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jimmy5327
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Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:07:17 Reply

Im going to start a series of sticks and fullbodies, and i've already made episode 1. I need some reviews to whether or not i should continue this series.

http://media.putfile..dventures-of-Fat-Boy

You need flash player 8 to view it. Enjoy.


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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:09:51 Reply

well go ask for them somewhere else...

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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:12:10 Reply

No its trying to be a basic rip off of Weebl and bob:(

You fail.


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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:12:20 Reply

it would pass judgement, just with a really low score

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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:13:12 Reply

At 2/18/06 02:07 PM, jimmy5327 wrote: Im going to start a series of sticks and fullbodies, and i've already made episode 1. I need some reviews to whether or not i should continue this series.

http://media.putfile..dventures-of-Fat-Boy



You need flash player 8 to view it. Enjoy.

I actually thought it was funny. It would get on the portal, if you submit. It has humour, slightly ok graphics, and its a nice length. congrats.

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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:14:07 Reply

That was still a stick person. Just with a circle for a body. The "comedy" was very bland. You need to work on your writing. I did like the commercial though, got a slight chuckle out of me. It moves fairly well, not to slow of an episode, so thats good. Graphics could use a good overhaul in alot of places. Music was good. Maybe you could get some deacent voice acting in it as well.


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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:17:03 Reply

very funny! i like it!


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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:20:12 Reply

At 2/18/06 02:12 PM, Darkaxl wrote: No its trying to be a basic rip off of Weebl and bob:(

You fail.

It was inspired by weebl and bob, but i tried to make it look like weebl and bob as little possible. Did that make sence. Oh well. Thanks anyways.


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Response to Need reviews 2006-02-18 14:54:56 Reply

One more question, when i try to record the voices i get this contant noise in the background from my computer. It makes the voices sound bad, anyway to overcome this?


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