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review this plz
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/39 8700

Any way I can join?

Any way I can join?

I'm sorry about all the reviews I've done so far, but that guy was being really mean and stupid. I'll actually write cool stuff if i can join. Look, you're even in my sig!

I'd say no, since all your reviews are the same and obvious abuse of the review system.

I have a question, Are we supposed to give good reviews to be members? look, It's like this, there was two flash movies that i found boring and didn't like, so I (in a good language) said so in the reviewing, and then the creator said something like "The RRC wants me to make good reviews"

Look, if I'm supposed to give good reviews only, sorry I don't want to be a part (and i really hope It's not the case), because seriously, anybody can post a "B" flash (all respect to clocks) and then come here and tell us to give good reviews for it

No disrespect to the creator of the flash, but if you ask for reviews, you ask for both bad and good, and you should be thankful that I didn't give you the low rating and very low review that i wanted to give you and i actually gave you a higher rating than what i wanted and a better review...

At 1/4/08 07:57 AM, Unknown2dark wrote: I have a question, Are we supposed to give good reviews to be members? look, It's like this, there was two flash movies that i found boring and didn't like, so I (in a good language) said so in the reviewing, and then the creator said something like "The RRC wants me to make good reviews"

By that token, Bahamut responded to you, indicating that the RRC wants good reviews in the notion that they are constructive and helpful to the author of the flash.

You don't have to like the flash (Though, considering I was in it, I can't imaging why you didn't) to leave a review, just be constructive in your criticism of it, rather than saying "It just doesn't work"

Read the reviews from other RRC members for the same flash and I'm sure you'll see what I mean.

At 1/4/08 08:16 AM, Coop83 wrote: By that token, Bahamut responded to you, indicating that the RRC wants good reviews in the notion that they are constructive and helpful to the author of the flash.

You don't have to like the flash (Though, considering I was in it, I can't imaging why you didn't) to leave a review, just be constructive in your criticism of it, rather than saying "It just doesn't work"

Read the reviews from other RRC members for the same flash and I'm sure you'll see what I mean.

Uh, well i told him what I didn't like, shouldn't that be a clue to let him know what he should improve?

At 1/4/08 08:37 AM, Unknown2dark wrote: Uh, well i told him what I didn't like, shouldn't that be a clue to let him know what he should improve?

Don't you feel you were being a little harsh? Bahamut is a good flash artist and just to lambast him like you have seems a little bitchy. Maybe tell him how you envisioned it, give some examples and go into detail. Where were the examples of the poor voices? Graham Junior Brothers being out of sync? My substandard mic?

At 1/3/08 09:01 PM, queerzbot wrote: Any way I can join?

Um... Well, I looked at the reviews you left for that one author and they are awful. When you're back from your review ban, consider writing some constructive reviews, before re-applying to join.

At 1/4/08 08:56 AM, Coop83 wrote: Don't you feel you were being a little harsh? Bahamut is a good flash artist and just to lambast him like you have seems a little bitchy. Maybe tell him how you envisioned it, give some examples and go into detail. Where were the examples of the poor voices? Graham Junior Brothers being out of sync? My substandard mic?

Oh ok, I'll try to be better next time in reviews (dunno how, but i will try), and look not because everyone loved him that means i have to too you know, and btw, I didn't lambast (whatever that means) him, I said that the first part is better (and he didn't like that i accidentally watched from the second to the first), and i also said sorry about 3 times, seriously... and I'm sorry that I didn't tell him where are the poor voices parts, I will try to be more detailed next time X_X

At 1/4/08 02:07 PM, Unknown2dark wrote: Oh ok, I'll try to be better next time in reviews (dunno how, but i will try)

You answered your own question with this:

I will try to be more detailed next time X_X

Just be more detailed. Not only say: "The were some bad parts in the voice acting."
But tell him WHERE those are (ie "the voice 'Character X' was hard to understand').

Don't just write: "The graphics are bad." but tell the author what exactly you found bad about the graphics and maybe give him advice on how the author can improve his graphics (use an other tool, looking at drawing tutorials, etc.).

Bahamut didn't meant to say that you or the RRC should only give 10/10 reviews, he just meant that your review wasn't that helpful; because being helpful is what the RRC is all about ;) .

At 1/4/08 07:20 PM, Haggard wrote: Bahamut didn't meant to say that you or the RRC should only give 10/10 reviews, he just meant that your review wasn't that helpful; because being helpful is what the RRC is all about ;) .

Okay, so btw, when will the new week begin?

I'd love 2 join. I really need some reveiws 4 my game.

At 1/4/08 02:07 PM, Unknown2dark wrote: Oh ok, I'll try to be better next time in reviews (dunno how, but i will try), and look not because everyone loved him that means i have to too you know,

I don't like him because he is popular. I like his flash, because they make me laugh. Otherwise, I wouldn't have requested (begged) him to add me as a character.

and btw, I didn't lambast (whatever that means) him,

Harshly criticise is what lambast means. Personally, I thought that it was a little on the harsh side. If you've got to criticise someone's work, tell them how to take it forward. You've just basically said "NO!"

I said that the first part is better (and he didn't like that i accidentally watched from the second to the first), and i also said sorry about 3 times, seriously... and I'm sorry that I didn't tell him where are the poor voices parts, I will try to be more detailed next time X_X

That's ok, you've given us the indication that you're going to deal with the detail next time. I'm willing to let you try and if you've got any queries about it, let me know.

At 1/5/08 12:51 AM, Unknown2dark wrote: Okay, so btw, when will the new week begin?

Basically, when milinko959 posts an update. I'd think it will be on Sunday, but we'll have a lot to do, as there have been quite a few requests pouring in over these past 2 weeks. Trawl through them and review them, so that you're ahead of the game :)

At 1/5/08 03:20 AM, Kieran123 wrote: I'd love 2 join. I really need some reveiws 4 my game.

Fatty rainbow 2 This game? Next time provide us a link and we'll leave reviews. I'll sort this one when I get a free moment.

McZero wrote me a PM and requested to review this flash of him and to post that request in this thread.
He can't do it himself because he is banned at the moment.

Alright I'm new here but this sounds cool. So I'd like to join and start reviewing.

Finally got all of the reviews done for this week, or at least I hope I did, I'm too tired to check myself.

Will review earlier next week....

Review Por Favor.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1 15656

A short loop that wont loop, not for me anyway. Review if you want, its short, but Id like to see what you think if it did loop, can you imagine that and review on that?

Another week, another update. Over 11 reviews added to each request last week, nice job! We've got a lot of audio requests, thanks to glubgluby (I found his name quite hard to type!).

Listening to: Infected Mushroom

General Rules for New Reviewers
If you are planning on completing requests, please do the following:
-Post in this thread to let us know you plan on reviewing.
-Understand the points system and keep track of your own score. From now on, I will only add you to the list if you post your own score after the first week.

General Rules for Requesters
If you are planning on requesting review, please do the following:
-Post a direct link to the submission(s) you want reviewed.
-DO NOT request without putting a link, I don't have the time or patience to find all this crap.
-DO NOT say "Review everything" for the same reason above.
-DO NOT request the same submission more than once.

Flash Requests:
Handbook by xthesnarfx
Hippi - Other White Drug by Mr-Shark
Let's Build A Snowman by Darkside7000
Bahamut "happy New Year" by Bahamut
Capture The Flag: Episode 2 by Aeonstars
Socialist World Republic by Kenzu

Audio Requests:
simplepiano by aldlv
[song of the lost] by glubgluby
techno song: evil pickles by glubgluby
AOE2 main theme by glubgluby
Kirby Last Boss Theme by glubgluby
fun with drums by glubgluby
peace at last! by glubgluby
h-ween by glubgluby
march of the glubglubs2 by glubgluby
march of the glubglubs by glubgluby

Coop83's Spotlight Submission for the week: Pocki Puzzle by Thomas Aquinas

Points:
**Please also keep track of your own points. If you see something missing, I probably made a mistake**
**To be on the list, you must make at least one review, posters only will not be counted**
5 points for a review on a requested movie/game
7 points for a review on a requested audio
+1 point for putting "Review Request Club" at the bottom of a requested review
3 points for posting at least once throughout the week
5 points for referring a new member (must mention you in first post)
7 points for reviewing all requests for that week

Points/Completion Rate/Weekly Completion/User
1. 2759 | 405/425 | 95.29% | 7/7 | milinko959
2. 2230 | 316/390 | 81.03% | 7/7 | Coop83
3. 1148 | 162/423 | 38.30% | 0/7 | Imacow
4. 717 | 111/430 | 25.81% | 0/7 | Bezman
5. 524 | 68/68 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Little-Rena
6. 374 | 50/50 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Haggard
7. 304 | 41/42 | 97.62% | 7/7 | NintendoMadness
8. 255 | 46/46 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Shanus
9. 241 | 34/257 | 13.23% | 4/7 | Auz
10. 211 | 33/168 | 19.64% | 0/7 | stick-man-dude
11. 200 | 32/32 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Cyberdevil
12. 196 | 26/308 | 8.44% | 0/7 | Seamonky
13. 84 | 12/15 | 80.00% | 7/7 | AnalPenguinFarming
14. 69 | 11/32 | 34.38% | 0/7 | Sir-Nuts
15. 68 | 9/42 | 21.43% | 0/7 | dan00012
16. 55 | 7/29 | 24.14% | 2/7 | Phantox
17. 52 | 7/7 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Unknown2dark
18. 45 | 7/7 | 100.00% | 7/7 | shadowchaotailsevil3
19. 26 | 3/15 | 20.00% | 0/7 | aldlv
20. 22 | 3/42 | 7.14% | 0/7 | DELUCA2400
21. 20 | 3/7 | 42.86% | 3/7 | undeadcl0wn-4
22. 19 | 3/32 | 9.38% | 0/7 | Oldskoolkammy
23. 18 | 3/50 | 6.00% | 0/7 | JaconWes

Requests this week: 7
Total all time: 430
Reviews this week: 79
Average per member: 3.4
Average per movie: 11.3

New To the List
Unknown2dark, undeadcl0wn-4, shadowchaotailsevil3

Leaving the List
Abyssus, Abs55

All Requests Completed
milinko959, Coop83, Little-Rena, Haggard, NintendoMadness, Shanus, Cyberdevil, AnalPenguinFarming, Unknown2dark, shadowchaotailsevil3

At 1/6/08 03:36 PM, milinko959 wrote: Another week, another update. Over 11 reviews added to each request last week, nice job! We've got a lot of audio requests, thanks to glubgluby (I found his name quite hard to type!).

Hmmm, quite good, and I'll do them tomorrow I don't want a repeat of this week, where I did them at 2 in the morning, very stressful...

Listening to: Infected Mushroom

Sweet!!!

8. 255 | 46/46 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Shanus

Mmmm, into the top ten, playing with the big boys now!!!

New To the List
Unknown2dark, undeadcl0wn-4, shadowchaotailsevil3

Welcome!

Leaving the List
Abyssus, Abs55

Bye :(

All Requests Completed
milinko959, Coop83, Little-Rena, Haggard, NintendoMadness, Shanus, Cyberdevil, AnalPenguinFarming, Unknown2dark, shadowchaotailsevil3

Hmmm, another week of 100%, nice. THought I wasn't gonna make it there, but I did. Congrats to all the other user on the list, new and old. Hope ya can keep it up

At 1/6/08 03:36 PM, milinko959 wrote: 5. 524 | 68/68 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Little-Rena

I'm in the top 5, hurrah! Maintaining 100% too :3

Thanks for another update!

At 1/6/08 03:36 PM, milinko959 wrote: Flash Requests:
Audio Requests:

Quite a lot requests this week. Glad that I've done them all already :D .

Points/Completion Rate/Weekly Completion/User
1. 2759 | 405/425 | 95.29% | 7/7 | milinko959
2. 2230 | 316/390 | 81.03% | 7/7 | Coop83
3. 1148 | 162/423 | 38.30% | 0/7 | Imacow
4. 717 | 111/430 | 25.81% | 0/7 | Bezman
5. 524 | 68/68 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Little-Rena
6. 374 | 50/50 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Haggard

Wow, no chance of ranking up for a long time now.... I won't catch Little-Rena, because he's keeping at 100%, too. And Bezman and Imacow are just too far away :( .

Reviews this week: 79
Average per member: 3.4
Average per movie: 11.3

Great averages. Especially average per movie. Keep it up, guys!

New To the List
Unknown2dark, undeadcl0wn-4, shadowchaotailsevil3

Hi, enjoy your stay!

Leaving the List
Abyssus, Abs55

Bye bye :(

All Requests Completed
milinko959, Coop83, Little-Rena, Haggard, NintendoMadness, Shanus, Cyberdevil, AnalPenguinFarming, Unknown2dark, shadowchaotailsevil3

The party gets bigger and bigger...

At 1/6/08 03:36 PM, milinko959 wrote:

19. 26 | 3/15 | 20.00% | 0/7 | aldlv

hey!... why you don't count my points? I did 8 of 9 of the glubgluby request...
& I did put a review on xthesnarfx, Mr-Shark, Darkside7000 & Kenzu flash....

I was the first on most of them
I'm the guy that post

//ReviewRequestClub

Hi can you review this flash of mine? I want you to review the animation not the sound, KTHXBAI

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1 15706
Its me singing, have fun xD

At 1/6/08 03:36 PM, milinko959 wrote: We've got a lot of audio requests, thanks to glubgluby (I found his name quite hard to type!).

And it's nabbed me some extra points. :p

7. 304 | 41/42 | 97.62% | 7/7 | NintendoMadness

Damn, I'd have 100% if i didn't miss one reveiw. >:(

All Requests Completed
milinko959, Coop83, Little-Rena, Haggard, NintendoMadness, Shanus, Cyberdevil, AnalPenguinFarming, Unknown2dark, shadowchaotailsevil3

This list is growing!

At 1/6/08 03:36 PM, milinko959 wrote: New To the List
All Requests Completed
17. 52 | 7/7 | 100.00% | 7/7 | Unknown2dark

WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII (wow that was stupid), anyways, thanks for putting me on the list...

Sorry for the double post, but I've a question

Coop83's Spotlight Submission for the week: Pocki Puzzle by Thomas Aquinas

Is that included of this weeks submission to review (in other words, do i get points for it?)

Can I join?
is it for audio too?
and it's a good idea.....
My song
Thanks, and I'll go check the stuff out.

At 1/7/08 02:42 AM, Jurian wrote: Can I join?
is it for audio too?
and it's a good idea.....
My song
Thanks, and I'll go check the stuff out.

How does it work?:P
sorry