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Posted at: 5/8/08 11:29 PM

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((Ooops, forgot location.))

Location:Knocking back a few and bullshitting with the boys at the Twisted Tilly in Joseph's Hill.

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New RP form for Alien Campaign: Volume 1

Name: Daniel "Big D" Lee

Age: 30

Appearance: Asian, 5'10", black jeans with chain wallet, DethKlok t-shirt, black hair done in cornrows (don't give me any crap about that), full goatee (no side burns), muscular build, brown eyes, gold hoop earring in his left ear, tattoo on upper-left arm that reads "Metalhead" in Chinese, and two dogtags on a chain around his neck.

Equipment: blow torch, tire iron

Skills: Black belt in Tai Kwon Do and Jujitsu, also does welding and vehicle repairs.

Personality: He can be a bit of a jerk, but usually tries to avoid trouble. He loves working on cars and listening to death metal, despite how old it is.

Bio: The first born of four children, he had a twin brother and two younger siblings. They got along very well. One day, when Daniel was 19, he went out for a relaxing drive. What he saw when he returned home horrified him. His house was completely engulfed in flames. His younger brother and sister had escaped, but his twin brother and parents never made it out. He got his siblings into his car, and desparately tried to find a medical facility. Unfortunately, neither of them made it. Daniel knew it was the smoke that killed them. His sister was 15, and his brother was just 12. He never found out how the fire had started, but he's lived with the pain ever since that day. Now he spends most of his time in an old auto repair garage, working on an old car he's managed to keep running for years.

One hell of a long brief Bio, isn't it? :P

Location: Old auto repair garage in the ruins of downtown San Francisco. He rarely leaves the place.

I hope that's a good enough start. I spent.... at least 40 minutes on this.

Somebody give me a god damned waffle.... NOW!
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Posted at: 5/8/08 11:57 PM

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"I'm telling you, you son'of'a'bitch, I dun it!" Shouted Kevin, nearly falling backward as he threw back another shot of whiskey. Kevin was the sort to talk big shit, but since you knew he was kidding you could just laugh and shrug it off.
"Nah ya didn't ya idiot, no one could do that who couldn't hold two fucking whiskeys!" Yelled some far off voice in the crowd. The Tilted Tilly was always busy on Saturdays, it was just tradition, the Men would come in during the day and the boys would come in at night. It was a cozy little building, a wood-burning hearth to one end, a bar to the other, and in between were a whole bunch of tables. Each one was full this time of night, lots of laughs and yelling, lots of lightly-dressed women refilling drinks. Edward sat at the end of the bar, he and his friends plus anyone interested in the conversation gathered around Kevin, who aside from the Bullshit, was actually quite a good friend with Edward.
"Aye Kevin, sure you strangled a hell-deer with yer bare hands, just like you fucked Lucy Miller into her grace." Eddy said with a grin. The crowd erupted with laughter at this, Kevin nodding his head, blushing and waiting for the noise to die down.
"Yeh, thas right, I fucked her into the grave, and then I fucked her all the way out!" More laughter ensued. When young men with weak stomachs drank like these fellows everything was funny, everything.
Edward only chuckled lightly before slamming the rest of his beer. "Yer fulla shit Kevin, just like a goddamn Sothy." This got a big wave of nods and approval from the entire bar, people beginning to give their own opinions on the people of Sothland. They were to the effect of, "I here their men marry eight wives and beat each one'uv'em, don't seem right to me," or, "Them Sothlot naught but a bunch'o'damn horsey-stealing bastards, why if I had a mark for every . . ." In truth the people of Joseph's Hill knew little about Sothland, for that was the work for the Warlords and their army, best meet the Sothy's at the point of a spear rather than at the end of a query, that much was for sure. The door to the bar swung open as the chatter had just began to die down, in walked five men, they looked normal enough, the two infront carried swords on their back, a suggestion that they were off-duty men-at-arms from the north, one of the many who now garrisoned Joseph's Hill, and the two in back looked similarly, normal. Shaven heads were all the rage in the north, especially with those in the service, so it only seemed appropriate for all of them to have shaven heads. The one in the middle, though, looked different, harder, stronger. He carried a side-arm, a handgun, a revolver. Across his face were three, deep scars, and he wore a cape of pure black.
Edward remembered his father telling him about men who wore capes, how they were the type to walk above you for no better reason than that they owned a cape. Edward watched him closely as he walked into the middle of the room, flanked on all sides by his compatriots, looking around, smiling lightly and saying, "Surely amongst a bunch of patriots like you boys, there would be some willing to prove they have more than words to wield against the Sothlot, surely?"

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One more thing I should add: my character has a bit of a New York tough-guy accent (which is odd, because he's Chinese). Quite a difference from in the last story (he had more of a regular voice). Anyways, I can't wait to get this going.

Somebody give me a god damned waffle.... NOW!
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Posted at: 5/9/08 12:13 AM

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((First off, thanks to Chicky for commenting on how I have balls. I'd been wondering that for quite some time.

I'll do my form tomorrow. It's past midnight. I'm tired. I'm hungry.

me sleep now))

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((Name: Hurok "Rock" Volkeff

Age: 32

Appearance: Brown hair and blue eyes. Strong and intimidating muscle build. Tanned skin. No shirt and old tattered blue jeans. A simple and small tattoo of skull on the right side of his chest. Scarred cheek. Looks much older than is.

Equipment: A short-bow with no arrows A hammer and some nails. No food.

Skills: Construction mostly, little first aid.

Personality: A very silent man with extreme anger issues (see bio). Doesn't like jokes or sarcasm and ignores stupid comments entirely (sound familiar?). Soft spot for children.

Bio (woot not brief): He was born to a small man and woman living in a small tribe located in the hot desert of Arizona. The tribe of about 50 was called Apache, as read from an old broken machine found half-sticking out of the ground. It was located near a lake, who's name was forgotten long ago and was redubbed Apache Lake. They were a quiet and self sustained tribe with little to no contact with the nearby tribes.

Huroks mother, Jane, died while giving birth to him, and was raised solely by his father, Duran. His father taught him how to build for he was the tribes carpenter. Hurok liked the tribes doctor, Karen, and helped her with whatever she asked. He would listen to her talk about cures and simple procedures as he moved stuff about in her house.

The other kids would torment Hurok because he had no mother. Hurok stopped socializing with the kids and resented them. He avoided them until they finally caught him and beat him with no true cause. Hurok hated them for the rest of his life.

One day when Hurok was about 20 he and Duran walked to a new work site, the tribe was ambushed. Brutal savage with machines for weapons attacked and pillaged the village. Duran, being old and weak, demanded that his son run. Hurok disagreed, but had to run or die. The entire tribe scattered, men and women running in different directions. Hurok turned to look back at his father. His foot caught something and slammed him down to the earth, hard. His vision blurred and he was suddenly walkin' up a grassy hill.

He suffered memory lost and can't remember anything else of his life after that horrible night. A unfamiliar tattoo is on his chest and he carries a weapon. He is haunted by a name and a womans face. The name is Jereth, a male name.

He last saw a sign that was crudely made maybe some ten years ago saying "Cal-fornia". He walked past it and is now in California.

Location: Walking quietly down a street in some Californian city.))

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"And who would you be?" Said Edward, rising from his stool. The room was silent aside from the warm crackle of the fire.
"I would be Captain Richards, Lord Jurian's first cavalry division, we just rode in today and came here to relax, but hearing all your patriotic conversation, I was thinking for a second maybe one of you had yer balls dropped low-enough to fight." This, captain Richards, was spinning slowly, his intense eyes passing over the onlooking crowd, unsure of whether to be angry or respectful. The crackle of the fire was an uneasy addition to the silence, which Edward decided to break.
Edward stepped toward Richard and pointed an accusing finger at him, saying, "No man who goes looking for trouble aint no man t'aul!" The bar had a small spike in conversation, mostly hushed agreements. Kevin stepped up behind Edward and put his hand on his shoulder, signifying his support.
"I 'aint no man t'aul'? You little shits don't have the slightest idea of what it means to be men." Richards was walking out of the safety of his fellow soldiers, and right up to Edward. He raised his hand and took three fingers, drawing them just off of his face, imitating the scars that ran there. "You know what did this to me, boy?" Edward didn't say anything, but he didn't back down either. "I got this from a Malhoont, demonic dogs from the depths of hell, and I beat it to death with naught but my fists, and apparently, 'I aint no man t'aul!" He was laughing now, his soldier friends joining him. He walked around the room, his hands out in a sign of sarcastic confusion. He circled around the room, his and his friends laughs drowning out the fire, he walked around looking at the cautious faces that surrounded him until he finally met Edward's gaze once more, still as strong as ever. "Now I didn't come here looking for a fight, pal, but now you sure as hell have one."
Edwards fist flew from his side like a rocket. He brought it swiftly past Richard's left cheek, his face flying backwards, dragging his body with it. Edward put his fists up and uttered three magic words that set the whole bar into chaos. They were, "Fine by me!"
The entirety of the Tilted Tilly was thrown into one large brawl, the Joseph's Hill boys may not know anything about fighting, but bar brawls was an art that they had perfected. The waitresses ran behind the bar, patrons began to throw tables over, a couple of them grabbed one of the soldiers and tossed him out of the window. Kevin punched one of the nearby drunks in the stomach, the bartender pitched a glass into the back of one of the regulars' head. But this was the stuff that everyone was used to and even enjoyed, the faces in the bar were full of smiles, brawls were a not to often luxury, something that the boys would talk about for weeks to come, the only fight amongst this great field of battle that wasn't a lighthearted bunch of horseplay was that of the fight between Richard and Edward.
"Come 'ere you little shit!" Yelled Richard, not out of anger but because he had to yell to be heard over all the cursing and banging of the bar. He threw a punch into Edward, landing it into his side. Eddy cringed, but he didn't go down, rather, he drew back his leg and flung it into Richard's crotch. He leaped back, grabbing at his balls, a few tears running down his hard face. "You'll get yours for that, you little shit."
"Aye and when would that be happening?" Said Edward mockingly, his fists raised up to block any attack.
"That would be now!" Richard shouted, slamming he shoulder into Edward, causing him to fly back into one of the fighting patron's, who abruptly pushed him back toward Richard. Using the momentum of the shove, Edward leaped into his opponents stomach, throwing them both to the ground, but leaving Richard winded and gasping for air.
Edward got to his feet and brushed himself off before looking to Kevin. He was just finishing up a fight with one of the drunker patrons, who he shoved into an over turned table. "Kevin! Lets get out'o here!"
Kevin spat once, shook his head a little and then replied, "Aye, this fights about done anyway!" They walked casually through the bar, beginning to calm down a little. As they drew near the door, though, there was a sound that broke all fighting immediately. A bang, louder than anything else in the bar, sounded and echoed off into the night. In the middle of the room Richards stood, his four soldier friends once again at his side, their blades drawn. In Richard's hand was his revolver, pointed right into the ceiling, a small wisp of smoke rising from the barrel.

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Name: Time
Char Name: Viper

Appearance: is wearing All Black and gray body armor, not plated, like metal, but, you know. Is very tall and skinny. Has spiked, Dirty Blonde hair. Is wearing black boots, driving gloves, and a bullet vest aswell.

Weapons/Equipment: A12- Assualt Rifle (It is a futuristic M-16, only ALOT better), A GIA Combat Knife, A Cobra-32 (Pistol), emergency flares, Frag Grenades, and Smoke Grenades.

Bio: Used to work as a secret organisation for the government, was involved with a project in Dreadlock city a very long, long time ago. He was put in a desynchronization tube for the future when recovered from scientists. apparently, he was not infected from the harmful disease in the zombies all that time ago. A gene from his ancient grandfather allows him to unleash super-human abilities at some points. But these abilities hurt his vital system, thus damaging his health permanetly in the process.

Location: Area 63, Abandonded town in Desert of unknown area. Is in an underground building.

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((Ok, forget the cornrows. I'll just go with somewhat short, spiked hair. Everything else stays the same. Anyways, heres my start.))

Daniel had been living with the loss of his family for the past eleven years. The emotional pain was, at times, almost unbearable, but he never let that get in the way of his work. He spent a lot of his time either working out or working on his car, which was nearly 150 years old. It was a 2008 Dodge Charger Daytona edition with a Hemi under the hood. Most of the time, he was alone in the old garage, but every now and then someone would stop to talk to him.

Daniel got up early that day to go for a drive. He had all of his tools in the trunk of the car, and a Cannibal Corpse CD in the car's CD player. He was backing out of the garage when he heard something hit the side of his car. He looked in his side mirrors, and saw a man lying on the sidewalk. Aww, christ, he thought. Can't I go for a drive without dis kinda shit happenin'? He got out to check on the man and noticed a small bruise on his forehead. "Hey, you okay?" "Ooh... oh god." the man said. "Damnit, that hurt." "No surprise dere. Ya ran into da side of my car. Ya hit it pretty hard too." "Well, thanks for stoppin' kid. By the way, the name's Marcus." "Mine's Daniel, but my friends used ta call me Big D. Hey, why don'tcha come in for a few minutes. Get some ice on dat injury." "Aight,that's fine."

The two went in after Daniel got his car back into the garage. Marcus was wondering why a guy like Daniel would help him, but he decided not to ask. "So, what da hell are you doin' wanderin' da streets here, anyways?" The Asian finally asked. "I've never really had a place to call home." Marcus replied. "I was running from some punks tryin' to beat me up, and that's when I ran into your car." "Well, dat explain's dat." Daniel said. "Hey, let's get da hell outta here. I've been spendin' too much time in here anyways. I've been thinkin' about packin' up what little crap I got and just findin' some otha place to live. Gettin' outta dis place is da easy part. Findin' a new spot ain't gonna be so easy." "Well then, let's go now. Shit, this city's practically been a fuckin' ghost town for almost a century now, or so I've heard. Hardly anyone lives here now." "Yeah, I hear ya."

So Daniel decided to pack the rest of his stuff into the trunk of his car, and the two of them headed out of that place, the sound of the roaring Hemi echoing off of the surrounding buildings. They knew that finding a decent place to move in to would be difficult, but they were gonna find a place any way they could.

((I hope I'm not the only one in the area I'm in, but if I am, that's fine. I'll stop here for now.))

Somebody give me a god damned waffle.... NOW!
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At 5/9/08 05:51 PM, Timex247 wrote: Name: Time
Char Name: Viper

Age: 19

Appearance: is wearing All Black and gray body armor, not plated, like metal, but, you know. Is very tall and skinny. Has spiked, Dirty Blonde hair. Is wearing black boots, driving gloves, and a bullet vest aswell.

Weapons/Equipment: A12- Assualt Rifle (It is a futuristic M-16, only ALOT better), A GIA Combat Knife, A Cobra-32 (Pistol), emergency flares, Frag Grenades, and Smoke Grenades.

Personality: Is very young, so he makes some stupid mistakes some time. Is an expert shot, has great speed and endurance, can drive vehicles very well, and is averagly strong. He is very intelligent but scrawny. (No muscles) Has a soldier's attitude... or seomthing...

Bio: Used to work as a secret organisation for the government, was involved with a project in Dreadlock city a very long, long time ago. He was put in a desynchronization tube for the future when recovered from scientists. apparently, he was not infected from the harmful disease in the zombies all that time ago. A gene from his ancient grandfather allows him to unleash super-human abilities at some points. But these abilities hurt his vital system, thus damaging his health permanetly in the process.

Location: Area 63, Abandonded town in Desert of unknown area. Is in an underground building.

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I never wanted this to happen....

It all happened way to fast....

These memories.... I don't know what they are....

I.. I... can't handle this type of mission....

This is too big of a situation....

I....
I........

"I CAN'T HELP YOU!!!!!" I yelled while waking up from a nightmare.

Sorrow filled my room. I was sad.... very sad... I looked at the basement.... Nothing much.
A blow up bed, blanket, pillow, some medical supplies, ammo, and a barricade at my door at the top of the stairs. I was lost. My friends and family were dead..... And I was in the middle of the fucking desert... How the HELL does that happen?

Days earlier, i had thoughts of suicide. I don't know what to do.... keep on roughing it on very little food.... it could last me a month without going out again... Or end it all?

I looked at my watch that i stole from a store. 6:45 AM.
BANG! BANG!
What the hell!?!
CHUH-CHUH-CHUH-CHUH!

"SHIT! (BANG!) Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!" A voice from atop the ground.
Gun shots litterally, hovered above my head....

"GET PAST THAT GOD DAMN BARRICADE!!!"
Someone was trying to get past my friggin barricades!

"JUST SHOOT IT!" I behind a corner...
Bullet holes covered my wall where my bed and supplies were. Bullets richoed off the walls, destroying other numerous things..... Shells fell down the stairs... Luckily, no bullets hit me.

"What ever was down there, is dead now sir!"

"Good job, soldier! Report back to Alpha Post! NOW! Everyone move! GOGOGOGOGO!"

What the hell were soldiers doing here?

This town was abandoned a few seconds ago...
It looks like the effects of war were finnally happening...

I was back in the service.

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At 5/9/08 05:51 PM, Timex247 wrote: Name: Time
Char Name: Viper

Not a real name, we need the full name, realistic too, Viper is not a name a mother would give to her child.

Appearance: is weinfaring All Black and gray body armor, not plated, like metal, but, you know. Is very tall and skinny. Has spiked, Dirty Blonde hair. Is wearing black boots, driving gloves, and a bullet vest aswell.

And where would this armor shit be coming from?

Weapons/Equipment: A12- Assualt Rifle (It is a futuristic M-16, only ALOT better), A GIA Combat Knife, A Cobra-32 (Pistol), emergency flares, Frag Grenades, and Smoke Grenades.

No, this is over 100 years after the human race went into the dark ages, there aren't weapons in abundance, there aren't grenades, PERIOD, and finally there arent any futuristic weapons, if you read the new rules you'd realize that if you went with MODEST guns they would be more like present day.

Bio: Used to work as a secret organisation for the government, was involved with a project in Dreadlock city a very long, long time ago. He was put in a desynchronization tube for the future when recovered from scientists. apparently, he was not infected from the harmful disease in the zombies all that time ago. A gene from his ancient grandfather allows him to unleash super-human abilities at some points. But these abilities hurt his vital system, thus damaging his health permanetly in the process.

First of all I'm pretty sure this is a different goddamned game universe, so deadlock city is irrelivent, secondly the guns are practically god-moding themselves (in contrast to the environment), but the superhuman ability genes and the whole desynchraous-flibbidy shit is completely against the rules, making your guy "special" is pretty much against the point of a SURVIVAL RPG. Wise up to what we are trying to do and for the love of god, NO GOD-MODING!

Location: Area 63, Abandonded town in Desert of unknown area. Is in an underground building.

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Also I think you jumped the gun, you must wait to be APPROVED! I don't know who you are or who you think you are but there are rules, and considering your pretentious as hell character profile I think we should implement the new trial-run policy on you (Blue its your decision).

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"It appears I've gotten myself into a bit more than I originally bargained for, now if you don't mind, we will be leaving in peace." Richards and his men were cautiously beginning to walk toward the door, which Edward and Kevin immediately vacated, trying to stay out of sight. The soldiers never let their guard down, but Richard seemed utterly calm, his revolver resting harmlessly at his side. As they began to walk out of the Tilted Tilly Edward felt a chill run up his spine as Richard walked out the door, his old, harsh eyes passing over the bar one last time. They ran lazily, but with a purpose, over the faces of the patrons, seeming to see more than they should be able to in the dimly lit dive, until they halted in the general vicinity of Edward. He never directly looked at Ed, but a tiny, nearly insignificant smile grew on his face. He then left the bar, disappearing into the dark, calm night.
"Quite the ordeal, eh lads?" Yelled Kevin, a giant, shit-eating grin spreading across his lips. The patrons made their agreement known, each one yelling "Aye!" The post-brawl rituals were carried out, handshakes and olive-branch beers all around, as well as admiration to each others punches and light-hearted threats about what they'd do come next brawl. Edward, though, was tired, he wanted to go home and sleep this whole damn night off, tomorrow he had to go out and pull a couple of hell-deer and he would need his energy. Ed said a few quick good-byes and then left, heading off home.

Not five minutes after Edward left the Tilted Tilly did he here a familiar, rhythmic beating sound behind him. He stopped in the middle of the road, trying to get his half-drunk mind around it, what in the world was that sound. It struck him like a kick from a mule, they were horses. Edward turned around to look in the direction of what the noise was coming from when he saw something that put a deeper chill than before, one that literally shook his body with shivers. A small crowd was forming at the front of the Tilted Tilly, 20 or so men on horseback, torches in their hands, blades shining in the light of the fire, sparkling on their backs. they formed a semi-circle, shouting things like "Thats right!" and "The Truth!" waving their fists as their horses trotted about nervously. Edward moved quietly toward the horseback warriors, keeping his head low and his movements slow, not wanting to draw unnecessary attention. He could make out a man making some sort of speech, as more horsemen galloped forward to join them. soon their were nearly 30 of them, all listening to one man speak as he led his horse back and forth, in step with his words and pauses, obviously he was an experienced speaker. Only as Edward saw the man's face and cape did he realize who's voice he was hearing.
"They are nothing!" shouted Richard, his arm pointed at the Tilted Tilly, "Pathetic Serfs! Insolence from these peasantry must be put down immediately! They dared to assault me, Lord Jurian's captain, a member of his army, an offense to his Lordship personally. It is our duty to make an example of these ruffians, we must put down all resistance from these peasant towns on the border, lest they defect to Sothland!" The cavalry soldiers were in the heat of the moment, feeling the passion, false as it may be, in their Captain's voice. Edward could only watch in terror as Richard gave the final order, seeing the door to the bar was barred. "I now make this request, nay, demand of you, my loyal soldiers, to set afire this breeding ground of resistance to the administration of Lord Jurian, god say the Confederacy of Benito, and may he bury all of Sothland and their supporters!" A grin, just as small and sinister as the one Edward had seen earlier, spread across Richard's face as the cavalry-men all drew their arms back and thrust their torches at the Tilted Tilly. It burst into flames, one torch breaking the window and landing into, what Edward guessed at least, the beer and whiskey supply. Suddenly the entire bar was ablaze, the windows exploding from heat as the bone-chilling screams from within competed with the noise of the flames.
Richard was beaming now, he raised his revolver and fired a shot high into the night sky, causing a momentary flash in which Edward thought that for just a moment Richard had seen him. "This is a victory for Benito, a victory over Rebels, Hurrah!"
"Hurrah!" yelled one of the cavalry, "Blessed be Lord Jurian!" screamed another, tears streaming down his eyes, glistening in the bright, red fire of the dark night.
"Spur your horses men, let us leave this peasant village and return to Jurian's side," said Richard, the smile fading from his face as he looked nervously around the town, not beginning to stir. His horse whinnied wildly, jumping to its hind-legs as Richard kicked it hard, riding off into the night, being followed shortly after by his men, leaving Edward, alone in the dark, to mourn.

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((Chicky, I have a quick question. Is that bar you're at in Northern Cali, or Southern Cali near LA? I was thinking I could be driving around and then come across the burning place. Will that work at all?))

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At 5/9/08 08:28 PM, CannibalCorpseFreak wrote: ((Chicky, I have a quick question. Is that bar you're at in Northern Cali, or Southern Cali near LA? I was thinking I could be driving around and then come across the burning place. Will that work at all?))

((Ya it will if you can get to Southwestern Montery county, which is quite a distance north-west along the Californian coast, but you'd best be careful as the area is a border of two confederacies at odds with each other, which you probably know if you've read my posts.))

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At 5/9/08 08:34 PM, Chickidydow wrote:
((Ya it will if you can get to Southwestern Montery county, which is quite a distance north-west along the Californian coast, but you'd best be careful as the area is a border of two confederacies at odds with each other, which you probably know if you've read my posts.))

You guys started without me!!! You suck!

OMG!!! CHICKY!! ESP!! I was basing my char near Monterey, and I only read your posts just now, and so your char!!! CREEPY!!!
Name: Elijah Daniel Goldstein, (A.K.A Eli)
Age: I'd go with 16 or 17 but you guys probably won't let me... very well, 23.
Appearance: Mediterranean skin tone, almost bronze from living outside constantly. Short, black, curly hair with brown eyes and the beginnings of a beardstashe (no shaving utensils, if I get one, I'd like to get him shaved). I'd say 5'8. Wearing white, loose clothes with the tallis tucked into well-worn faded jeans. Fit and in shape, Runner's physique.
Equipment: No food, but plenty of traps set at the moment, so he will have food. He has a backpack, a mule, and several pots and pans as well as a copy of the version "Etz hyim" of the torah, and a few prayer books. Fluent in both Hebrew and English (Father went to Hebrew school, taught him.) Has a Tallit, and a keepah, and yeah. Deer skin blanket, and pillow made of deerskin and dead leaves. Has an impressive set of knives for killing and dissecting food, and a small pistol with only 5 shot that his father went to impressive measures to obtain.
Skills: Amazing Chef, decent hunter. Food oriented, if you get my drift. Get's meat, cooks it, and drinks water from springs. Not very big, but good at running like hell from things.
Personality: Quiet kid who prefers not to talk and take care of himself and only himself. He refuses to watch out for anybody but numero uno unless he's in love, or he needs you. Very self-protective. Is as orthodoxly orthodox as they get. Turned to religion after father died, and is very suspicious of those not like him. (AKA not wrapped up in prayer shawls all the time) Loner Woodsman type, decent fisher. Good at utizilying resources around him, but not good at connecting with others, not that he knows anybody to connect with... Can't hold his liquor. Not, that he, will necessarily get liquor, but, he cannot hold it. Lactose Intolerant.
Bio: The original hometown was a neighborhood in LA, but after NY and Chi-Town got nuked, his ancestors fled with what they had. Eli's father Joseph had to walk all the way from Santa-Maria to Salinas. His mother gave birth to him and died during that period in time, and his father died just recently, so know Eli's all depressed and stuff and so I'll have him hit the road eventually, after questioning his existence and all that shit.
Location: near the city of what was Monterey, living in a hermit-esque quarters with nobody but himself to work with. Also, no car or means of travel, but a mule. Living in a cave with relatively few amenities.

Ehm, I'll get an intro in later. Love your posts Chicky, they're awesome as usual...

My character btw, is living alone not aware of the "modern" world or any of the confederacys or anything, so I suppose, that one of you guys could discover him after he takes off...


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At 5/9/08 08:34 PM, Chickidydow wrote: ((Ya it will if you can get to Southwestern Montery county, which is quite a distance north-west along the Californian coast, but you'd best be careful as the area is a border of two confederacies at odds with each other, which you probably know if you've read my posts.))

((Ok then. And yes, I've read your posts. Anyways, enough rambling. On with the story.))

The two men had been driving along a narrow highway for a few hours, and it was dark now. Neither of them had said a word since they left San Francisco. Marcus was the first to break the silence. "So, where are we going anyways?" he asked? "I don't know. I'm just followin' da highway. Wait a sec.. dere's a sign here. 'Now enterin' Montery County.' Who da hell thought up dat name?" "Hell if I know. I ain't ever been outside of San Fran." "Well, dat makes two of us." Both of them laughed a bit.

They drove a little bit further, then came across a burning building. Daniel stopped the car and shut the engine off, then got out. "What da hell?" he said quietly. Marcus also got out of the car, shocked by what he was seeing. "Damn. I hope nobody was in there." Daniel suddenly had a flashback to that day he'd lost the only people he'd ever cared about. "Oh god. Oh fuckin' hell. I wish I wasn't seein' dis right now!" "Why?" Marcus asked him "Because.... it... it brings back really bad memories." "I'm not sure I understand."

"Dis.... dis is how I lost my family 11 years ago. My parents, my brothers and sister. My younger bro and sis made it out. But my twin bro, my mom, my dad.... dey neva got out. I tried ta get dem some help, but dey died before I could find it. I wish I coulda saved dem." "Damn, dude. That's gotta be painful emotionally." "I don't even know how I've managed ta keep myself goin' since thay day, but I just know dere's some reason I'm still alive." The two continued talking, unaware that someone was nearby and could hear them.

((I like this a lot better than the whold zombie thing.))

Somebody give me a god damned waffle.... NOW!
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((Maybe I was a bit unclear about the bars location, its in the village proper of Joseph's Hill, so Cannibal youd've probably mentioned something about a town if you'd known, so I'll just assume that was written there, thank you for the compliment Swordstick I look forward to meeting your character.))

Edward was waiting quietly in the shadows, waiting for something to happen mostly. [Did that just happen?] he found himself thinking, [Renegade Benetian soldiers just burnt down the Tilted Tilly because of some comment I made about their leader, this doesn't sound real at'tall.] After an hour of this, him hiding while the town woke up, doused the flames, and went back to bed, planning on dealing with it at a more acceptable hour, a car pulled up, one of the few Ed had ever seen in his entire life, the only others he'd seen were property of the Warlords. So Ed remained hidden, waiting to see what they would do, whoever they were. Two men got out, examining the once beloved local dives' charred ruins. Edward approached quietly, from behind, checking the car. There weren't any guns in the vehicle, and it wasn't armored up. Those were two things that all confederate cars had, as they were too far and apart to be risked. This car was maintained with love, kept was its beauty, rather than to be replaced with a rough, military grade defense armament. Edward looked up to the strangers and sighed silently. [If they aint confederates, then I suppose I can see them tomorrow if they have anything worth saying.] Edward got a safe distance away and began to walk casually again. He was tired, he had to do things the next day, so Edward decided he'd had enough excitement for one Saturday, he skulked home, just now beginning to comprehend the significance of all that had just happened, all of the people he'd never see again, all of the families without sons anymore. For the first time in 10 years, Edward cried.

The door creaked open and Mr. McCreedy looked over at his son, wiping the sweat from his forehead. "Yer a bit late t'night lad, what took ya?" Edward looked around his home, a small shop, with a main shop-room, complete with furnace and blacksmith tools, as well as a reception desk and work table for all the business transactions that would take place. The shop was mostly used for local repair jobs and big bullet-contract orders for the Confederate Army. Currently though, Mr. Thomas McCreedy was working on a local order for some nails.
"I'll tell you what happened, some big-shit captain from Jurian country named Richard burnt down the bar!" said Ed, still feeling a bit emotionally unstable.
"What in the name'o god are you spinning? Better take me through it from the beginning." His father said, taking off his gloves and absently tossing his most recent;y made nail into a large pile nearby.

* * * Half-an-hour Later * * *

"Jesus on a pony! Sounds like you rightly shuved a stick oop this Richard fellas arse!" Said his father in a mildly concerned tone. He was sitting now, in his business chair, leaning forward, hands together.
"How can you be so damn mellow?" Asked Edward desperately, half sad, half angry.
"Watch yer tone you shit, I brought you into this world and I can unbring'ya too, now getting all emotional like some damn women never solved nuthin, we got to figger out what to do here." His father was always the one to look at things rationally, to figure out what needed to happen, how to get it done and the n to immediately get it done.
"What do you mean, its obvious, I go and kill this son'o'a'bitch and . . ."
"Now I didn't raise no damn fool did I boy?" His father waited for a response, his gruff red beard dripping with sweat.
"I . . . uh . . . your right da, your always right." Said Edward, lowering his head. [Thus aint like me, I don't get emotional, no matter wut, I deal with it, so thats what I'll do then, I'll deal with it.]
"Good lad, now lusten oop, them captains from Benito aint to be trifled with, emotional nobles, naught but a bunch'o'cape wearing, egotistical bastards. I have sum influence with Jurian, but he can always find another bullet-smith. I can probably get you an audience with im', if you can manage to get this Richard fella declared a Renegade then the Confederates can deal with im'. Are we clear lad? No going after im', he aint worth yer trouble, ye got to much to do oround ere anyway." His dad was on his feet again, heading back to the furnace, getting ready to work on the nails again.
"Aye, yer right o'course, I s'pose I'll get some rest then, got an early mornin afterall." Edward was heading toward the door to the living area of the shop, which lead to a short flight of stairs and then a couple of bedrooms and a kitchen. He put his hand on the knob, but stopped and listened to the constant rhythmic tang tang tang of the hammer is it forced the small slit of metal into the mold. After sighing, he looked back and said, "G'night da."
His father looked up for 3 seconds, with a slightly confused look on his face, and then said, "G'night son," before returning to his work. Ed walked up the stairs, his feet in tune with the tang tang tang of the hammer. He walked into his bedroom took off his shoes and crawled into his bed, pulling the covers over his face and falling asleep to the constant tang tang tang as his father finished the last of the nails.

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Cool Lieutenent,i'm happy with that.i wouldn't be ale to take the responsiability of running the crew anyway.Well if you need help just say blue.
Here is my character.

Name:Moses .J. Richards AKA Finn

Age:24

appearance:Stands at 6ft 2ins with platinum white hair that hangs to his shoulders.Though Finn isn't packed with muscle,he cannot be classed as weak.his eye colour is sky blue.Finn wears a ripped leather jacket that stops at his knees.He also wears a pair of faded,ripped jeans as well as a black t shirt with the radioactive symbol stitched to it.A crumpled white trilby sits atop his head.

Equipment:Two British Mark VI Webley Revolvers salvaged from ruined weapons museum,small rusted razer blade,Long lasting ration packs wrapped in a blanket and a handmade wooden bow but no arrows

Skills:Though prefering to settle arguements with words rather than weapons,finn has been congratulated on his accuracy with his two revolvers.Hoping his accuracy could be used for better things,he built the wooden bow using the razer blade.his skills would be seen as carpentry and accuracy as well as his way of reasoning with others.But finn does not have any real skills,he is just a foot soldier that prefers to be told what to do.

Personality:Very calmed natured which is rare on the ravaged war torn planet.Usually finn manages to get along with any other living soul but on rare ocassion has been known to lose his temper usually ending in the death of a teamate or murder of an enemy.

Bio:Originally of English heritage,finn and the remenants of much of Britains population fled the devestated island in all manner of ships after the bandit population became to high.The refugees travelled to America hoping for a better chance in survival,unfortunately they did not find it.Finn is now the last survivor of all that were aboard his ship after the sun and radiation killed them.
Finns ancestors had lived in Plymouth but due to the naval base it was one of the first targets hit.His ancestors were forced to flee make shift refugee camps for generations in Britain,Finn finally wanted to stop this.After bandits killed his parents as well as his eleven year old sister,finn swore to help the world and honour his family who he left buried in the lands of their ancestors.Finn's only dream is to help those that need helping.

location:currently scowering the American coast looking for signs of life and shelter after leaving the grounded boat to the bandits.

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Posted at: 5/10/08 07:13 PM

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((My internet died. Just got is back an hour or so ago.))

Hurok wandered down the road, the sun just fading below the horizon. He looked down at his hands. "Dear god. ." He thought, ". . what is of my memory? My hands. . my arms. . my chest. . " He examined each part as he thought of them. "I look like I'm fifty. . I don't feel fifty. ." He stretched his arms as if to reassure himself. "I don't remember anything except. . father Duran. ." Hurok stopped walking. He looked down, he knew his fathers fate. He slowly started walking again, down the road. "I need to figure things out." He thought.

The sun was well below the horizon, night had crept over Hurok as he walked. The same thought kept running through his mind "What happened to me?". He tried to figure it out himself, but to no avail. He stopped, seeing a city. A dense one at that. "What in the world. ." He thought. "Should I enter? Will I be accepted? Killed on the spot?" Hurok ran through his brain of any records of massive tribes. "I was never taught of anything like this. Then again, My memory is ruined for god knows how long." Hurok stopped thinking. Something. . or someone. . was watching him. He gripped his hammer.

((That's all I have so far. Go ahead and introduce me to the story if you can think of an AWESOME way to do so. Otherwise leave it to me.))


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"Get oop ya bum!" Edwards father kicked him in the ribs, to which he silently got out of bed. After stretching lightly and getting his shoes back on, Edward headed into the kitchen. At the table his father was drinking coffee and writing something. Ed tried to look at it, but his father pulled it away and said, "This be that request'o'audience wit Jurian, don't be worrying yourself with none of that now, ye got some work to do this mornin."
"Aye, I guess I do." Ed looked toward his chair where his rifle, some shot, his knife and a light breakfast awaited him. Less than 5 minutes later Edward was out of the door and headed to Joseph's Hill public stabling. The hour was young, and Ed was feeling a little hungover. The sun had just begun to rise over his little village on top of the hill, it was quite beautiful actually, the serene pine forests still shrowded in shadow as the roofs of the town had begun to brighten with the early morning's light. The perfect picture was ruined as Edward passed a Confederacy commandeered bunkhouse, the soldiers garrisoned their rising for their morning drills. The wore green shirts, black pants and loose leather helmets. They were older men, most had long, black beards and wore thick brown gloves to conceal their coarse hands. At their sides were short-swords, plain and broad, and in their hands were pikes, which they used to support their lazy and tired bodies at this wee hour of the day.
An officer stepped in front of a line of 20 or so of these soldiers and began to rattle off orders with the speed of a professional. "Alright ladies, pikes at the shoulder, left ranks, column and march! At the double step! Come on then, hi ho hi ho hi ho!" They were jogging down the main street of the village, the opposite direction of Edward thankfully, for he had no intention of letting the loud and rhythmic shouts of the drill-sergeant make his morning any more worse than it had to be.
Edward approached the village stable, his rifle slung across his shoulder, and knocked on the door. the stable was one of the few businesses open all day and night. There was a rusty squeal from within as the old knob turned and the door creaked open, revealing a petite, sleepy looking boy, Harold, one of the stable-boys greeted him with a sincere, "G'mornin sir," before leading Ed off into the interior of the building. People in the village proper, without big farms to store livestock, needed a place for their horses to be kept and fed, so one day an enterprising young man by the name of Timothy Briggs converted his old barn (back in the day when people thought they could domesticate hell-deer) into a full-fledge, extra large stable and offered it as a storage place for horses for a modest fee. Thats where Edward's horse was, a brown one, with a black mane by the name of Sam. Harold led Edward to the main stable room, pointed at Sam's stall and ran off to open the big old barn-doors at the end of the corridor. Ed opened the door slowly and walked forward to his horse, now standing and awaiting his master eagerly. "How ya doin boyo?" said Ed softly, running his hand across Sam's back. He looked around for the saddle and such, finding it hanging nearby. By the time he had Sam fitted properly Harold was standing at the front of the stall, looking like he was about to fall asleep. Ed smiled lightly and lead Sam out to the door, patting Harold on the shoulder as he passed by, partly out of gratitude and partly to keep him awake. As Ed mounted Sam and Harold closed the doors, Ed looked around his person for a moment, dug out a coin and tossed it to the young stableboy, who absently stuck it into his apron and threw the door shut, locking it as Edward galloped away.
On his way out of town Ed passed the village palisade, giving a nod to one of the guards manning the door. The village of Joseph's Hill, like most border towns, had a small wall surrounding it, made of logs tightly strung together with the occasional platform, big enough for about 3 men, up high enough to see over the 10 foot fortification. At the two town entrances, at either end of the main road, one heading toward the north, toward Benito, the other heading east along the border, there were old, creaky gates, being heavily manned with the latest tensions between Benito and Sothland. It troubled Edward, more now in light of last night, that the army of Jurian had so much influence over the town, but the people of Joseph's Hill were Benetians, so why would the Benetian army feel any need to do anything . . . unfriendly to its people? Edward took the east gate, heading out along the road, marked by signs to various settlements and regions, some Benetian some Soth, it was the border after all. The road was pretty well guarded though, occasionally Ed would pass a mounted patrol bearing the Benetian flag, once he even passed a strange vehicle, one he heard was called an ATV, on it were two men, one driving the other holding a shotgun, his eyes scanning the hilly and forested country intently. On the back flickered the flag of Jurian proudly. After an hour's gallop Edward finally came upon the old, poorly marked road he wanted.
The sign read "Joseph's trail", barely legible in the slowly rising sun. But Edward knew what was written on the old board, just as he knew what lay down this old, heavily vegetated trail, for threw a mile of thick forest along this old, seldom traveled road lay the breeding land, what many in the region just called Hell-Deer country.

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((Looks like I need to move time foreward a bit. Here I go.))

Daniel and Marcus had spent the night sleeping in the car. When Daniel woke up, his passenger was still sleeping. He figured He'd get moving anyways, so he started the car and drove along a small dirt road until he came upon a populated area. "'Joseph's Hill.'" he said, reading a sign he passed by. "Heh, what a name for a small place like dis. Hey, Marcus, wake up." "Huh? Where are we?" "Apparently we're in some place called Joseph's Hill." "Joseph's Hill, eh? I've heard about this place. Not exactly the friendliest place to be." "Whaddaya mean?" "This area is sitting along a border between two confederate territories. These guys got serious beef with each other." "Holy shit. Why da hell would anyone wanna live here?" "They gotta live somewhere."

((I'm out of ideas at this time. I need to find someone here who I can meet. And try to remember what I'm driving, as well as my appearance. Thanks.))

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At 5/10/08 10:22 PM, TomsPulp wrote: NG account:(TomsPulp)
Age:(17 3/4)
Character Name:(Pulp)

Needs to be a real name, no mother would name their child "Pulp"

Character age(18)
Area:(old wharehouse)

Needs ALOT more detail than that.

Weapons:(One pump action shotgun 12ga 6 shot, 2 .38 spl handguns with more than enuff ammo)

Ok I don't know if you just read the front page but this is a new scenario, click the link in my sig to find the new story and criteria for characters.

Appearance:(6'3" 170lbs, blonde hair,gangly)

TONS more detail.

Breif Bio:(I was just a regular kid on my way to the mall and the outbreak happened, good thing this warehouse had guns in it I found.)

x100 more detail, and read the new story. If your going to succeed then your going to need to put in some effort.

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((My turn.

Name: Nick J. King

Age: 23

Appearance: About 6 feet tall, about 130 pounds soaking wet. In essence, quite the scrawny guy. Pale appearance, with dark brown hair and striking, distinct hazel eyes. He has a pinched, unhealthy look and a cool stare.

Wearing dirty, torn blue jeans, black combat boots, a black, tight T-shirt that shows just how wimpy he looks. No muscle tone at all. A web belt with a holster on it, a tan, tactical vest with bulging pockets, a silver bandanna tied around his neck, and finally, a black fedora with a navy blue band near the rim.

Equipment: .40 S&W Glock 23. 13 round mag plus one up the spout. Three extra 13 round mags. Six inch, smooth combat knife in a shoulder holster.

Pipe wrench and hammer in a vest pocket, along with flashlight, first aid kit, two-way radio, weapon cleaning kit, lightsticks (5) and flares (2) plus flare gun.

Skills: Son of a brilliant army tactician, he has a knack for figuring out the right solution to a problem. Years of depending on his own wits have sharpened his abilites with his weapons and first aid kit.

He can't fix something mechanical to save his life though.

Personality: Despite his rathe