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LittleWashu

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:11 PM

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I wrote this story a few days ago and thought I should share it with the rest of the BBS I hope you enjoyClass today is the day that will determine your final grade so I hope you got your #2 pencils. Teacher I forgot my Pencil. Ok Larry you will have to stay after class because of this for your make up exam unless you want to fail. Larry put his head on the desk until the class was over. Everyone who forgot their Pencils say after class everyone else can go home and have a nice summer. Larry has to say after school with the Teacher! When the rest of the class was gone, the teacher then locked the door.

Not Larry it is time for you make up exam. Ok Mr. Yoai where is the exam? Right in front of you my favorite. Mr. Yoai took off his suit to reveal an extremely tight Leather suit that showed everything from his muscular crest and arms all the way down to his 11 inch penis. Larry wasn't sure about his sexually at all so he didn't freak out but instead stared at his teacher's Body. Wow Mr. Yoai you are handsome and sexy. Thank you Larry now for the first part of your test you have to so me the proper technique for giving a man head. Ok Mr. Yoai here goes nothing.

Larry opened the Zipper to Mr. Yoai's Leather suit, then instantly he began sucking off his teacher. The minute Larry started sucking off his Teacher, Mr. Yoai Penis grow to 7 of its 11 inches. “Man this student really must love sucking my Penis I haven't felt this much pleasure in a while" Mr. Yoai couldn't hold his moans back any longer so he began to let out Soft moans. This Moaning only motivated Larry to do better. So Larry began to take in more of his Teacher's Penis into his mouth while sucking on it harder. This Pleasure caused his teacher's Penis to grow to its greatest size. Larry continued deep throat his teacher penis like it was nothing Larry Had pride in his skills so he wouldn't let up.

Oh Larry you give the Best Head I have ever had! That is it suck me until I explode in your mouth! Larry silently obeyed his Teacher's request and continued sucking him off. After about 10 minutes of sucking his teacher off, Mr. Yoai finally came inside of Larry’s mouth. He came for what seemed like an eternity but it reality it was only 2 minutes. Larry swallowed all the cum his teacher let out of his Penis then Suck him dry until he got every drop. You taste like cotton candy Mr. Yoai! Ok the first part of your test you passed now for the last part off your test. What is it Mr. Yoai? Take your Shorts and your boxers off now! Larry obeyed. Wow Mr. Yoai you are hard again! I am still young I recover quickly.

Larry didn't think his Teacher's Penis would fit into his butt hole so he did something he saw on the internet called goatse. He used his hands to rip open his butt hole so it would be wide enough for his teacher's Penis to fit in. Larry had stuffed things into his butt hole into the past but nothing as big as his Teacher's Penis. But he was willing to give it a try but it wasn't for the grade but just for fun now in his mind. Thank
You Larry I will have to give you extra credit for that. Now here I come! Mr. Yoai got the first 5 inches of his penis into Larry's 18 year old ass without a problem. Larry face was more red then a perfectly ripe apple. Come on Mr. Yoai I want all of your 11 inches in my butt! Oh really? Then I shall give you all 11 inches! Mr. Yoai then pushed the rest of his penis into Larry's ass then they stopped and relaxed for 10 seconds before Mr. Yoai started violently thrusting in and Out of Larry's ass.

THAT IS IT MY MR YOAI RIGHT THERE FUCK THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF MY ASS! Don't worry I will I love the way your tight Butt hole feels around my huge penis. Larry's Screams and moans got louder and louder for the next 20 minutes until Mr. Yoai was near his climax. You are too tight I am Cumming. Please spray it in my Butt hole and don't hold back! Within 5 seconds Mr. Yoai released his load into Larry's Butt hole. Final part of your Test you passed Larry you get an A+ in this class. Thanks Mr. Yoai I was hoping for that. Larry had cum leaking out of his ass for about 1 minute. When it was finished leaking he licked it all up from the floor. Go use the bathroom and clean yourself off. Ok Mr. Yoai I hope we can do this again sometime!
it. Oh the rating for this story is for mature readers only so don't curse me out if you are offended because i warned you. So please tell me what you think of it


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:14 PM

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what the FUCK.

3/10 it was really hard to read and understand and it was fucking GROSS

send me a sexy PM

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:16 PM

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what the fuck was that. I just skimmed it and i was disgusted.


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LittleWashu

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:18 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:14 PM, Seasons- wrote: what the FUCK.

3/10 it was really hard to read and understand and it was fucking GROSS

sorry about the beginning when I pasted the story my opening rating got missed in with the story -_- but I did say that this was for mature readers only


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LittleAfro

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:18 PM

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Needs more cock.


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:18 PM

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Wow... That was horrible :|

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:19 PM

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Needs more SBC.


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:22 PM

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That was horrible.


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LittleWashu

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:23 PM

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I would like to know how could I improve it for those who read the whole thing? please tell me


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:23 PM

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The sad part is i could see it all..

YOU DIDN'T WARN ME TILL THE FUCKING END!!!

Seriously, if u woulda told me that he was 18 and technically leagal i woulda left in a second.

Now if he was 14 tottally different story.

umm 1/5.

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:24 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:23 PM, Littlewashu wrote: I would like to know how could I improve it for those who read the whole thing? please tell me

By giving up writing anything sexual related.

You're no Earfetish.

The Newgrounds O-Ren-Ishii but with a nicer smile and still alive

Please read, leave constructive criticism, make a girl happy. Thanks :)

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:26 PM

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errr what the hell, that was pretty bad


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:26 PM

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That which does not kill us makes us stranger

P.S don't forget there is also girls on NG.K

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:27 PM

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Littlewashu..... you sick fuck.

"THAT IS IT MY MR YOAI RIGHT THERE FUCK THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF MY ASS! "


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LittleWashu

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:29 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:27 PM, Unopened_Wound wrote: Littlewashu..... you sick fuck.

"THAT IS IT MY MR YOAI RIGHT THERE FUCK THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF MY ASS! "

what is the matter with a little guy on guy action?


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:36 PM

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How can you people not appreciate this? This was truly a work of art. Kudos to you Washu!

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Sarai

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:38 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:36 PM, MoonClock wrote: How can you people not appreciate this? This was truly a work of art. Kudos to you Washu!

Because Earfetish writes the same content, but ten times better. EG with formatting and proper sentences :p

The Newgrounds O-Ren-Ishii but with a nicer smile and still alive

Please read, leave constructive criticism, make a girl happy. Thanks :)

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:41 PM

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What is wrong with you?

Hello, matey.

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LittleWashu

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:42 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:38 PM, Turandot wrote:
At 7/10/06 05:36 PM, MoonClock wrote: How can you people not appreciate this? This was truly a work of art. Kudos to you Washu!
Because Earfetish writes the same content, but ten times better. EG with formatting and proper sentences :p

Well I am sorry for not being Earfetish, but I tried my best with this one. Also I won't take that advice and quit I love to write all sorts of things I will just use this as reseach so I can get better and maybe one day be better then Earfetish!


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:44 PM

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\that story made my tiny nipples hard.


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:46 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:38 PM, Turandot wrote:
At 7/10/06 05:36 PM, MoonClock wrote: How can you people not appreciate this? This was truly a work of art. Kudos to you Washu!
Because Earfetish writes the same content, but ten times better. EG with formatting and proper sentences :p

Opinion.

Personally I find earfetish's stories to be crap.


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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:49 PM

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It wasn't very articulate.
Expand your vocabulary. And a spellcheck or two wouldn't go amiss.

Other than that. Yuck.


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i dont think it was gay enough
if the teacher was really enjoying larry that much he would had givin him a reach around

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:52 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:18 PM, Littlewashu wrote: but I did say that this was for mature readers only

That made me laugh out loud you fucking hypocrite.

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LittleWashu

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At 7/10/06 05:49 PM, RampantBunnyLove wrote: It wasn't very articulate.
Expand your vocabulary. And a spellcheck or two wouldn't go amiss.

Other than that. Yuck.

did that with spell check but it isn't perfect you know the computer can't think like you and me >_< as for the vocabulary thanks for the tip sorry my story didn't please you :'(


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At 7/10/06 05:52 PM, Littlewashu wrote: did that with spell check but it isn't perfect you know the computer can't think like you and me >_< as for the vocabulary thanks for the tip sorry my story didn't please you :'(

Man on man gay porn has never really been my thang really.


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LittleWashu

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Posted at: 7/10/06 05:59 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:55 PM, RampantBunnyLove wrote:
At 7/10/06 05:52 PM, Littlewashu wrote: did that with spell check but it isn't perfect you know the computer can't think like you and me >_< as for the vocabulary thanks for the tip sorry my story didn't please you :'(
Man on man gay porn has never really been my thang really.

I see Maybe next time I will do a Yuri one instead of a Yaoi one.


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At 7/10/06 05:59 PM, Littlewashu wrote:
I see Maybe next time I will do a Yuri one instead of a Yaoi one.

Oh sweet Jesus yes

yeah i'm 14

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LittleWashu

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Posted at: 7/10/06 06:12 PM

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At 7/10/06 05:49 PM, HellboundNinja wrote: i dont think it was gay enough
if the teacher was really enjoying larry that much he would had givin him a reach around

I wasn't trying to go all out with this one but thanks for the tip I will have to kick it up a level or 2 next time


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Thats fucking disgusting man...


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