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rate my scene 2006-04-01 16:00:07 Reply

i w3as wondering if you guys would be kind enough to rate this scene...? it's not a movie, so i can't submit it yet, but i am quite happy with this scene, and you can tell me whatever you don't like about it, or what i should add, but just don't say ninjas, i got a lot of that already.

please enjoi

http://www.sheezyart.com/view/704771/

ps..: wait a bit for it to load so that the gray part goes away

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 16:07:04 Reply

nice dude


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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 16:09:24 Reply

thanks

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 17:09:51 Reply

Tht thing was bad (the good bad not bad as in stink ) that was especialy good for an animation done in only 1 and a half hours submit it o newgrounds I'll vote 5 on it.

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 17:14:13 Reply

That's pretty awesome, the only thing is that you should ease the tweens of the thingys hanging down from the tree.

4/5


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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 17:34:49 Reply

Better than anything that I could ever do.


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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 17:35:46 Reply

Very very good... my two cents worth of comment is that the moon looks, to me, a tad... odd.

Excellent work tho.

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 17:48:52 Reply

Nice graphics... you should submit it too Newgrounds!

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 17:52:28 Reply

nice, now finish the movie and submit it, if you keep it up it should turn out with a decent score.

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 19:21:16 Reply

Everything is good except 1 thing: add tween ease!


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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 19:21:44 Reply

thanks everyone, but the nooblets will shoot it down in a minute like, "That's not a movie, it's a background" and stuff. but it might be used in an upcoming animation, so keep your eyes peeled.

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 19:47:10 Reply

Nice, But make sure the animation of the characters are just as good or ppl will be drawn to the background.

Very good tho!=D

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 19:56:28 Reply

Now that sir, is the right way to use filters =D

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 19:59:30 Reply

At 4/1/06 07:47 PM, Smeegle_Puff27 wrote: Nice, But make sure the animation of the characters are just as good or ppl will be drawn to the background.

Very good tho!=D

thanks, yeah...that would be hard.

and thanks taylor, people have a hard time with them for some reason

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 20:07:24 Reply

oh!! now I remember you, from the take on me collab, it's no wonder you've been able to pull that bg off.
anyway, good luck I'll be anticipating your next update.

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 20:23:14 Reply

take on me? oh the collab on sheezy? that's not done yet. lol, i didn't know what the title was called.

so you guys think if i submitted this stand alone it wouldn't get blammed?

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 20:36:11 Reply

it has at least a 98.5% chance of blammage.

I mean, it's good, but a scene alone isn't enough for the NG crowd.

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 21:54:22 Reply

ok, and i hope you meant "close to me" collab, cause that's the only one i've done

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 22:01:53 Reply

Thats not bad at all, did you make it all in lash or did you draw it on paper then import and trace over?

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 22:02:32 Reply

eeh, not bad..

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 22:07:26 Reply

At 4/1/06 10:01 PM, Uknown_Game_Fan wrote: Thats not bad at all, did you make it all in lash or did you draw it on paper then import and trace over?

all 100% flash on the fly what not

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 22:09:38 Reply

it's awesome.

I want to learn how to do that effects... I'm new to Flash...

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 22:15:13 Reply

well don't shoot too high, just use filters simply at first

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 22:57:39 Reply

At 4/1/06 09:54 PM, MaxV wrote: ok, and i hope you meant "close to me" collab, cause that's the only one i've done

but your name seems to be in this one O-o

http://www.newground..m/portal/view/256082

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-01 23:13:40 Reply

8/10, some of the stuff glowed or was shaded odd, but other then that very nice work.


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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-02 00:57:00 Reply

Wonderful, make it part of a proper movie and that could be front page material!

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Response to rate my scene 2006-04-02 01:00:13 Reply

At 4/1/06 10:57 PM, -Taylor- wrote:
At 4/1/06 09:54 PM, MaxV wrote: ok, and i hope you meant "close to me" collab, cause that's the only one i've done
but your name seems to be in this one O-o

http://www.newground..m/portal/view/256082

i know, i've been asked about that before, that's not me. check my profile. i've only submitted 1 thing b4.