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What would you guys rate both my parts out of 10?

9/10

i don't think this collab is living up to the greatness of "stairway to heaven"
. who evers running this collab.. you need to go find way better animators

look at jokeys drawing...

I think this guy is right. Sort of. Most of the parts so far are good, but a few are bad

Masterswordman, i hate to say it, but your work so far isn't very good. The first one is ok, but the second one...,..... look at some drawing tutorials for water...

At 7/16/06 12:10 AM, Chalis wrote: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!! I finished part 22. Once again, set it to low quality.
Part 22

Whoo! That rocks!

I wasn't really considering joining this, but my love for this song has got me going. Are there any small parts that are open?

At 7/16/06 01:41 AM, Hoeloe wrote: Masterswordman, i hate to say it, but your work so far isn't very good. The first one is ok, but the second one...,..... look at some drawing tutorials for water...

I know the waves suck. Maybe i'll just get rid of them.

Sorry I havent been on lately, Ive been busy doing my parts, I have nearly finished my basic version and i will show you guys when its finished

Masterswordman, dont neccesarily get rid of the waves, just make them come towads the shore, and add a smoother overlapping effect on the sea gong over the shore.

Chalis, great use of fbf and the artwork is great - 9/10

This is all I could come up with for this part.

Chorus 3

Possibly finished solo intro?? : http://www.freewebs...ckey_1/solointro.htm

At 7/16/06 03:16 PM, Masterswordman wrote: This is all I could come up with for this part.

Chorus 3

Remember the hair again...

Jockey, THAT IS FUCKING AMAZING!

I'd like to try part 13 and 16.

I'll post one of the parts when I finish one to see if they're worth it, k?

Parts remaining:

Intro (Hoeloe, this is for title sequence)

Part 1: There's a Lady who's sure, all that glitters is gold, and she's buying a Stairway to heaven (Hoeloe)

Part 2: When she gets there she knows if the stores are all closed (Fallen Anzel)

Part 3: with a word she can get what she came for (Fallen Anzel)

Part 4: ooohhh and she's buying a stairway to heaven (Fallen Anzel / Ichimanako)

Part 5: theres a sign on the wall, but she wants to be sure

Part 6: cos you know sometimes words have two meanings

Part 7: in a tree by the brook theres a song bird who sings

Part 8: sometimes all of our thoughts are misgiven (Hoeloe)

Chorus 1: Lyrics: ooh, and it makes me wonder, ooh, and it makes me wonder (Masterswordman)

Part 9: theres a feelin i get, when i look too the west and my spirit is crying for leaving

Part 10: in my thoughts i have seen, rings of smoke through the trees and the voices of those who stand looking

Chorus 2: Lyrics: ooh, and it makes me wonder, ooh, it really makes me wonder (Masterswordman)

Part 11: and its whispered that soon if we all call the tune then the piper will lead us to reason

Part 12: and a new day will dawn, for those who stand long and the forests will echo with laughter

Chorus 3: Lyrics: oh oh oh oh ohh oooohh (Masterswordman)

Drum intro (Ichimanako)

Part 13: if theres a bustle in your hedgerow, don't be alarmed now (Wuflz)

Part 14: its just a spring clean for the may queen (Ichimanako)

Part 15: yes there are two paths you can go by, but in the long run (Hoeloe)

Part 16: theres still time to change the road you're on (Wuflz)

Chorus 4: Lyrics: and it makes me wonder, ohhhhhohoohh (Masterswordman)

Drum intro 2 (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 17: you're head is hummin and it won't go, in case you don't know

Part 18: the piper's callin you to join him

Part 19: dear lady can you hear the wind blow, and did you know? (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 20: your stairway lies on the whisperin' wind, ahhhh (Timmy-the-Wing)

solo intro (Jockey)

solo (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 21: and as we wind on down the road (Chalis)

Part 22: our shadows taller than our soul (Chalis)

Part 23: there walks a lady we all know

Part 24: who shines white light and wants to show

Part 25: how everything still turns to gold

Part 26: and if you listen very hard

Part 27: the tune will come to you at last (Chalis)

Part 28: when all are one and one is all (Chaos Seven)

Part 29: to be a rock, and not to roll (Chaos Seven)

Ending (Masterswordman)

Part 30: and she's buyin a stairway to heaven (Timmy-the-Wing/ Masterswordman)

At 7/16/06 03:28 PM, Jockey wrote: Possibly finished solo intro?? : http://www.freewebs...ckey_1/solointro.htm

pretty nice. The graphic style is a definite win. But it doesnt seem to be MUCh in sync.

Wait, so you DON'T already have the song sliced?

i DO have the song sliced

Do you want me to do a menu?

I'll smooth it and clean it up later, but for now: http://img50.imagesh..labdrumintro2ab4.swf

Needs more graphics to it, it's a bit dull...

At 7/17/06 06:25 AM, Chalis wrote: Do you want me to do a menu?

We've already got one

Actually, I think I'll completely redo mine.

heres mine...my i have part 9 ?

Part 12, please oh please. That was always the beast part to the song. Email it to

At 7/15/06 10:45 PM, Masterswordman wrote: Chorus 2 update.

-)

not feeling it master...not feeling it the waves man...yuck

Parts remaining:

Intro (Hoeloe, this is for title sequence)

Part 1: There's a Lady who's sure, all that glitters is gold, and she's buying a Stairway to heaven (Hoeloe)

Part 2: When she gets there she knows if the stores are all closed (Fallen Anzel)

Part 3: with a word she can get what she came for (Fallen Anzel)

Part 4: ooohhh and she's buying a stairway to heaven (Fallen Anzel / Ichimanako)

Part 5: theres a sign on the wall, but she wants to be sure

Part 6: cos you know sometimes words have two meanings

Part 7: in a tree by the brook theres a song bird who sings

Part 8: sometimes all of our thoughts are misgiven (Hoeloe)

Chorus 1: Lyrics: ooh, and it makes me wonder, ooh, and it makes me wonder (Masterswordman)

Part 9: theres a feelin i get, when i look too the west and my spirit is crying for leaving
(-Duck-)

Part 10: in my thoughts i have seen, rings of smoke through the trees and the voices of those who stand looking

Chorus 2: Lyrics: ooh, and it makes me wonder, ooh, it really makes me wonder (Masterswordman)

Part 11: and its whispered that soon if we all call the tune then the piper will lead us to reason

Part 12: and a new day will dawn, for those who stand long and the forests will echo with laughter (SaintJimmy)

Chorus 3: Lyrics: oh oh oh oh ohh oooohh (Masterswordman)

Drum intro (Ichimanako)

Part 13: if theres a bustle in your hedgerow, don't be alarmed now (Wuflz)

Part 14: its just a spring clean for the may queen (Ichimanako)

Part 15: yes there are two paths you can go by, but in the long run (Hoeloe)

Part 16: theres still time to change the road you're on (Wuflz)

Chorus 4: Lyrics: and it makes me wonder, ohhhhhohoohh (Masterswordman)

Drum intro 2 (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 17: you're head is hummin and it won't go, in case you don't know

Part 18: the piper's callin you to join him

Part 19: dear lady can you hear the wind blow, and did you know? (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 20: your stairway lies on the whisperin' wind, ahhhh (Timmy-the-Wing)

solo intro (Jockey)

solo (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 21: and as we wind on down the road (Chalis)

Part 22: our shadows taller than our soul (Chalis)

Part 23: there walks a lady we all know

Part 24: who shines white light and wants to show

Part 25: how everything still turns to gold

Part 26: and if you listen very hard

Part 27: the tune will come to you at last (Chalis)

Part 28: when all are one and one is all (Chaos Seven)

Part 29: to be a rock, and not to roll (Chaos Seven)

Ending (Masterswordman)

Part 30: and she's buyin a stairway to heaven (Timmy-the-Wing/ Masterswordman)

also im going 2 try an animate part 23

part 23

i cant wait for this collab to be submitted its gonna rock! ps hoeloe pm me if u want the .fla's of the movies

Parts remaining:

Intro (Hoeloe, this is for title sequence)

Part 1: There's a Lady who's sure, all that glitters is gold, and she's buying a Stairway to heaven (Hoeloe)

Part 2: When she gets there she knows if the stores are all closed (Fallen Anzel)

Part 3: with a word she can get what she came for (Fallen Anzel)

Part 4: ooohhh and she's buying a stairway to heaven (Fallen Anzel / Ichimanako)

Part 5: theres a sign on the wall, but she wants to be sure

Part 6: cos you know sometimes words have two meanings

Part 7: in a tree by the brook theres a song bird who sings

Part 8: sometimes all of our thoughts are misgiven (Hoeloe)

Chorus 1: Lyrics: ooh, and it makes me wonder, ooh, and it makes me wonder (Masterswordman)

Part 9: theres a feelin i get, when i look too the west and my spirit is crying for leaving
(-Duck-)

Part 10: in my thoughts i have seen, rings of smoke through the trees and the voices of those who stand looking

Chorus 2: Lyrics: ooh, and it makes me wonder, ooh, it really makes me wonder (Masterswordman)

Part 11: and its whispered that soon if we all call the tune then the piper will lead us to reason

Part 12: and a new day will dawn, for those who stand long and the forests will echo with laughter (SaintJimmy)

Chorus 3: Lyrics: oh oh oh oh ohh oooohh (Masterswordman)

Drum intro (Ichimanako)

Part 13: if theres a bustle in your hedgerow, don't be alarmed now (Wuflz)

Part 14: its just a spring clean for the may queen (Ichimanako)

Part 15: yes there are two paths you can go by, but in the long run (Hoeloe)

Part 16: theres still time to change the road you're on (Wuflz)

Chorus 4: Lyrics: and it makes me wonder, ohhhhhohoohh (Masterswordman)

Drum intro 2 (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 17: you're head is hummin and it won't go, in case you don't know

Part 18: the piper's callin you to join him

Part 19: dear lady can you hear the wind blow, and did you know? (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 20: your stairway lies on the whisperin' wind, ahhhh (Timmy-the-Wing)

solo intro (Jockey)

solo (Timmy-the-Wing)

Part 21: and as we wind on down the road (Chalis)

Part 22: our shadows taller than our soul (Chalis)

Part 23: there walks a lady we all know (-Duck-)

Part 24: who shines white light and wants to show

Part 25: how everything still turns to gold

Part 26: and if you listen very hard

Part 27: the tune will come to you at last (Chalis)

Part 28: when all are one and one is all (Chaos Seven)

Part 29: to be a rock, and not to roll (Chaos Seven)

Ending (Masterswordman)

Part 30: and she's buyin a stairway to heaven (Timmy-the-Wing/ Masterswordman)

Very Nice -Duck-...