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Chapter 11: The Escape

Ozcar stood at the mouth of the cave, put his pistol back into his pocket and swung a backpack off his shoulder and onto the ground. Behind him were reinforcements... Shrapnel, Zerok, Canas and Maus.

Allah, Pancake and Jim ran to the cave's entrance, it was a good 60 meters, and they could make it in less than half a minute.

Ozcar opened the backpack and took out three bottles and a fistful of matches. He broke each of them on the ground near the mouth of the cave and grabbed a small rock, about the size of his fist.

He took all but one of the matches and through them into the pile of liquid on the mouth of the cave. He then struck the match and then lit one more match, which lit the liquid and all the other matches ablaze.

With glee, Ozcar yelled into the cave, at the three who were running towards him.

"It's Russian vodka... nearly 90% alchohol... These flames are nearly the size of two of you stacked together... Also, my friends here have backpacks; each with a bottle of this stuff. We can keep this flame runnin' for atleast 2-3 hours. You'll die of lack of oxygen by then."

Allah pulled out his uzi and shot randomly through the flames.

Ecks walked over to pancake and told her specifically:

"Listen, on the count of 3, we each jump through the flames. I'll take care of Ozcar, Pancake, as soon as we jump out, shoot the backpacks, hopefully there'll be some sort of explosives. Also, tell Allah and Jim to do the same."

Pancake walked over and told Allah and Jim what to do. They ok'd Ecks' plan, Ecks began to count...

"1...2...3!"

Ecks ran as fast as he could with his blade in his hand, and jumped through the wall of flames and cut straight through Ozcar's bulletproof vest, and sliced his chest open like it was butter. Ozcar fell over onto the ground and died of blood loss, within seconds.

Pancake and Allah then burst through together and shot as many rounds as they could at the backpacks, nothing happened, other than one of the backpacks getting drenched in alchohol.

"Damn!" Allah yelled.

Jim then burst through the cave and shot at the backpacks even more, and the same thing happened.

Ecks ran off, and the others followed, Shrapnel and Zerok were about to chase after them when Maus blocked them off.

"Relax... Sarai... Oops, I mean, Turandot will probably dispose of them."

Zerok replied to Maus... "Shut it you lesbian, we could've killed them easily, but you had to stop us, christ. What's worse is that retard Sarai changed her name after watching that crappy opera on cable."

Ecks and the others were running through the thick woods, when something dropped from a tree onto them, it was a small Japanese woman with a katana. She landed on Ecks and got him in hold.

"Get the hell off of me, bitch!"

After hearing this she grabbed his left arm and twisted, it then snapped.

"AAAUGHH!!!"

His arm was broken. She got off Ecks, and flipped him over, and put the edge of her katana to his throat.

"I would kill you... But you remind me too much of my 'pet'... You see, he died a little while back..."

"I look like... Jesus... You sick freak!"

Allah, Pancake and Jim pointed their guns at Turandot.

"Looks like I've been bested. Tell you what, if you let me leave, I won't kill you."

Allah yelled furiously... "You snapped his arm, do you really think we're going to let you go peacefully?!"

Ecks then yelled to him. "Just let her go, she has a vest on, half of the bullets wouldn't even hurt her. She'd probably kill me, along with one of you. Maybe even all of us..."

Turandot walked away while saying:

"He's right... I doubt you could even take me on my worst day... I'll be going, now.... Later."

And then she left.

To Be Continued.

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I'm still haunting you.....

Doesn't your person hear the voices in his head?

blahjargh.

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At 6/26/06 04:12 AM, Black_Cat wrote:

Doesn't your person hear the voices in his head?

Yes...

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The story seems to be coming along nicely, glad to see it's back on track! Just a little sidenote here, bulletproof vests will only stop a bullet from a normal distance away. At point-blank, the bullet will still penetrate. Also, even at normal range, the impact will still break bones and cause serious damage, it just won't penetrate the skin. Sorry to interject my knowledge of bullet-proof vests, but it was starting to bother me. The story is very good so far! Also very gory. One little thing I would tune down in your recent chapters is your mod-bashing. I would stop or at least make it more subtle

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Ni hao :/

I didn't see this thread had come back from the dead but when I did of course I read it all from the new stories. It's pretty good, although I always look for more description, especially deaths ;)

Anyway, I didn't change my name for a TV reason! Simply because it's a bit strange being a mod but also having one of your real names always used in stories :) So anyway, Turandot was a Chinese princess, who well, Wiki it :/

Also <---- Chinese, not Japanese :/ (Japanese girls cry too much with the ONLY exception of Mitsuko), Chinese get the job done :/

Anyway, thank you for putting me in. *hug*

-Sarai / Turan

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Jim, it's in the future... bullet proof vests are better then... Let's just say they're specially made... Or something...

Chapter 12: Whittling Down the Hunters

Ecks slowly got up off the ground, and slowly began to walk towards Turandot.

"Are you all... This strong?... The hunters?"

"How do you know we're hunters?"

"I got a peak into the Mexican's backpack, besides the liquor, all it was was weapons... So I took a wild guess."

"Oh... Well, I'm the second in strength to Shrapnel, and he's considered the strongest. Although, he's been beaten up before by some of the other hunters."

"Some? How many of you are there?"

"20..."

"That's funny, because I found an envelope in my backpack. It said there were only ten."

"That's not my fault. Bye."

Ecks stopped her.

"Wait What about my arm?!"

"It's not THAT badly snapped, it could heal in 4-10 days, atmost."

"Ok... Oh, and where are you going? to kill some more people?"

"Pretty much."

Turandot ran off, and dissappeared into the forest.

Allah put down his gun.

"Wow, she practically screams lesbian."

Jim burst out laughing. Ecks grinned and walked off.

The others followed.

Meanwhile, Turandot returned to the group of hunters.

"They got away."

The others were mad at her, but she simply stormed off.

Minutes later the group split up. Maus found a group of people, there were 4 of them. She ran up behind them and pulled out a cutlass, a bit smaller than Ecks', and sliced one of them in half.

"Shit, Roboduck!"

The other three ran as fast as they could, and split up.

Maus charged after one, he had blondish hair, and pulled out a large scratched up combat knife.

"Hi there, my name's Marine, what's yours?"

Maus looked angry at his taunt. She swung at Marine and nicked his arm. ''That hurt!"

"Good!"

Marine took his knife and thrusted it into Maus' chest, it tore through her shirt, but was stopped by her vest. She took her cutlass and struck his leg, and cut through his pants. He yelled, and took his knife and cut Maus' right eye, and then lunged his knife nearly an inch through her eye socket.

He pulled out his knife.

"You know, girl, you're annoying, I think you should die now."

Marine grabbed her head and stabbed his knife through her temple, and killed her. Afterwards, he took her sword and ran to find his friends.

Meanwhile...

Jos and Shrike were walking toward Guillotine. Guillotine noticed them and looked at them with bloodlust in his eyes. He ran toward them and tackled Jos, and took a gun out from his pocket, shot him in the head, ad through the gun at Shrike. He was hit in the face by it, but wasn't phased. He pulled out a pistol from his pocket and shot at Guillotine. He blocked it with one of his arm plates.

"What the hell are you?!..."

Guillotine got up, and grabbed Shrike's throat, he then twisted and sqeueezed, and pulled up, and broke his neck, but didn't stop there, he pulled harder, and eventually decapitated Shrike.

And then, he walked off, to find his next victim.

To be Continued.

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At 6/27/06 01:22 AM, Turandot wrote: Ni hao :/

I didn't see this thread had come back from the dead but when I did of course I read it all from the new stories. It's pretty good, although I always look for more description, especially deaths ;)

Anyway, I didn't change my name for a TV reason! Simply because it's a bit strange being a mod but also having one of your real names always used in stories :) So anyway, Turandot was a Chinese princess, who well, Wiki it :/

I didn't know of the princess, so now I feel a tad bit stupid.

Also <---- Chinese, not Japanese :/ (Japanese girls cry too much with the ONLY exception of Mitsuko), Chinese get the job done :/

Crap, I knew something was wrong in your description... Oops...

Anyway, thank you for putting me in. *hug*

*Hugs back*

And thanks for the criticism. It makes me feel all snuggly inside when I know that I'm a good writer.

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A few more nice chapters since the last time i posted. Great work.

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Psst, Ecks. You blocked me from PMing. My bad for bein all stupid in the post. I got an actual description if you want it:

alias: Snypur
Description: Really tall & Lanky. Hoodie that covers most of face, Purple eyes (idk, just work with me), Dark blue jeans that always trip him up.
Ability/Item thinger: Can NEVER die, but can have limbs removed (Like The black night in monty Python) And uses big ass encycolpedia as weapon.

If you dont want too much comedic edges to it, You can just gimme an uzi =].

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At 6/27/06 02:37 AM, snypur wrote:

It's not because you're stupid, even though you are, it's because I Stopped taking registrations a while ago.

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Oh, well nvm then. I tried.

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Good chapter...

This reminds me, I should probably do the third chapter of my BBS story.

Wow, I take to long to write a chapter... How long has it been, three months or something?

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At 6/27/06 04:42 AM, Cabbs wrote:

Wow, you're totally clever, funny and witty.

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lol, i hope Maus doesn't see this...

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At 6/27/06 09:55 PM, Cabbs wrote:

At 6/27/06 04:44 AM, teh_ecks_bawks_hater wrote:

At 6/27/06 04:42 AM, Cabbs wrote:

Wow, you're totally clever, funny and witty.

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I kin kill you

Anyway, just because certain things have changed on the BBS, and I just banned you, I thought I'd better get in here with a good picture ;-)

If you kill me, I'll come back as a ghost :/

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Sarai... When in the hell were you allowed to post large pictures? oh well. TIME FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER, FUCKING YAY.

Chapter 13: Wade's Betrayal

At Wade's ship, Wade was again talking to his brother, Tom.

"Four dead? It hasn't even been a day!" Tom yelled into the phone.

"Yeah...They turned out to be pretty useless after the weak contestants died..."

"What the hell should we do?!"

"Tom, get every single person you can find that will kill the contestants and tell them to come here. I don't care if you have to go to the mafia, or some other group like that."

"How in the hell will I get them to come here?!"

"Bribe them, about $10,000 should do.

"Only ten thousand dollars?!"

"Each, yes."

"We don't have that kind of money!"

"Then lie.''

"What about after everyone's dead?''

"Most of them will be dead, too. I'm predicting only around 10 or 20 people to come alive out of this."

"Okay..."

"Oh, and tell them to kill EVERYONE, even the hunters, even the others that you wll have called in."

And with that, Tom was off, he took an hour boat ride to America, and landed in California. he managed to recruit nearly one hundred people in less than four hours, and then traveled back, with two extra boats, and nearly 14,000 pounds of weapons and ammunition.

"Jesus, that was quick, Tom."

Wade was back on the phone with Tom.

"Yeah, I had to tell most of the people that I'd give them around three or four million."

"WHAT?!?!"

"Heh heh... Sorry..."

The hundred people were briefed, and given weapons, and scattered about the islands.

Meanwhile...

Shrapnel, Zerok and Canas had found Guillotine. It was a standoff, Guillotine rolled up his sleeves and dashed towards Shrapnel. Shrapnel put up his fists and was about ready to fight, when gunshots suddenly started to fire. Shrapnel, Guillotine, Zerok and Canas looked over to a group of nearly 40 people, with nearly 10 people shooting. None hit anywhere fatal, most hit the vests or Guillotine's plates, the shooting stopped shortly after a mirage of smoke covered the plains where the four stood.

Guillotine looked over at Shrapnel.

"Truce?..."

Shrapnel and the other mods grinned.

"For now."

Shrapnel pulled out a grenade and hucked it at the group, it fell in the middle and exploded.

Zerok began counting. "12, 13, 14... 16 people hit by the grenade."

Shrapnel tossed a large knife over to Guillotine, who caught it and charged into the group and unleashed a bloodbath. He killed nearly ten people in less than two minutes.

One of the men yelled impulsively, "Are you guys the hunters?!"

Shrapnel answered. "Three of us yes. Why?''

"Because... Wade sent us to kill you!"

"Well, he put you in far over your head. You may be lucky to kill one or two of us, but the rest won't die, not to people as weak as you."

Guillotine ran over and cut the mans throat, and ended the conversation.

"Cut the chit chat, drag queen, I want to fucking finish these fags off."

"Isn't that a tad bit vulgar?", Zerok asked jokingly.

Zerok then brandished a large sword and began killing people left and right. Canas joined, while Shrapnel watched. Guillotine walked off unnoticed while they were finishing the group. After the fight was over, and Zerok and Canas were ankle deep in a lake of blood, Guillotine threw the knife back to Shrapnel, who was atleast two hundred meters away.

The knife landed by Shrapnel's foot. He picked it up, smiled and walked away in the opposite direction.

Canas started a conversation... "I guess Wade turned on us... That man said he was put upto the task by Wade..."

Shrapnel interjected. "Either he was lying, or Wade's now top on my hit list. I don't care, either suits me. And either way, I'm going to boat to 'talk' with him."

To be Continued.

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Nice new chapters... I read the last few today, and am just getting started on reading 13. IT BETTER BE GOOD.

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Chapter 14: The Pieces come together

Shrapnel, Zerok and Canas walked towards the boat, which was located about 3 miles from the shore of 'Donut Island'.

While Marine was traveling towards the place which he told his friends to meet him at... The shore of Donut Island.

Ecks, on the other hand, was traveling loosely, however, he was slowly walking to the same place as the other four, the Shore of Donut island... With Turandot, unnoticingly stalking them, looking to see what there next move was.

Guillotine bumped into Ecks while he was walking along... Guillotine noticed Turandot, and noticed Ecks' arm was wrapped up around his neck, by a small shirt.

He asked him one question... "So, is the Japanese girl behind you stalking you or something?"

Turandot jumped out of a nearby tree and swung a sword at Guillotine, which was stopped by the plate in his head. "Jesus Christ, bitch, even if I do have a plate I my head, that fucking hurt!"

"I'm Chinese!..."

Ecks looked unsuprised, while Jim, allah and Pancake were startled by Turandot. Ecks walked up and started to chat with Turandot and Guillotine. "So, why are you stalking me, and why the hell are you not dead from Turan's sword?"

"Because you're interesting... Oh, and who said you could call me Turan?" Turandot answered.

"Because I have a fucking plate in my head. What the hell kind of question is that?"

A voice came out from nowhere, one familiar to Turandot and Guillotine, but not to Ecks, Pancake, Allah, and Jim... It was Shrapnel's...

"Okay, Guillotine, why didn't you suddenly make an attempt to kill Turandot or Ecks like you did without thought or remorse to about... What, like, 7 people or somethig?"

Turandot looked over at Shrapnel, who had what looked like a body on his back.

Ecks, with curiosity yelled out to Shrapnel, "What in the hell is that?!"

Shrapnel answered, "Sarai, I found something you should take a little interest in... Maus' body..."

Turandot answered to him, "So?"

"So someone killed her. You were supposed to be paired up with her, but you left her, and some people probably ganged up and killed her..."

Suddenly, someone yelled, ''Hey! Marine!"

Ecks looked over Turandot's shoulder, and he saw Marine and two other people talking.

Guillotine looked over aswell... "Didn't I kick the crap out of that guy?..."

Shrapnel, Zerok and Canas ran over and each pulled out a sword, The swords seemed to match, only with different colored hilts, one bronze, one gold, and one silver.

Marine noticed them and pulled out his knife, after noticing him, Swany pulled out a large sledgehammer and Powerage pulled out a large machete.

Turandot pulled out her katana and zoomed in after them. She seemed to be nearly twice as fast, and she stopped them after a few seconds of running.

"I would like to ask them something, Shrap."

"What would you like to ask them?..."

"Something..."

Turandot walked over to the group and asked, "Are you the ones that killed Maus?"

Swany and Powerage nodded their heads... "No..."

Marine smiled, "Yes, she was a wuss. So, tell me, was she your butt buddy or something?"

Swany and Powerage started to giggle.

"Oh... Ok... Maybe I should avenge her?..."

"Bring it, girlie."

"GIRLIE?!"

Turandot was pissed, she took her sword but was stopped by Powerage's Machete.

"Woah, someone has a pretty big temper."

"Oh shut it, you ass-crumb."

Powerage and Swany giggled at the name Turandot called them...

Shrapnel Zerok and Canas put away their weapons and walked back towards Guillotine and Ecks, who were watching Turandot and Marine's quarrel.

Shrapnel looked over at Ecks and asked, "What's your name?..."

"Mine's Ecks, this is Pancake, Allah, and Jim."

"Listen, I know where Wade, the person who sent you to this island, resides... We're going to go into his ship, and beat the crap out of him, he has all sorts of guards and stuff, so I guess we might need a little help... You guys want to join? This includes you too, Guillotine..."

Ecks, Pancake, Allah, Jim, and Guillotine accepted.

Shrapnel dug into his backpack, and pulled out 5 syringes.

"Okay, you might already know this, but the hunters have been dosed with aenesthetic which could make us take a bullet and walk away unharmed, now, what you probably don't know, is that we have to dose on this every day. And another thing, is that we've been dosed with something similar to steroids, except, 2 or 3 times more potent. These syringes will load you up on both of them... I suggest you use it, because there will probably be about 1000 guys on Wade's ship... Each of them, has been dosed with this stuff, and each of them has the strength of one of the weaker hunters... Like Ozcar...''

Ecks took the syringe and put it in his backpack.

"I'll take a raincheck on that..."

Shrapnel looked over, and Turandot and Marine were still yelling at eachother, he walked over, and gave Marine and his group the same explanation, and told Turandot about how they were betrayed.

"So are we all ready?..."

To be Continued...

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I seem to be growing into a bigger asset to the story.

Good chapter, but it seems strange that my character would be so... Well, i didn't expect him to be what he was.

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a vary well done chapter its been awhile since ive seen a new chapter get posted its good to see a new one go up. if i remember i was in your bbs story ealieri could be wrong but i remember being in it if i was i donet remember if i died and just havent noticed it or if im alive and just havent been mentioned in awhile so if you could help me out with that id apreciate it

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At 3/29/06 08:31 PM, teh_ecks_bawks_hater wrote:

I sent you a PM, so hopefully it's not full quite yet

To Join, please fill out these requirements:

One Item You'd bring to a deserted island for a possible fight to the death

An old XBOX controller >:)

A description of yourself, which should have your age, weight, gender height and a description of your personality etc.

Description: Short, black hair.
Age: 17
Wieght: 156-ish
gender- male
height- 5'9"
Personallity: Tries to act black and threatens people with my amazing EcksBawks skillz

Pick your side: Evil, Neutral, Or Good

I'm good at heart

Please join, I'll need 50, that's right, 50 people for this.

I hope it's not too late :(

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At 7/3/06 08:19 PM, teh_ecks_bawks_hater wrote: Chapter 14

Ah, my debut in the story. I like where this is going, the chapters just keep getting better and better. :)

At 7/4/06 06:26 AM, Agak wrote: I hope it's not too late :(

He did mention earlier in this thread that he was no longer taking registration.

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Excellent A++

Although I can kill people you know, I'm vicious ;-)

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At 7/3/06 08:19 PM, teh_ecks_bawks_hater wrote: Chapter 14: The Pieces come together

Another great chapter. I might read the previous chapters that i've missed. Very good story so far.

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Chapter 15: The History of The Hunters

Shrapnel pulled out a small box out of his backpack and pulled out a deflated innertube.

"So, who here can't swim?"

Pancake raised her hand, Shrapnel threw the innertube to her and she opened up a hole to blow into.

"Have you put your mouth on this?"

"No... Only a pump..."

"Why can't I have the pump?"

"Because it's on Wade's ship."

"Oh..."

Pancake blew up the innertube, put it in the water and sat in it. Ecks took off his shirt and threw his backpack to Pancake.

Turandot pulled out another innertube and blew it up.

"Put your backpacks in this..."

Pancake tried to give Ecks his backpack back.

"Can you keep it? I don't know if I can trust them..."

Everyone else loaded their backpacks onto the small innertube, and jumped into the water. They began to swim, and followed Shrapnel and Turandot.

After what seemed like three hours of straight swimming, they got there. Shrapnel swam to a metal ladder, set the innertube with the backpacks in it, and grabbed one and climbed up the ladder, but stopped near the top, and looked to see if anyone was there. He saw no one and climbed on to the boat. The others followed. As soon as everyone was up, Pancake gave Ecks his backpack and the others sorted them out.

Shrapnel told them the plan.

"Okay, Sarai, you lead one group--"

"Who's Sarai?" Jim interrupted.

"It's Turandot's real name."

Turandot blurted out, "Just call me Sarai for now."

''Okay, we split into two groups, Ecks, Allah and Pancake go with Turandot, Powerage, Swany, Marine, come with me... Guillotine, you take these... They're phones... They have two numbers in the phone book... Call Sarai if you fail, and her group will come help you, and call me if you succeed. What you're going to do, is set a landmine onto the engine, and after that, call me, and get the fuck off the boat. I'll call Sarai and she'll have to get off the boat too... Oh, and We WlLL NOT answer. We'll let the phone ring... So don't call again if noone answers. I will take care of Wade, Sarai, help Guillotine if you need to, but until he calls, your mission is to get rid of anyone innocent. That's it. Questions?"

No one questioned. They split up, and Shrapnel told Guillotine the easiest route to the engine.

Sarai led Ecks down to the ship's bottom, and busted a door down. There were rows of people chained to walls. Each of them looked bruised, cut, or dead. Sarai took her katana and cut off one of the chains, and asked what the now freed man's name was.

"Sanch..."

Well, Sanch, why don't you take these and get to helping us.

Ecks pulled out his cutlass and started slicing off chains, until he noticed a few familiar faces.

"Moco?..."

Moco answered, it was him, the same man who had his sword broken by Shadow's sword.

Ecks cut the chains and freed him, and he noticed that the same people he had fought with Moco were there.

"And your names are?"

"Radiator"

"Hewhoneverwas"

Okay... Strange names, Ecks thought, as he freed them. Ecks walked off, but was stopped when Radiator asked to finish what they started.

"There are weapons all around the room...''

HeWhoNeverWas picked up a huge keg and Radiator picked up a crowbar.

Ecks signalled for allah and Jim, who picked up a bar, and a knife from the ground, and was ready to fight.

Radiator charged in, and Ecks tripped him.

"Not now... Get off the ship..."

Sarai interrupted and yelled out, "Line up!"

The people lined up.

Tell me your names!

She went down the line,

"Moco"
"HeWhoNeverWas"
"Radiator"
"BlueHippo"
"KungFuCow"
"PowerPrower"
"Terkoz"
And "DoucheFlagon.''

Sarai led them out, and was just about to leave, when Ecks stopped them.

"what's going on?... Why are there-"

"Wade put them down there, he said that if any of us needed to refine our skills, we should practice... with them... Me and a few other hunters were against it, but most didn't care.''

"What is going on? This island contest s weird... what's going on? What is your history, Wade's History?'

"Well... You see, his brother owns this website, which started selling shirts, stickers, and a whole bunch of other things, but eventually, it grew... Wade's brother became a millionaire, along with his brother. He used that money to track computers which have been to his website, he picked people who frequented his website and brought them here."

"And what about the hunters?"

"That's a completely different story... The government took about 10 children and turned them into fighting machines, and they had to kill eachother... One of the ten survived, they did the same about 20 times, and after a decade of fighting and training... They decided we were too strong, and tried to kill us. We killed about 300 soldiers before Wade rescued us. However, he forced us into hunting you, and thus, the hunters were born. Me and Shrapnel were strongest because we were the American armies' latest project...''

"Okay..."

Then, screams and bullets were heard... Ecks ran outside.

"Moco?!"... Moco was on the ground, bleeding.

There were nearly 50 soldier like men outside, each looking as fierce as the next.

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Oh shit, I forgot the "To be continued" at the end.

Oh well.

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At 7/5/06 08:23 PM, teh_ecks_bawks_hater wrote: Oh shit, I forgot the "To be continued" at the end.

pretty good chapter im looking forward to the next one

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hehe ;)

Better use this account then to say, nice chapter and congrats for keeping on giving them out :)

-S

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At 7/5/06 09:00 PM, Sarai wrote:

What's with the alt? Oh well, thanks for the praise... I'll try to post another chapter tonight...

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Good job on all the recent parts! You're moving a little fast and I'm very confused, but it's good nonetheless and I'm sure the plot is good, whatever it is. I'm still trying to figure out why people were chained on the boat. I thought thte whole trained people thing was stupid, but it's not my story. Anyways, glad to see your pumping out chapters again!