Piano Project, needs critiquing.

[EvilBread]

http://www.newground..427564&sub=52535

the first song titled "Piano Project," please keep in mind this:
1) it is intended to be 1'18 seconds
2)i am planning on recording the piano later, i just would like to have everything written the right way first.
3)i want to add more tracks to it, probably some less noticable guitar/brass or whatever (any ideas?)
4)it will be mixed later

i would just like some help on if everything sounds good and maybe any changes i need to make.

^_^ thanks alot you guys,
patrick

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[Striker028]

At 6/10/06 03:50 PM, EvilBread wrote: http://www.newground..427564&sub=52535

the first song titled "Piano Project," please keep in mind this:
1) it is intended to be 1'18 seconds
2)i am planning on recording the piano later, i just would like to have everything written the right way first.
3)i want to add more tracks to it, probably some less noticable guitar/brass or whatever (any ideas?)
4)it will be mixed later

i would just like some help on if everything sounds good and maybe any changes i need to make.

^_^ thanks alot you guys,
patrick

well since you already posted here, i liked it, and it seemed to have a good beat. Nice guitar too ^^. I look forward to the completed version