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Meebs do you have the parts? Funguy isn't getting back to me on this part 2.

At 12/24/06 01:54 PM, EKublai wrote: Meebs do you have the parts? Funguy isn't getting back to me on this part 2.

nevermind I found it on ngcollabs

sry for postin so much but part two isn't workin for me so with your permissioin I think I'm gong to go with aprt 14 as I think that's still open.

for what it's worth here it is.

Part 14 -Ekublai

Are there any more open parts? If so could I just show some of the stuff I have? (It's not the best, but it's alright)

At 12/27/06 03:02 AM, Yhtomit wrote: Are there any more open parts? If so could I just show some of the stuff I have? (It's not the best, but it's alright)

I think at this point i can call myself master of this thread for at least the next few days. So, basically what I see in your only flash is sub-par skill and basic knowledge of flash and tweening. Seeing as you submitted this two days ago, I'm hesitant to give you a part, but if you can prove with a little five second animation that shows your best skill, you can have the part.

You know what? scratch that, I think it would be much if you were to just do part 2 to the best of your abilities. Read page 1 of the thread thoroughly so you know the requirements. Any questions. I check the thread often. gl

Music for Part 2 right click and save as.

Thx!
If you want to see something else of mine, I took part in the 3rd Weekly Comic Collab, mine's called 'Yum!'

I title this post the following

BSC's New Years Resolution Post

Part 1 (Short Part): TheHappySheep - FINISHED
Part 2 (Short Part): Yhtomit - Unfinished (Questionable Skill)

Part 3 (Long Part): Hamplant - FINISHED
Part 4 (Long Part): MadandUgly - FINISHED

Part 5 (Long Part): OPEN

Part 6 (Short Part): FunGuy - FINISHED

Part 7 ( Short Part): Allemansing - FINISHED

Part 8 (Long Part): Meebs - FINISHED
Part 9 (Long Part): British Moose - FINISHED
Part 10 (Long Part): FunGuy - FINISHED

Part 11 (Long Part): Meebs/Killerangel? - UNFINISHED

Part 12 (Short Part): TheHappySheep - FINISHED

Part 13 (Short Part): Reyals - UNFINISHED (See below)
Part 14 (Long Part): Ekublai - Finished, but need to Send in

Part 15 (Long Part): Allemansing - FINISHED

Part 16 (Long Part): EKublai - Finished, but need to Send in

Part 17 (Long Part): Meebs - FINISHED
Part 18 (Long Part): MrButters - FINISHED
Part 19 (LAST PART!): FunGuy - FINISHED

So basically someone needs to contact Reyals (I guess that'd be me.) and part 5 is the only open part since Brit moose left. I've checked with meebs getting it onwith his new comp.

I realize this is a stupid nit-picky thing to do but I wanna talk about some of the finished parts by some of these guys. Now, I'm not trying to be some authoritarian dictator to this collab, cuz it's all your guys decisions, but I really want this to do well and I kinda (maybe) want to try to redo some of the parts. *braces for rejection.* To be fair to you guys and to the authors whose parts were already accepted I'll just name "trouble"

The one real weak part so far I think is Killer Angel's part 11. Now the .fla has killer angel doing it. Did you redo the part? then awesome.

If this is the case, the the only ones I'm really concerned with is part 2 and hamplant's part 3. It's alright enough if you think so.

On Reyals, He's been active enough on the bbs and inactive enough in the thread for me to come to believe he's forgotten us, so unless you already have that info I'll check in with him.

On part five, I have a good friend that is also a fair hand at flash, I could ask him to do something if you want.

BYE EVERYBODY! I AM OFF TO PUERTO RICO til the 6th. hope this progresses well until I can get some hot puerto rican wireless action. good bye and god speed! Ay yai yai yai yai yai yai yai yai yai yai yai!

that was supposed to be my dramatic exit.

Oh btw Reyals just told me to open up his part.

I have a first draft version of my part, I'm probably going to edit it in different ways. Any suggestions?

Part 2

Oops. Link doesn't work. Well this is the address:
http://denvish.net/ulf/1167297509_Bunny Suicide Collab Part.swf

thx

Sorry I couldn't do the extra part, however, this collab seems to be coming together in a somewhat-lethargic manner, so all is well ^^

yeh, if there aren't any new developments in this collab before i go back to school, I'm thinking of leaving. Has anyone got an idea on how I could Improve my peice for the collab? The link is in one of the above posts.

Hey everyone updating from puerto rico.
well ym (can't remember the rest) it's definitely better than I expected graphicswise tho it's pretty far from great. I suggest you take out those flower roots. All around the use of really thick lines confuses the part and doesn't look good. Tryto think out the lines. And maybe make the blood look a little more realistic. I don't know how good you are at shading, but if you think you can fix those things it would be much better. You can never go wrong if youhave more stuff going on.

Thx. I'll work on that. At last I can make a change to my part. (it's just been taking up space on my harddrive past few days)

http://denvish.net/ulf/1167590859_Bunny%20Sui cide%20Collab%20Part.php

Right, thinner lines, now I've got to work on the blood, right? Tell me what you think of the version I've linked to above.

How would you make the blood more realistic? Just asking for advise.

At 12/31/06 01:50 PM, Yhtomit wrote: How would you make the blood more realistic? Just asking for advise.

no problem. you have the general shape and motion that the blood should make, but it looks like you just took a big brush and blotched out some red which is fin except agains it makes it looks to thick. I would suggest make it so there are more pieces of blood that trail away but are smaller. How it looks is pretty simple to fix. Like any liquid blood has a dark part, regular part, lighter part, and highlight. So what you need is a basic color of blood, I like something slightly darker than regular red. Color the middle portion of the blood that color, how much is your choice but it has to be the middle. Then you pick a darker shade of the red with color mixer, and color the portion farthest away from the light. Then pick a lighter red than the one that you began with an color the part closest to the light. Then pick pure white with the smallest brush (it's best when ou zoom in to about 400% to do it. With short lines that are scatter, outline the blood. You can put it in other places if it looks good, but you don't want there to be too much white.

thatshould be good for now. Somethingthat also came to my attention was the fact that the rope doesn't connect to anything and just sort of falls.

THis is optional, but it will definitely increase your chances of getting in. Since your drawings themselves aren't top-notch you cansave that by applying physics to the animation. (i.e when the bunny head flies up it's ears go down) Totally up to you.

So... hope you didn't fall asleep. You definitely have a chance tho.

At 12/31/06 01:50 PM, Yhtomit wrote: How would you make the blood more realistic? Just asking for advise.

no problem. you have the general shape and motion that the blood should make, but it looks like you just took a big brush and blotched out some red which is fin except agains it makes it looks to thick. I would suggest make it so there are more pieces of blood that trail away but are smaller. How it looks is pretty simple to fix. Like any liquid blood has a dark part, regular part, lighter part, and highlight. So what you need is a basic color of blood, I like something slightly darker than regular red. Color the middle portion of the blood that color, how much is your choice but it has to be the middle. Then you pick a darker shade of the red with color mixer, and color the portion farthest away from the light. Then pick a lighter red than the one that you began with an color the part closest to the light. Then pick pure white with the smallest brush (it's best when ou zoom in to about 400% to do it. With short lines that are scatter, outline the blood. You can put it in other places if it looks good, but you don't want there to be too much white.

thatshould be good for now. Somethingthat also came to my attention was the fact that the rope doesn't connect to anything and just sort of falls.

THis is optional, but it will definitely increase your chances of getting in. Since your drawings themselves aren't top-notch you cansave that by applying physics to the animation. (i.e when the bunny head flies up it's ears go down) Totally up to you.

So... hope you didn't fall asleep. You definitely have a chance tho.

Thx for the advice, just needed a tip to get me started. I wouldn't fall asleep, I'm gonna stay up to see in the new year. :)

I'll do one, show you, and then work on the other, that ok?

At 12/31/06 03:28 PM, Yhtomit wrote: I'll do one, show you, and then work on the other, that ok?

yeah, in fact I'd prefer it.

well, then, here it is:
http://denvish.net/ulf/1167612975_Bunny%20Sui cide%20Collab%20Part.php

Oh, and could you help my flash through the portal? It's called Homeland, & it's UJ at the moment. I'm busy right now seeing if there are any reviews to respond to.

Oh, and, sorry bout the double post, but could you tell me who you're thinking of co-authoring? I'm just curious.

First of all two big things about you're part

The white space at the end at the top of the screen. Also I liked before how you zoomed in you can go back to that. Blood color... again. :/

I 5ed your cartoon. I like how you wrote the song. It's good.

In fact, I myself am trying to get into a position to be co-authored. They tried to do this voting thing awhile back while I wasn't really in it, and all the votes went to meebs. So I have no idea besides Meebs himself and Funguy_ca as certainties.

take a little more time with this one. Try to improve some of the stuff that just doesn't look right. Of it doesn't look right to you, it probably won't to me. Like that white space or the fact that there's nothing in the background or again, the blood shading wins a lot of points...

But enough about flash. HAPPY NEW YEARS EVERYONE. Or at least in a few hours for me.

At 12/31/06 08:49 PM, EKublai wrote: First of all two big things about you're part

Right, ok.

The white space at the end at the top of the screen. Also I liked before how you zoomed in you can go back to that. Blood color... again. :/

Yeh, I've done something about the blood colour. watch the updated version at http://denvish.net/ulf/1167659058_Bunny Suicide Collab Part.php

I 5ed your cartoon. I like how you wrote the song. It's good.

Thx :D

In fact, I myself am trying to get into a position to be co-authored. They tried to do this voting thing awhile back while I wasn't really in it, and all the votes went to meebs. So I have no idea besides Meebs himself and Funguy_ca as certainties.

Ah, and with Meebs vanished (where did he go?) we won't know any others til we get back.

take a little more time with this one. Try to improve some of the stuff that just doesn't look right. Of it doesn't look right to you, it probably won't to me. Like that white space or the fact that there's nothing in the background or again, the blood shading wins a lot of points...

Yeah, the white at the top was because i didn't set the flash size on Denvish to 550x350.

But enough about flash. HAPPY NEW YEARS EVERYONE.

Happy New Years!

Good now to make it seem like it's being propelled by a liquid than a shit, add some thin white strokes around the edges to make it shine.

Make it shine. Doesn't reducing the alpha do that as well?