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Please review my (bad) (late)Pico day Flash.

how bout my game? here's Big Time v1.6

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/376554

watcha think? :)

At 4/30/07 04:52 PM, milinko959 wrote: Points/Completion Rate/Weekly Completion/User
1. 1025 | 141/149 94.63% | 6/6 | milinko959

Congratulations on being the first reviewer to 1,000 Points, milinko

2. 668 | 104/147 70.75% | 1/6 | Bezman
3. 532 | 71/143 49.65% | 0/6 | HomerDough
4. 503 | 77/108 71.30% | 5/6 | Coop83

4th in both points and completion rate. I'll be passing HomerDough this week and maybe reeling Bezman in a little over the next few days.

At 4/30/07 05:54 PM, Seamonky wrote: Ok, then I'll be the first one to say. Please review my Sunshine Pico flash!
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/376270

Review supplied, thanks for the response

At 5/1/07 08:28 PM, Imacow wrote: Please review my (bad) (late)Pico day Flash.

Review pending for a few moments

At 5/2/07 02:48 AM, dragonjet wrote: how bout my game? here's Big Time v1.6

You have been placed in a holding pattern. Your position in the queue is 2. *hold music*

Hi reviwers!
I would appreciate comments on this stuff I have made:

Link: http://denvish.net/ulf/030507/79019_Luigi_in_
Super_Mario_Land.php

It´s a super Mario parody named Luigi in super Mario Land. I have wrote the storyboard and I can tell that the flash will not make you bored. I do still need to fix some stuff in the super Mario Land scene and I will properly fix it tomorrow or something.. Have already worked my ass off today.. =/

Don´t you think that I need to add more background stuff to the super Mario Land scene?

Anyway.. Please comment the unfinished flash! =)
Thanks!

//Xipp

May I join the Review Request Club? I will be sure to post more, and help people out with there flash.

At 5/3/07 04:05 PM, Xipp wrote: Hi reviwers!
I would appreciate comments on this stuff I have made:

Well, my main piece of advice would be that if you're going for the classic "game boy" look, try making it green, rather than keeping it black and white. I think it would work better that way.

Here is my on time Pico Day flash *wink wink*

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/377082

At 5/5/07 10:53 AM, SoulKnight96 wrote: May I join the Review Request Club? I will be sure to post more, and help people out with there flash.

Yes, review the links in this post if you want.

General Rules for New Reviewers
If you are planning on completing requests, please do the following:
-Post in this thread to let us know you plan on reviewing.
-Understand the points system and keep track of your own score. From now on, I will only add you to the list if you post your own score after the first week.

General Rules for Requesters
If you are planning on requesting review, please do the following:
-Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
-DO NOT request without putting a link, I don't have the time or patience to find all this crap.
-DO NOT say "Review everything" for the same reason above.
-DO NOT request the same submission more than once.

Flash Requests:
Sunshine: Picoday 2007 by Seamonky
Sr. Pico by Imacow
Big Time by dragonjet
Pico: The Escape by xthesnarfx

Audio Requests:
none

Points:
**Please also keep track of your own points. If you see something missing, I probably made a mistake**
**To be on the list, you must make at least one review, posters only will not be counted**
5 points for a review on a requested movie/game
7 points for a review on a requested audio
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests for that week

Points/Completion Rate/Weekly Completion/User
1. 1138 | 157/165 95.15% | 16/16 | milinko959
2. 668 | 104/163 63.80% | 0/16 | Bezman
3. 532 | 71/159 44.65% | 0/16 | HomerDough
4. 566 | 87/124 70.16% | 10/16 | Coop83
5. 410 | 59/164 35.98% | 0/16 | Imacow
6. 361 | 51/74 | 68.92% | 1/16 | Abyssus
7. 308 | 43/71 | 60.56% | 0/16 | Abs55
8. 210 | 31/89 34.83% | 0/16 | head2toewinner
9. 202 | 33/160 20.63% | 0/16 | KWAS71KCK
10. 187 | 28/152 18.42% | 0/16 | Marsupial
11. 162 | 24/165 14.54% | 0/16 | Hemlok
12. 129 | 19/94 | 20.21% | 0/16 | 2good2be4goten
13. 72 | 10/162 6.17% | 0/16 | Frenzy
14. 47 | 6/42 | 14.29% | 0/16 | Seamonky
15. 40 | 8/50 | 16.00% | 0/16 | wegra2007

New To the List
none

Leaving the List
The-Review-Cometh

All Requests Completed
milinko959

I really haven't been able to review, It never comes to me. I will stop by every now and again, but not as often as before.

Hey guys!!!

Guess what?

NEW AUDIO BABY!

I'd be super happy if you'd review and rate
(and download..-.-) Untitled Sampler, read the caption too.

And Make Them Dance! that'd be nice too.

So.... um... review all my other stuff too.. :)

Get ready guys, tomorrow's the 1 year anniversary of the club. Hope you guys thought of something special to do for the occasion!

At 5/7/07 04:48 PM, milinko959 wrote: Points/Completion Rate/Weekly Completion/User
1. 1138 | 157/165 95.15% | 16/16 | milinko959
2. 668 | 104/163 63.80% | 0/16 | Bezman
3. 532 | 71/159 44.65% | 0/16 | HomerDough
4. 566 | 87/124 70.16% | 10/16 | Coop83

Wow, third in the list! This week has been really quiet and so has the list, with only 3 people writing reviews. I think that this calls for a new proposal.

Since we haven't had many requests for reviews in this week, can I please ask if I can put a "review spotlight" out each week, to give us all 1 flash to review. I will try and pick a flash which will generate a response and will also be genuinely helpful. What do you think?

At 5/9/07 02:32 AM, Freelance-Magician wrote: Get ready guys, tomorrow's the 1 year anniversary of the club. Hope you guys thought of something special to do for the occasion!

I'll have to do something to celebrate, but I don't know what...

At 5/9/07 09:09 AM, Coop83 wrote: What do you think?

Sounds like a plan, i'll put it on next week if you give me a link.

At 5/9/07 02:32 AM, Freelance-Magician wrote: Get ready guys, tomorrow's the 1 year anniversary of the club. Hope you guys thought of something special to do for the occasion!

Eh, this club is going downhill the last few weeks. :(

At 5/10/07 05:57 PM, milinko959 wrote:

At 5/9/07 09:09 AM, Coop83 wrote: What do you think?

Sounds like a plan, i'll put it on next week if you give me a link.

Ok, this week's choice is the Cheer Up Collab. Reel Big Fish supplied the music and some people reviewing it seem to think it's worth more.

What does everyone else think?

A bit quiet here right now, but here's my latest flash submission: Afro_Stud - The Album.

At 5/14/07 03:24 PM, Bahamut wrote: A bit quiet here right now, but here's my latest flash submission: Afro_Stud - The Album.

Ok, I reviewed the flash and thanks for the awesome response Bahamut. I rarely get long responses anymore. :/

well, happy one year anniversary a few days ago.

General Rules for New Reviewers
If you are planning on completing requests, please do the following:
-Post in this thread to let us know you plan on reviewing.
-Understand the points system and keep track of your own score. From now on, I will only add you to the list if you post your own score after the first week.

General Rules for Requesters
If you are planning on requesting review, please do the following:
-Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
-DO NOT request without putting a link, I don't have the time or patience to find all this crap.
-DO NOT say "Review everything" for the same reason above.
-DO NOT request the same submission more than once.

Flash Requests:
Afro_Stud - The Album by Bahamut

Audio Requests:
Untitled Sampler by The-Review-Cometh
Make them Dance! by The-Review-Cometh

Coop83's spotlight submission this week is: Cheer Up! Collab

Points:
**Please also keep track of your own points. If you see something missing, I probably made a mistake**
**To be on the list, you must make at least one review, posters only will not be counted**
5 points for a review on a requested movie/game
7 points for a review on a requested audio
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests for that week

Points/Completion Rate/Weekly Completion/User
1. 1168 | 161/169 95.27% | 4/4 | milinko959
2. 668 | 104/167 62.28% | 0/4 | Bezman
3. 599 | 91/128 71.10% | 4/4 | Coop83
4. 532 | 71/163 43.56% | 0/4 | HomerDough
5. 416 | 60/168 35.71% | 1/4 | Imacow
6. 364 | 51/78 | 65.38% | 0/4 | Abyssus
7. 308 | 43/75 | 57.33% | 0/4 | Abs55
8. 210 | 31/93 33.33% | 0/4 | head2toewinner
9. 207 | 34/164 20.73% | 1/4 | KWAS71KCK
10. 187 | 28/156 17.95% | 0/4 | Marsupial
11. 162 | 24/169 14.20% | 0/4 | Hemlok
12. 129 | 19/98 | 19.39% | 0/4 | 2good2be4goten
13. 72 | 10/166 6.02% | 0/4 | Frenzy
14. 50 | 6/46 | 13.04% | 0/4 | Seamonky
15. 40 | 8/54 | 14.81% | 0/4 | wegra2007
16. 12 | 2/4 | 50.00% | 2/4 | SoulKnight96

New To the List
SoulKnight96

Leaving the List
none

All Requests Completed
milinko959, Coop83

At 5/14/07 04:24 PM, milinko959 wrote: well, happy one year anniversary a few days ago.

Indeed, happy 1 year of this fine club.

Points/Completion Rate/Weekly Completion/User
1. 1168 | 161/169 95.27% | 4/4 | milinko959
2. 668 | 104/167 62.28% | 0/4 | Bezman
3. 599 | 91/128 71.10% | 4/4 | Coop83

Wow, moved up to 3rd overall and 2nd on response rate. Things are looking up.

All Requests Completed
milinko959, Coop83

Of course, it's always good when you nail every request in a week. Come on people, we need more requests!

At 5/14/07 04:24 PM, milinko959 wrote: well, happy one year anniversary a few days ago.

1 year anny of this club, eh? Awesome... hadn't realized it had been around that long.

At 5/14/07 04:24 PM, milinko959 wrote: well, happy one year anniversary a few days ago.

O wow. I never even knew this Club had one year! Congrats on having this Club run for one year already. :D

Audio Requests:
Untitled Sampler by The-Review-Cometh
Make them Dance! by The-Review-Cometh

I just reviewed those Audio's so I plan to see more points in the next update.

14. 50 | 6/46 | 13.04% | 0/4 | Seamonky

Wow, I really suck at doing this. :/

All Requests Completed
milinko959, Coop83

Congrats on doing all the Review Request milinko959 and Coop83! Also, Thanks for the mini update milinko959! :D

Wow, haven't posted here in a while. Ok I'd really like this to be reviewed, the reviews so far are low, but the score is high, so I'd like other opinions other than 2 people, thanks. Here's the link.
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/378759

Could you plz review?

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/377785

OH cool, this looks interesting, the new change.

Yeah just noticed it now. Guess I have 3 points, lol.

Hey there guys, I'd really appreciate a review or two on my Audio, seeing as it's a voice demo I plan to use professionally.

Also, if you could, review my only flash. Thanks!

Oh sorry, forgot the links.

Voice Demo

PONG: The Movie (Trailer)

Hey, I'll join! Put me on the list please milinko! :)

Do you guys mind if i carry this club into a smaller branch on Zellomesh?

At 5/16/07 06:20 PM, Jonimator wrote: Ok I'd really like this to be reviewed, the reviews so far are low, but the score is high.

Well, I've left mine for you, please respond

At 5/16/07 07:31 PM, Jimtopia wrote: Could you plz review?

Done, please respond, Jim

At 5/17/07 11:30 PM, Moose wrote: PONG: The Movie (Trailer)

Reviewed, please respond.

At 5/18/07 08:18 AM, The-Review-Cometh wrote: Do you guys mind if i carry this club into a smaller branch on Zellomesh?

I'm not sure I understand what you're on about here...

My spotlight submission this week is Stalingrad 1942 by Oskari Makimattila. I think it's a great film, see what you think about it

New flash from me: Happy Birthday Casualty!

Zellomesh is a smaller flash sight. It's gonna need one of these soon.