good title screen

[Senri]

is this a good title screen for a game im making? and i had to shrink it tahts y it looks weird

[TommyGun]

flash forum buddy

[EyelessArchfiend]

At 3/4/06 01:42 AM, SaiNT_SiLEiGHtY wrote: flash forum buddy

Not really. It's not discussing any techniques, he's just asking for an opinion.

I'd say it looks alright. Make it more detailed, though.

[Senri]

also wich would you like more a handgun or a shotgun handgun reloads quickly not to strong or the shot gun slow reload powerful shots?

[DancingTomato]

At 3/4/06 01:47 AM, kevinvvfry wrote: also wich would you like more a handgun or a shotgun handgun reloads quickly not to strong or the shot gun slow reload powerful shots?

you know what punctuation is so cool periods and question marks are cool and so am I and period

[PanzerKorpse]

At 3/4/06 01:47 AM, kevinvvfry wrote: also wich would you like more a handgun or a shotgun handgun reloads quickly not to strong or the shot gun slow reload powerful shots?

Shotgun would go for my fun, its harder and you have to time your shots, on the other hand pistols you just keep on clicking. Hell, i would actually go for an m16 5.56 ml. assault rifle, but thats just me.

[EyelessArchfiend]

At 3/4/06 01:49 AM, DancingTomato wrote: you know what punctuation is so cool periods and question marks are cool and so am I and period

lol. As long as you can get the jist of the message, just let it go.

I'd say keep the handgun. But if you want a tip, handguns aren't box-shaped. Details!

[Senri]

At 3/4/06 01:49 AM, DancingTomato wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:47 AM, kevinvvfry wrote: also wich would you like more a handgun or a shotgun handgun reloads quickly not to strong or the shot gun slow reload powerful shots?

you know what punctuation is so cool periods and question marks are cool and so am I and period

if your so cool than how come you werent using proper grammer??? HUH?? here is ur post :you know what punctuation is so cool periods and question marks are cool and so am I and period

here is how it shuld be : You know what punctuation is so cool! Periods and question marks are cool also, and so am I and period.

[SeizureDog]

Eh. It's ok. Your button could use a bit more spice.

At 3/4/06 01:44 AM, EyelessArchfiend wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:42 AM, SaiNT_SiLEiGHtY wrote: flash forum buddy

Not really. It's not discussing any techniques, he's just asking for an opinion.

If you're going to talk about your own Flash in any way, it's generally going to belong right in the Flash forum.

[Senri]

here it is now i like it moe like this

[Swirly-Helix]

Not really, need some more attention to detail.

[Swirly-Helix]

At 3/4/06 01:55 AM, kevinvvfry wrote: here it is now i like it moe like this

Thats cool, do the shade thing you did to the word "snow" to the word "kill". Fix the snowman, he looks crappy.

[hot-and-charming]

The screen looks ok, nw work on the game.

[lewis65]

Hm. Fairly mediocre. Try downloading a trial of fireworks, or photoshop if there is one (I'm assuming so)

Photoshop has a great effect for the word kill where you can basically drag across the text to make it all slimy, like it was running down a surface. If you do you might consider making the snowman and button frames in there too. It just makes it look better.

If not, try making all the lines the same stroke width. The reason the snowman doesn't seem to really fit with the title and background is that he is drawn with what looks like 1-2 point lines. Make them thicker and it will draw away from the empty white space of your entire title.

[EyelessArchfiend]

At 3/4/06 01:52 AM, kevinvvfry wrote: if your so cool than how come you werent using proper grammer?

That was the joke.

At 3/4/06 01:55 AM, kevinvvfry wrote: here it is now i like it moe like this

It looks better, but draw your own gun (I can't tell if it is, sorry), and make the face more 3D.

[Swirly-Helix]

At 3/4/06 01:52 AM, kevinvvfry wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:49 AM, DancingTomato wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:47 AM, kevinvvfry wrote:

if your so cool than how come you werent using proper grammer

GramAr

[Electronika]

At 3/4/06 05:17 AM, AmeerThePrince wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:52 AM, kevinvvfry wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:49 AM, DancingTomato wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:47 AM, kevinvvfry wrote:

if your so cool than how come you werent using proper grammer

GramAr

grammar

[Swirly-Helix]

At 3/4/06 05:17 AM, AmeerThePrince wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:52 AM, kevinvvfry wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:49 AM, DancingTomato wrote:

At 3/4/06 01:47 AM, kevinvvfry wrote:

if your so cool than how come you werent using proper grammer

GrammAr

Damn it, i failed

[TheMaster]

At 3/4/06 01:55 AM, kevinvvfry wrote: here it is now i like it moe like this

That looks better but it really is the quality of the game, not the title screen, that counts.

[Lost-Chances]

Poor, lack of colour.

[Shaun]

its really bad..
and wont help saving the game from being blammed.
stop wasting your time now.

[Paranoia]

It does look rather poo.

[StrikerF2]

It looks MS-painted.

Bad.