seconds, he was across the four meters, and right on top of Surge. His lance plunged forward, Surge lucked out and once again narrowly avoided the tip of the blade. Then, the knight shifted the lance and cut Surge with the blade! Blood rushed from the cut, and Surge had to strain to get away. He was running. The knight was on his tail. It was now a desperate flee with Surge. He continued to get grazed by the knight's attacks as he ran.
" Haha! Run, coward, run! I'll still get you!" the knight yelled.

* What are you doing?! Your fate is set! You can't die, now. Face your opponent! You haven't even drawn me out yet!* came that same disembodied voice from before.

( What... who are you? How can you talk to me?) Surge directed.
* Are you kidding? Haven't you heard my cries, earlier? I am ______! What's with the iron sword you keep using in my stead? It has no soul. I'm the sword in your heart! NOW DRAW ME! You know my name, so do it!*

Surge stopped running. ( I didn't hear your name, but until I can hear it clearly, can I still borrow your powers?)
* Sure. Besides, I am a part of you.*

The knight liesurely trotted to Surge.
" Good. Now you can die, and I'll claim your head!" he stated.
"..."
Surge turned around. " Sorry. I can't die yet. I apologize fer not fightin' right. But now, you'll like me."

Surge drew his iron sword, though there was a certain aura to it, now. The knight smirked.
" Whatever. Die!" The knight pushed his lance.

Surge ducked and dodged it cleanly. " Now I've got you!" the knight yelled, as he shifted his lance. At the second he shifted it, Surge was not there. The knight turned; took a clean shot from Surge's sword, but instead of just grazing his armour, the sword pierced it! The incredible sting of the unnatural heat emanating from Surge's sword shot through the knight's spine. The knight was wide-eyed.( Gwaa.... s-static? What magic is this?) he thought. The sting grew in intensity, even as Surge pulled out his sword. There was blood everywhere. the knight sprawled. " Curse you... boy..." he wheezed. Surge bent over the knight.

By now, the unknown enemy army had almost disappeared. Only a relief crew was left. The clerics rushed to the knight.

One questioned Surge. " Are you with Tignir? I hope you know, sir, that medics are to be unharmed..."
" Are ya kidding? Of course, I wouldn't... cut..ya..."
Unbeknownst to Surge, his previous wounds had begun to carry weight. The cleric looked at him as he sheathed his sword. Then, she looked around, as if to check if anyone was looking. Then, she quickly gave Surge a bag of vulnerary. " Thank you for not killing this soldier..." She turned and paced to the knight. She and the small relief crew picked up the knight upon removing his armour; ran off, to the entrance to the forest.

Surge imbibed a vulnerary; took a look at the girl. She looked not older than 18 years. ( Thank... you..?)

He then glanced at the damaged armour adjacent to him. He could not believe his eyes. The insignia, inside the armour was surprisingly familiar...

( Is that... HILLIS?!) He passed out from fatigue.
* You finally at least half-released me, idiot. Now sleep. Your country still needs you...* the voice emerged, gentle.
There was a slight breeze in the air.
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Did I reveal it the right way? Lil help, plz.

At 2/2/07 07:23 PM, LtSurge659 wrote:
Did I reveal it the right way? Lil help, plz.

Reveal what?

For future reference, I think I will take all the chapters written untill now and save them to Word, my Alienware has about enough memory and RAM space to run 500,000 copies of Doom 3 at the same time on optimum settings, so it won't clutter me up at all. I will start tomorrow. If you need a chapter pulled up, I will copy and paste the word file in a post.

At 2/2/07 07:30 PM, Kurofelis wrote:

At 2/2/07 07:23 PM, LtSurge659 wrote:
Did I reveal it the right way? Lil help, plz.

Reveal what?

What about Hillis? Was I supposed to reveal that they attacked, or am I behind schedule?

At 2/2/07 07:41 PM, LtSurge659 wrote:

What about Hillis? Was I supposed to reveal that they attacked, or am I behind schedule?

They never attacked. As I said, whatever Tignus soldiers have defined as from 'other nations' are in fact gangs, bandits, loan sharks, criminals, prisoners, syndicates, supporters of a rebellion that your characters will not know about for some time, for a cause I shall not reveal to anyone but one person.

One week back into school and things are getting intense already lol. That means less time reading and posting on the BBS.... I'll try post when i can.

A hint to you all out there still in school, grade 12 will hit you hard if your past 11 years at school were bludges lol.

Ya school gets me out of the house for a while, but I find a lil time to dedicate to this club. It does get annoying with my algebra II teacher being crazy. She sends grades to parents every frickin' week.

At 1/31/07 11:47 AM, Lopezinator wrote:
I saw a preview where there was a battle scene, so I don't know what you're talking about.

On that preview I saw no battle scene, so I was basing my opinion on that.

At 2/4/07 05:58 PM, LtSurge659 wrote:

On that preview I saw no battle scene, so I was basing my opinion on that.

Well, that's not the same preview then obviously.

But of course. Are there previews on YouTube? Or better yet, which one did you see? I'd like to see the battle scenes.

At 2/4/07 07:12 PM, LtSurge659 wrote: But of course. Are there previews on YouTube? Or better yet, which one did you see? I'd like to see the battle scenes.

I believe it was actually a link in this club. I can't remember where though, you'd have to look.

Ok well since I cant kill Dejs RP character now can I do it if it ever needs to be done. I would be like so cool.

At 2/4/07 09:15 PM, PropagandaClock wrote: Ok well since I cant kill Dejs RP character now can I do it if it ever needs to be done. I would be like so cool.

1- As I said, the chances of you, a level 5 theif, killing an around level 7 Valkyrie, are extremely slim to none.

2- Why in the world would you need to kill Dej's character? You certainly aren't enemies.