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Posted at: 9/2/08 01:54 AM

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At 9/1/08 09:25 AM, Haggard wrote: Leaving the List :( :
aldlv, Gu-rrilla

Can't blame you, I've been having some tough issues to deal with. I was wondering if you guys could take me back. I would like to re-apply to the Review Request Club.


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Posted at: 9/2/08 03:36 AM

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At 9/1/08 09:25 AM, Haggard wrote: Points | Stats | % rate | weekly | user
1. 6891 | 916/0993 | 092,25 | 25/25 | Coop83
2. 4962 | 652/0653 | 099,85 | 25/25 | Haggard

Ah, another good week for the RRC :) Thanks for the update, Haggard.

Not too many requests, so it should be easy enough to get 100% this time around.

At 8/30/08 06:26 PM, milinko959 wrote: Hey you guys kept this alive! Good job :DD
Hey, thanks for dropping by! Feel like reviewing again? :D

That would be nice to see, considering I jinxed his presence on NG by suggesting that he was going to become only the third user to 10,000 Reviews :P

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At 9/1/08 09:25 AM, Haggard wrote: Requests list as posted by Bezman on page 182 (those requests should be done until Sunday, the 7th):
If your request does not appear on the list below, you probably made your request between late Thursday and now. Your request will be added to the next list on Thursday.

General Rules for Requesters:
If you are planning on requesting reviews, please:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 requests within one week.
- Respond to reviews.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you request.
- Do NOT request without posting a link.
- Do NOT just say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.

General Rules for New Reviewers:
If you are planning on completing requests, please do the following:
- Post in this thread to let us know you plan on reviewing.
- Understand the points system and keep track of your own score. You will only be added to the list if you post your own score after the first week

Points:
**Please also keep track of your own points. If you see something missing, there is probably a mistake**
**To be on the list, you must make at least one review, posters only will not be counted**
5 points for a review on a requested movie/game
7 points for a review on a requested audio
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review

: NOTE: From now on you won't get any points for putting abbreviations like "RRC" at the bottom of a review, but only for "Review Request Club"

I am going to have trouble remembering this :P

3 points for posting at least once throughout the week
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests for that week

Movie Requests:(4)
The Last Hour: Chapter 8 by The Final Hour (Jaiba)
The Last Hour: Chapter 9 by The Final Hour (Jaiba)
Wegra Adventure 4 by Michael (wegra2007)
The Last Hour: Chapter 10 by The Final Hour (Jaiba)

I love Reviewing movies :P

Game Requests:(2)
Newgrounds Helpful Guide by yoshi77777 & Corey Fromille (Corky52)
How to help Newgrounds by RohantheBarbarian

But I love reviewing games more O.o Not too many this week which is a bit of a let down :P

Audio Requests:(8)
NES Metal by Jeffaro
The Death of Hank by
WritersBlock
rock across the town by mikkim
bashunter song loop by mikkim
Digital High by Bob (Bob-Music)
Art by Sam C (BreakingFaces)
Somewhere in Nevada by WritersBlock
<--An Angry Afterlife--> by DjCompass

Oh god! The dreaded Audio! Not too many this week which is good :P

12. 399 | 055/0077 | 071,43 | 25/25 | X3cutioner
13. 319 | 043/0043 | 100,00 | 25/25 | perfect-insanity
14. 312 | 042/0042 | 100,00 | 24/24 | xIDoL

Hmm, I'm just trailing here, I would be closer to P-I but I couldn't review my own submission :)


Requests this week: 25
Total all time: 1019
Review this Week: 148
Average per member: 9,25
Average per request: 5,92

Easy 100% this week yay!

New To the List:
Marsupial

Welcome


Leaving the List :( :
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Bye

All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Corky52, X3cutioner, perfect-insanity, xIDoL, Marsupial

I must keep this 100% streak going *determined*

Ah yes, I will get around to reviewing later, I am playing Castle Crashers!


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At 9/1/08 09:25 AM, Haggard wrote:

Thanks for the update. I can't believe I didn't respond to it. Oh well, I got to it now.

Movie Requests:(4)
The Last Hour: Chapter 8 by The Final Hour (Jaiba)
The Last Hour: Chapter 9 by The Final Hour (Jaiba)
Wegra Adventure 4 by Michael (wegra2007)
The Last Hour: Chapter 10 by The Final Hour (Jaiba)

I still think The Last Hour submissions were some kind of joke. I really had no clue what was going on the entire time and the animation jumped back and forth from decent to bad and then even to good. Something was fishy with those. Oh well, I managed to get the movie reviews done so I don't have much more to do.


Game Requests:(2)
Newgrounds Helpful Guide by yoshi77777 & Corey Fromille (Corky52)
How to help Newgrounds by RohantheBarbarian

Well, the links are messed up, but it doesn't take a rocket scientist to go and find the right link. If you want to find it easier just go to my flashes and they will both be there. On that note, I am coed on both of these so I can't review these.


Audio Requests:(8)
NES Metal by Jeffaro
The Death of Hank by
WritersBlock
rock across the town by mikkim
bashunter song loop by mikkim
Digital High by Bob (Bob-Music)
Art by Sam C (BreakingFaces)
Somewhere in Nevada by WritersBlock
<--An Angry Afterlife--> by DjCompass

Overall, this is a smaller list then usual. It's nice to have a week or so off from writing a bunch of reviews. I haven't gotten to these so I'm going to try and get them finished today if I'm lucky enough.


Spotlighted Recommendations: none
You get points for reviewing recommendations as if they were requests.
You may make a recommendation if you reviewed 100% of the previous weeks requests and recommendations. It should be over 3 days old and have under 50 reviews.

I would like to make a spotlight recommendation for the next list. I would like you guys to check out Sleep In Your Tomb. Aka, Corky52's Theme Song with vocals. :)


Points | Stats | % rate | weekly | user
6. 2135 | 281/0299 | 093,98 | 12/25 | phantomlassuk

I'm still scraping my way out to catch up. Maybe someday I can catch up, but looks like I may be sticking right in my spot for awhile.

7. 1548 | 201/0201 | 100,00 | 24/24 | Corky52

I'm still 100 percent. It's been quite a task for me, but I don't think I would review if it wasn't for this club.

8. 1059 | 158/0310 | 050,97 | 11/25 | shadowchaotailsevil3

I'm quite far ahead to feel safe. Catch me if you can though. ;)


Requests this week: 25
Total all time: 1019

There we are, over 1,000. On to the next 1,000 I guess.

Review this Week: 148
Average per member: 9,25
Average per request: 5,92

New To the List:
Marsupial

Welcome to the club.


Leaving the List :( :
aldlv, Gu-rrilla

Bye guys.


All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Corky52, X3cutioner, perfect-insanity, xIDoL, Marsupial

Hm, still with the elite, but I'm concerned about some of your guys reviews. This isn't fucking youtube, please actually review the submissions. Stop this small commenting stuff it's annoying. Anyone could get all reviews done if you only right a couple of lines. I think there should be some sort of rules where you have to have over 3 maybe even 5 lines in your reviews not counting when you push enter.

At 8/28/08 12:30 PM, Shanus wrote: Laptop's finally back. Everything's working as was. So I'm back. Maybe not this weekend because I'm moving house but definitely after :D
Hi, welcome back! :)

Welcome. I hope you can start reviewing again. Even though you've missed most of the submissions that I request here. :(


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Posted at: 9/2/08 10:15 AM

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CLUB INFO
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General Rules for Requesters:
If you are planning on requesting reviews, please:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 requests within one week.
- Do us a favour and respond to our reviews.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you request.
- Do NOT request without posting a link.
- Do NOT just say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.

General Rules for New Reviewers:
If you are planning on completing requests, please do the following:
- Post in this thread to let us know you'd like to join.
- Understand the points system and keep track of your own score. You will only be added to the list if you post your own score within the first week.

Points:
**Please also keep track of your own points. If you see something missing, it's probably a mistake**
**To be on the list, you must make at least one review, posters only will not be counted**

5 points for a review on a requested movie/game
7 points for a review on a requested audio
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests/recommendations for that week

Club updates
Each Sunday or Monday, Haggard or Shanus currently create a list of all the members, counting up their points, calculating various stats and posting a list of requested submissions. Assuming you review the submissions listed, you will get points for them on the following members' update, 6 or 7 days later.

On Thursday, Bezman currently creates a list of all requests and recommendations made up until then, since the previous thursday. This can be seen as a 'preview' of the list that will accompany the following members' update on Sunday/Monday. The points for these are tallied 10 days later.

Requests made between the 'preview list' and the 'members' update' carry over to the next preview list. So you will always have over 9 days to finish the reviews. (Feel free to review submissions as soon as they are requested!)

FAQ
Should we have a FAQ?
I don't know. It kinda seems like overkill.

Should I link to the club in my sig?
There's no obligation to do so, but it's certainly appreciated. Remember that you can put a high number in place of the page number in the url and if that page doesn't exist yet, NG will take you to the latest page, whatever it is.

So if you link to: http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/4834 48/999
then anyone following that link will always see the latest page.

I don't understand what recommendations are all about!
As mentioned under this section in each list, 'You may make a recommendation if you reviewed 100% of the previous weeks requests and recommendations. It should be over 3 days old and have under 50 reviews.'

As long as your name is on the last 'All requests completed' list, feel free to recommend something you've enjoyed from the portal.

You could use this to let us know about something you think is specially awesome, yet overlooked. If there aren't many game or movie requests, maybe you could make a recommendation so we have something to review.
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At 9/1/08 10:14 PM, KgZ wrote: Sup homez can I enter this treehouse club 8)

Sure thing!

I checked your reviews and though short, you seem to have clear criticisms and praise to give, which is great.

I'd suggest that some, like your review for ' -HarDon-' should be lengthened to be more like your reviews for 'Atom Bomb--_--goa Trance" and ' Xtreme Wave {DJ S}', where you're more specific about WHY you like it and actually give constructive criicisms.

Review some of the stuff in Haggard's list on the previous page. Let us know on Sunday morning (or earlier) how many you reviewed and how many 'points' you garnered. Then Haggard will add you to the list next Monday.

Welcome to the club!

At 8/30/08 06:26 PM, milinko959 wrote: Hey you guys kept this alive! Good job :DD

Hey! You're alive! :-D

Weren't you gonna go to 10,000 exp before leaving?

At 8/30/08 05:49 PM, phantomlassuk wrote: Its been making me feel that the its more of a chore

Yeah ultimately, none of us are likely to get awards, make a living or radically improve our lives from reviewing. It should be just a fun thing to do.

I wonder how you others people get round this without buring out?. I really like to do next weeks list.

I personally don't have as good a 'record' as most other folk here. But I find that challenging myself to write a review within X minutes makes it more fun. For example, with a 2 minute song, I'll have normally already listened to it once or twice in the background. Then, when it comes to review, I challenge myself to write a review within three playthroughs - once to just listen and soak up the details, then 2 more loops to quickly type up my thoughts.

Having short time limits can make things more fun.

At 9/2/08 08:16 AM, Corky52 wrote:
All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Corky52, X3cutioner, perfect-insanity, xIDoL, Marsupial
Hm, still with the elite, but I'm concerned about some of your guys reviews. This isn't fucking youtube, please actually review the submissions. Stop this small commenting stuff it's annoying. Anyone could get all reviews done if you only right a couple of lines. I think there should be some sort of rules where you have to have over 3 maybe even 5 lines in your reviews not counting when you push enter.

I'm in two minds about what you're saying. On the one hand - yeah, a more thorough review is far more useful to an author and when I submit flash, the thorough ones are worth multiple 'comment-style' ones as the former actually give me ideas of what would be useful to improve, what to keep doing etc.

On the other hand, a short review is far better than nothing - at least giving an opinion (and even a short comment can contain a bit of specific praise and some constructive criticism).

Personally, there have been times when I've watched (or played) something, felt like my review wouldn't be thorough enough if I wrote it then, decided to come back to it later and ended up writing nothing in the end.

That's probably the worst thing to do and lambasting people on general terms for writing shitty reviews just results in a bit of resentment and ill-feeling. And in the end, this shouldn't be a chore - just a bit of fun.

I'd say that anyone should be commended for completing all the reviews, no matter their quality. BUT if a review seems shitty to you, call it out. Maybe suggest ways to improve the review. Review the review - maybe give constructive feedback rather than just having a blanket call for folk to lengthen their work.

I think more discussions about what makes a good review etc. might help.

Sorry for the lack of a solid conclusion, but basically I feel like we should be willing to 'call out' specific people or reviews and still commend people for even writing however much they do.


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At 9/2/08 10:15 AM, Bezman wrote:
At 9/2/08 08:16 AM, Corky52 wrote:
All Requests Completed:
Coop83, Haggard, Corky52, X3cutioner, perfect-insanity, xIDoL, Marsupial
Hm, still with the elite, but I'm concerned about some of your guys reviews. This isn't fucking youtube, please actually review the submissions. Stop this small commenting stuff it's annoying. Anyone could get all reviews done if you only right a couple of lines. I think there should be some sort of rules where you have to have over 3 maybe even 5 lines in your reviews not counting when you push enter.
I'm in two minds about what you're saying. On the one hand - yeah, a more thorough review is far more useful to an author and when I submit flash, the thorough ones are worth multiple 'comment-style' ones as the former actually give me ideas of what would be useful to improve, what to keep doing etc.

Quality, not quantity, correct?

I feel that those of us who complete all the reviews are the ones who actually care about the flash, rather than the numbers of reviews. Since I care more about the responses I gain than the actual numbers of reviews, I feel that I'm more likely to receive a response (Hopefully positive) from a well constructed and detailed review, than a quick one liner.

On the other hand, a short review is far better than nothing - at least giving an opinion (and even a short comment can contain a bit of specific praise and some constructive criticism).

Better than nothing, but even though I have never had a flash which has been reviewed, I would feel that feedback is more use as detailecd as possible, than a quick "LOL, that was some crazy shit" for example.

I'd say that anyone should be commended for completing all the reviews, no matter their quality. BUT if a review seems shitty to you, call it out. Maybe suggest ways to improve the review. Review the review - maybe give constructive feedback rather than just having a blanket call for folk to lengthen their work.

Sounds like a good idea - I wouldn't mind hearing feedback on my own reviews.

I think more discussions about what makes a good review etc. might help.

This would certainly help us to produce quality reviews that express a variety of opinions in a nicely detailed and well constructed manner.

Sorry for the lack of a solid conclusion, but basically I feel like we should be willing to 'call out' specific people or reviews and still commend people for even writing however much they do.

Sounds like the start of a plan, does anyone else have anything to add?

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Posted at: 9/2/08 06:32 PM

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14 points for 2 audio submissions
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5 points for 1 flash submission
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2 points for sign "RRC" on 2 submissions
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3 points for reviewing at least once last week

I've not been browsing here cause of my Internet, sorry guys :'(


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At 9/2/08 06:32 PM, BlackPT wrote: 14 points for 2 audio submissions
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5 points for 1 flash submission
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2 points for sign "RRC" on 2 submissions
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3 points for reviewing at least once last week

I've not been browsing here cause of my Internet, sorry guys :'(

The 3 submissions you reviewed are from the PREVIOUS list - you needed to post this info on Sunday or earlier to be added. The next members' update will involve the reviews for the stuff Haggard mentions on page 183.

And when tagging reviews, you need to add "Review Request Club" - not just 'RRC'. The former is searchable and could help spread the word but the latter isn't.

Your reviews seems like you've put in a little bit of effort so feel free to review this week's list and report back before sunday to be added this time around.


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Posted at: 9/2/08 08:05 PM

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Yo.I got a new song that I need everyone to hear..

Its just so damn funny.If you liked my other works then this tops them all from a comedy standpoint.

Here it is.


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Posted at: 9/3/08 11:28 AM

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I'd like more people to review my song. I feel it didn't get enough attention and it's one of my best. It has kind of an 8-bit feel, that's a part of my image. The length is pretty epic too.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1 68277

Thanks!
- Svinepels


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Posted at: 9/3/08 06:49 PM

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I dont think i will be doing any more reviews, for a while. I have come to the decision to quit this club, for now. Ive not been happy for a while i been finding it to much ,and dont have the time at the moment. I really wanted to carry on but found the pressure ,i was putting myself under is to much. So you can remove me from the list?, but is it okay if i want to come back in the future again?. This sucks i loved the idea but i think i rather do reviews, in my own time. Thanks i liked writing reviews.


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movie/game reviews-6
audio reviews-7(NES Metal is not there)

5 points for a review on a requested movie/game 6x5=30
7 points for a review on a requested audio 7x7=49
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review 4+6=10
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week 0
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post) 0
7 points for reviewing all requests for that week 7
previous points 319
total points 415


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Posted at: 9/4/08 03:28 AM

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Hey, could you guys look at my latest reviews and tell me if I am improving from my other reviews? Thanks, and I will have my points up for this week soon.


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Ok, I have finished reviewing this weeks list, finally :P

Points already: 312

5 points for a review on a requested movie/game 30
7 points for a review on a requested audio 49 (I couldn't review one audio as the link did not work :( Will that still be 100%?)
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review 12
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week 1
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests/recommendations for that week 7

Points updated: 411

Also, I have noticed that X3cutioner, Shadowchaotailsevil and some newbies arent putting the full 'Review Request Club' in, The have been putting 'RRC', which I got told not to do this :(


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At 9/4/08 03:28 AM, xIDoL wrote: Hey, could you guys look at my latest reviews and tell me if I am improving from my other reviews? Thanks, and I will have my points up for this week soon.

That's a lot better - there is more detail and you seem to give the impression that you actually care about the work that you're watching or listening to.

Trust me, you'll get more responses from the reviews you write and you might even find it more fulfilling.

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At 9/4/08 04:50 AM, Coop83 wrote: That's a lot better - there is more detail and you seem to give the impression that you actually care about the work that you're watching or listening to.

Trust me, you'll get more responses from the reviews you write and you might even find it more fulfilling.

Thanks, I do feel a bit more proud after I write a good review.


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At 9/4/08 04:56 AM, xIDoL wrote:
At 9/4/08 04:50 AM, Coop83 wrote: Trust me, you'll get more responses from the reviews you write and you might even find it more fulfilling.
Thanks, I do feel a bit more proud after I write a good review.

Now hopefully you understand my gripe with the users (not just you) who claimed membership of this club and didn't really put much effort or thought into their reviews.

If we all write great reviews, the people who we review for might be more willing to say how good we are and therefore we get more reviews to complete. At the moment, our requests are a finite resource and we must strive to get as many new requesters as possible.

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At 9/4/08 07:40 AM, Coop83 wrote: Now hopefully you understand my gripe with the users (not just you) who claimed membership of this club and didn't really put much effort or thought into their reviews.

If we all write great reviews, the people who we review for might be more willing to say how good we are and therefore we get more reviews to complete. At the moment, our requests are a finite resource and we must strive to get as many new requesters as possible.

Yes, I see what you mean, Hopefully the other reviewers will see us talking about this and be inspired to write better reviews :P


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At 9/4/08 04:56 AM, xIDoL wrote: Thanks, I do feel a bit more proud after I write a good review.

Excellent!

To celebrate your efforts, I thought I'd review your review. We used to do this all the time in the old Review Crew - I'm sure anyone here (myself included) would appreciate a review of a review. Anyway...

"Umm..."

Not the best title. However, it clearly shows your bewilderment at the flash's existence.

submission: Wegra Adventure 4
date: 5 hours ago
2

I just wanted to say that I respect you for having the inclination to use the majority of the scale. Too many people say how much they hate something, then give it a 4 (only slightly under 'average').

Alrighty:
Animation: Well, The animation was pretty basic and a little below average but I think that if you don't rush yourself as much, you would be able to do a MUCH better job

Could be more specific. What was wrong with the animation - were there too few frames? Was the movement robotic? Was it something to do with the individual drawings?

I like the the encouragement here. You have a friendly tone.

Graphics: Well, the graphics look really bad and on one or two frames you can see a part where you just selected some of the person and moving him, taking a chunk of background with it. o.O As I said before, don't rush.. you have got all the time in the world.

Again, more friendly encouragement. And you cite a specific example of something to avoid in future. Good stuff!

Story: Well, as far I can see you havent got a story :( Or atleast you dont show any means of telling a story.

Are you serious? The 'story' is the fight between pixel-dude and Wegra. I guess I'm just picking hairs - I know as well as you do that it was negligible.

Overall: I think you could do much better, just keep trying and eventually you could be doing awesome...
>Review Request Club<

A great review - better than the flash deserves, in my opinion.

You could have cited one thing that you liked - what stopped you giving it a 1 or 0? The pretty colours? The silliness? The fact that there was something as opposed to nothing?

As well as giving encouragement, you could have maybe given an example of a job partially done, encouraging the dude to go further.

But you have clear language, give examples of things to work on and in the end, it's a good review.

Even though - as I just noticed - you never mentioned audio. That's kinda odd given your format.

7/10 overall


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At 9/4/08 08:46 AM, Bezman wrote:
A great review - better than the flash deserves, in my opinion.

You could have cited one thing that you liked - what stopped you giving it a 1 or 0? The pretty colours? The silliness? The fact that there was something as opposed to nothing?

As well as giving encouragement, you could have maybe given an example of a job partially done, encouraging the dude to go further.

But you have clear language, give examples of things to work on and in the end, it's a good review.

Even though - as I just noticed - you never mentioned audio. That's kinda odd given your format.

7/10 overall

Wow, Thanks dude, hopefully I will remember everything you just said here for later reference ;)
Yea I didn't really think much of the audio when I was watching the movie, as I was trying to read the subtitles and watch the movie at the same time, I should have told him that he should adjust the frame rate so we can read the subtitles, watch the movie AND listen to the music at the same time, I guess I didn't think of it at the time o.O


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At 9/4/08 03:28 AM, xIDoL wrote: Hey, could you guys look at my latest reviews and tell me if I am improving from my other reviews? Thanks, and I will have my points up for this week soon.

Do you have to provide a direct link to your reviews, for them to count?


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At 9/3/08 06:49 PM, phantomlassuk wrote: I dont think i will be doing any more reviews, for a while. I have come to the decision to quit this club, for now. Ive not been happy for a while i been finding it to much ,and dont have the time at the moment. I really wanted to carry on but found the pressure ,i was putting myself under is to much. So you can remove me from the list?, but is it okay if i want to come back in the future again?. This sucks i loved the idea but i think i rather do reviews, in my own time. Thanks i liked writing reviews.

I know what you mean. Sometimes we have so many audio requests that it's almost no fun anymore to review that large amount.
But then, nobody forces you to review ALL of them, right? Just review as much as you like and as your time allows.
That way you don't have to quit the club and this club still has an active member more on the list. A win-win situation. ;)

However, if you really want to quit, then feel free to come back at any time you like.

At 9/4/08 09:58 AM, Mrputter wrote:
At 9/4/08 03:28 AM, xIDoL wrote: Hey, could you guys look at my latest reviews and tell me if I am improving from my other reviews? Thanks, and I will have my points up for this week soon.
Do you have to provide a direct link to your reviews, for them to count?

What do you mean with "for them to count"? To be on the members list? No, you only have to post how many points you gathered on Sunday (or earlier) after the first week to be included.

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At 9/4/08 09:58 AM, Mrputter wrote:
At 9/4/08 03:28 AM, xIDoL wrote: Hey, could you guys look at my latest reviews and tell me if I am improving from my other reviews? Thanks, and I will have my points up for this week soon.
Do you have to provide a direct link to your reviews, for them to count?

No, it's not like that - we were discussing how some people weren't putting as much effort as possible into their reviews and so xIDoL put some thought into what had been said and improved his technique. We are giving him praise for this.

It's nothing to do with scoring points in the RRC, it's to do with impressing your fellow reviewers with your technique and views on the pieces that we look at.

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Ah! Well I read it wrong.

I thought xIDOL wanted us to vote for his flash/music, and I also didn't type my question correctly, it was meant to say..

"Do you have to provide a direct link to your flashes, for them to count in the list?"

It's been a tiring few days :/

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Hey, could you people review my (well, our) new flash, Newgrounds Intro Collab, if you want to...

Thanks,
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May I request a review for my new song?

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Sorrow Knows Many Names is my most recent song, and I would love to have some constructive criticism on it. I should probably tell you the recording quality is not by any means fantastic and you may need to turn up the volume a little. I hope you will take my lack of ability to achieve better recording quality at the moment under consideration when you review. I really put my all into this song, I hope you like it. This is my first ever request for you guys.


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To reviewers - this is the list of requests made between my last update and now. It's a 'preview' of the list that will be posted on Sunday or Monday - Haggard will probably tally the points for these reviews in 10 days time - on the 15th September. If you haven't already completed them, I suggest you first review some stuff from Haggard's list on page 183.

To requestors - if you made a request since my last list and it is not listed below, I have made a mistake. Being human, I may potentially have gotten the link wrong. Let me know in either case.
If you make a request after this post, it won't be included until next Thursday/Friday's update.
The Sunday/Monday list is just a repost of this.

General Rules for Requesters:
If you are planning on requesting reviews, please:
- Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
- Make no more than 3 requests within one week.
- Respond to reviews.
- Be patient. Due to the points system, you may not see reviews until up to two weeks after you request.
- Do NOT request without posting a link.
- Do NOT just say "Review everything" or just link to your profile.
- Do NOT request reviews for the same submission more than once.

Movie Requests:(5)
A new clock! by Joao (sistem69)
Gein kills the kk by Gein
The Dropping Egg Collab by Argentin
Ode to Elevator Music by Trevor Wiles (SprintT)
Newgrounds Intro Collab by fish1892

Game Requests:(4)
NG Character Quiz by yoshi77777
GTFTN1 - Scanlines by Marsupial
Clyde's Revenge! by Zach (newnerdproductionsTM)
Dress Our King! by ThaDj

Audio Requests:(14)
The First Sunrise Original Mix by FlamingFirebolt
stories of autumn by Stephan (riemannSum)
p4c-I'llBeLovin[LostSoul rmx] by p4c
<==Cry Out In Terror==> by DjCompass
Hacsev Jazz by Hacsev
Proclamation for two clarinets by El-Scotto1
Bagatelle for two Clarinets by El-Scotto1
8-biterror by cpukilla101
Paff! by Fredrik Svensson (svere)
Sleep In Your Tomb by The Bad Man (Bad-Man-Incorporated) (reccommended by Corky52)
Wats goin on? by Your Master (KlanMaster911)
Last Impression by svinepels
==(Deep Blue Clouds)== by SBB
Sorrow Knows Many Names by MusicMyOxygen

You get points for reviewing recommendations as if they were requests.
You may make a recommendation if you reviewed 100% of the previous weeks requests and recommendations. It should be over 3 days old and have under 50 reviews.

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More requests of all types.

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Starting uni in a couple of weeks. It looks like I'm staying at home, so I could concievably keep doing the update. To be honest, though, I'd appreciate a break from list-maintaining. So, perfect-insanity, if you're still happy to take over for a while, I'd appreciate it.

At 9/2/08 01:54 AM, Gu-rrilla wrote:
At 9/1/08 09:25 AM, Haggard wrote: Leaving the List :( :
aldlv, Gu-rrilla
Can't blame you, I've been having some tough issues to deal with. I was wondering if you guys could take me back. I would like to re-apply to the Review Request Club.

Re-applying is just the same as joining for the first time. Do a bunch of reviews from either Haggard's last list, or the one above, then let us know your starting points total either by this Sunday or next (depending upon which list you chose) and you'll be added to the list. :-)

At 9/3/08 06:49 PM, phantomlassuk wrote: I dont think i will be doing any more reviews, for a while. I have come to the decision to quit this club, for now. Ive not been happy for a while i been finding it to much ,and dont have the time at the moment. I really wanted to carry on but found the pressure ,i was putting myself under is to much. So you can remove me from the list?, but is it okay if i want to come back in the future again?. This sucks i loved the idea but i think i rather do reviews, in my own time. Thanks i liked writing reviews.

Sorry to hear that. Like Haggard says, don't feel obliged to maintain a perfect record if you wanna stay in the club - you could skip all the audio for a while, maybe only doing movies/games?

Well you know what's best - if you need a break, we'll still be here whenever you want to do some more reviewing.

Stay funky.


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Hi, I was wondering if some of you guys could review this for me?
Thanks.

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