Forum Topic: Wacky story!

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gamingpro

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Posted at: 3/2/06 12:20 AM

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In a place where you live, in the year 2050, mankind will be at the threat of extinction. This is because all of mankinds technology stopped working. But one man will rise up to face up against impossible odds, face against unspeackable horrors, and defeat a conspiracy to take over the world. His name his Jimmy Wells and this is his story, not mine dammit!

Characters: Jimmy Wells- the saviour of mankind!
Robinson- Believes that someone is writing what they are saying and what happens to the world.

-Aww man! what happened to my technologies!
-I dunno, maybe that author I was telling you about wr..
-I don't give a damb about that shit you always talk about! Now shut up and see what the hell happened.

Jimmy Wells and his friend, Mr. Robinson have just found out that all of the world's tech. has just shut down all of a sudden, and they're pissed! "Hey! I have an idea!" said Jimmy. "How about we go outside and see what is going on?"

Outside a man is running around like a nut. "It's the end of the world! It's the end of the world!" "Hey Robinson.." said Jimmy. "Hand me my sniper rifle, I want to see if I can score a headshot." *grabs sniper rifle and shoots crazy man in the head* "Boom headshot! 50 points!" said the oh so happy about his headshot Jimmy.

TO BE CONTINUED!

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Posted at: 3/2/06 12:47 AM

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That was so bad I think you gave me cancer.

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Posted at: 3/2/06 01:00 AM

At 3/2/06 12:47 AM, Bakerrr wrote: That was so bad I think you gave me cancer.

I KNOW he gave me cancer.
A fucking butt-tumor lifted me right off my chair as I read this.

Thats just fucking great.


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SquareHard

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Posted at: 3/2/06 01:02 AM

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i think he gave me AIDs from that shitty ass story


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ZigZag

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Posted at: 3/2/06 01:02 AM

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Jimmy Wells? What kind of name is that? use weird names like Ventress or Jerel, not some crappy names like Bob.


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Rabid-Echidna

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Posted at: 3/2/06 01:05 AM

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At 3/2/06 12:20 AM, gamingpro wrote:
TO BE CONTINUED!

I wouldn't bother if I were you. Any story that involves a character that knows he's a character in your story can't turn out to be worth reading, especially not after the way you've started it.

Suddenly I find that all those negative thoughts creeping around in the back of my head have been shot to the front in a blaze of unwelcomed glory.

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