At 6/27/06 04:35 PM, s1nt3ch wrote:
bumpage and just letting you all know I'm still working on this, will work more on it this week, I am going away on business, but will be plunking away @ my laptop. So I may not have internet access for awhile, but don't fret I'll be back.
WELL MISS YOU! But don't worry, I'll watch over the thread when you're gone. That is, if you can trust me.
muahahaha
My story is evolving and I have a PLOT, finally! Hahaah, it's going to be semi-autobiographical in a metaphorical way. And it's going to be a long story, multiple part. Probably 3 or 4. Still pending.
I've edited the plot hint so it reflects it better.
As this mask is projected as another truth over reality,
as a pretentious personality.
My fingers reel in the traces of imagination,
slumbering creatures of own creation.
The deep steps of a trampled soul.
To my castle of trees where you belong.
Your presence shall make me whole,
as I enchant you with this song.
Still working on the cadans and words.
At 6/26/06 12:33 AM, JerRyKirkhAm wrote:
This is the story I have so far for my episode.
GLUARGHBFEH DEFHE GLERGGGE GORLGRLOBLAH..BLAH
So what do you think? Is it good enough?
Heh, although it is kind of cliche it certainly has a nice feel of tension. Not well written as such, but it's just a mock up.
This can be really nice with some good dramatic angles. Dramatic angles and shots are really important in gigs like these. Look up dutch angles on wikipedia. This has also a nice part on angles. Or just go making photo's in your own home.
Good luck on this!
Bring the gore on!