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At 2/17/06 11:39 AM, -fenix- wrote: heres my character running at the screen

no guide used on this one

hey thats Dan Paladins character

At 2/17/06 12:01 PM, TheLightningKing wrote:

At 2/17/06 11:39 AM, -fenix- wrote: heres my character running at the screen

no guide used on this one

hey thats Dan Paladins character

thats what i was thinkin when i drew the head.... i suck at drawing human heads so thats what i made

At 2/17/06 12:01 PM, TheLightningKing wrote:

At 2/17/06 11:39 AM, -fenix- wrote: heres my character running at the screen

no guide used on this one

hey thats Dan Paladins character

wtf are you talking about. that looks almost nothing like dan paladin's characters. maybe a tad bit like the flatheads, but not like alien hominid or chainsaw. Im so sick of people saying that. STFU.

At 2/17/06 12:16 PM, American_Chinker wrote:

hey thats Dan Paladins character

wtf are you talking about. that looks almost nothing like dan paladin's characters. maybe a tad bit like the flatheads, but not like alien hominid or chainsaw. Im so sick of people saying that. STFU.

i..er...i'm....s....sor..sorry...
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Here's my attempt. Went straight for the hard one! Go me..

click

sorry, imageshack's being annoying. Here it is again

click HERE now

At 2/17/06 03:08 PM, Lynn_Scottish wrote: sorry, imageshack's being annoying. Here it is again

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Good :D but the only problem is..he's walking...

Well... when I did it I thought it did look like he was running towards the screen, and then I wanted him to walk off. Sedately. I take your point though, I've had another comment in a similar vein (and picking holes in general :P). The reason is, I've tried runcycles before and the guy just looked like a skipping monkey... :s

At 2/17/06 03:27 PM, Lynn_Scottish wrote: Well... when I did it I thought it did look like he was running towards the screen, and then I wanted him to walk off. Sedately. I take your point though, I've had another comment in a similar vein (and picking holes in general :P). The reason is, I've tried runcycles before and the guy just looked like a skipping monkey... :s

if you want him to run you have to let his body rotate a bit more forward and him sweeping his arms higher. Make his face a bit more focused on the ground so his forehead and haircut is more visible. As a walking animation its very good though

:As a walking animation its very good though

*blushes* ...thanks

At 2/17/06 03:08 PM, Lynn_Scottish wrote: sorry, imageshack's being annoying. Here it is again

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As other people have said, your "walking" cycle is brilliant, for someone with no flash in the portal, it is incredible.
I've made some critism comments already about this piece, but your artwork is truly good, i'd love to see more animation from you in the future, and prehaps those sexy hands behind the screen animating it?

Anyways, i'm proud, i'd love to see you do a more detailed piece for the lightweight part, focusing on the "running".

- James

here is my entry
HERE

At 2/17/06 11:39 AM, -fenix- wrote: heres my character running at the screen

no guide used on this one

I dunno if anyone said this but when a leg is coming toward the screen it should really not touch the ground like yours does. See what i'm saying?

At 2/17/06 03:50 PM, hckypck555 wrote: here is my entry
HERE

Cool, you animation needs to be more enthusiastic though, this is all that i could find on google though. Try to animate the legs and arms more, study the way the legs move. Yours don't move enough. However, some graphic tips:
- Consistancy, this is a must, your character art must be consistant. On yours, it had lines around the face, and then not on the body, but then lines again on the arm and red lines on the feet? Try to have it all with outlines, or all without, no half/halfs please.

A good attempt, and some half decent manga, much better than i can do.

Work on the run cycle though, for best results use fbf, tweening is harder for it to look good.

- James

At 2/17/06 11:39 AM, -fenix- wrote: heres my character running at the screen

Nice, i'd tone down the heels of the shoes though (if that's what it is).

Anyways, the run cycle is good :D Character is still as wierd as ever though :P Good job :D

I made this one really quick, still kinda like it though..
http://img365.images..swedishcollab8eq.swf

At 2/17/06 04:22 PM, PalmiZh wrote: I made this one really quick, still kinda like it though..
http://img365.images..swedishcollab8eq.swf

thats a cute little.......rabbit turd...

Here is my Light Weight or Lame Weight Animation for this thing.

http://img225.images..?image=mmlogo5sj.swf

At 2/17/06 04:37 PM, TheLightningKing wrote: thats a cute little.......rabbit turd...

lol, its a meatball XD

At 2/17/06 04:40 PM, AngelOF wrote: Here is my Light Weight or Lame Weight Animation for this thing.

http://img225.images..?image=mmlogo5sj.swf

Hahaha, very funny. What is that, like three frames total and a tween? Very funny anyway.

At 2/17/06 05:04 PM, -Colie- wrote:

At 2/17/06 04:40 PM, AngelOF wrote: Here is my Light Weight or Lame Weight Animation for this thing.

http://img225.images..?image=mmlogo5sj.swf

Hahaha, very funny. What is that, like three frames total and a tween? Very funny anyway.

Yep thats it really, well, four frames and a tween, but I was gonna add a background, and Megaman Shooting Flameman, and having a health bar going down or something. Dunno yet

took about five mins...

http://media.putfile.com/hostingrun

no heart or soul was put into this :D

At 2/17/06 04:22 PM, PalmiZh wrote: I made this one really quick, still kinda like it though..
http://img365.images..swedishcollab8eq.swf

looks pretty cool.
But I think when his foot touches the ground his head should move downwards a bit or something

A Crappy edit to mine which I'm not saving due to how bad I think it is, but I added a crappy backdrop and a crappy health bar, with crappy megaman firing affects and crappy Flameman exploding afffects, so bare with me...

http://img395.images..?image=mmlogo4we.swf

At 2/17/06 05:31 PM, brainface wrote: looks pretty cool.
But I think when his foot touches the ground his head should move downwards a bit or something

Yeah your right, Im too tired to fix now though, gotta sleep a couple of hours first :P

At 2/17/06 05:33 PM, AngelOF wrote: A Crappy edit to mine which I'm not saving due to how bad I think it is, but I added a crappy backdrop and a crappy health bar, with crappy megaman firing affects and crappy Flameman exploding afffects, so bare with me...

http://img395.images..?image=mmlogo4we.swf

Dude dont put yourself down, thats pretty good, better than most of the crap that gets submitted to the portal day after day.

Good job :P

It isn't that I wasn't putting myself down, it is just that I know I could of done better, I kinda did that alittle to quick. But Thanks!

yeah i made that a long time ago through shape tweening and it took for ever

At 2/17/06 06:06 PM, AngelOF wrote: It isn't that I wasn't putting myself down, it is just that I know I could of done better, I kinda did that alittle to quick. But Thanks!

you definately need an explosion, that would make it beautiful (like not the little moving balls you have now). Do it ridiculously large and in a style like american shanker or camerro (I know it's wrong, i think its funny), or synj like in his soldier game. I don't mean to say do it like me, but I kinda mean in the style like this http://media.putfile.com/Jump4422
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ZOMG, so many blurs it looks like its going 24fps...but its really 60fps. I guess I lost the point of it... anyway. http://media.putfile.com/Bens-Run-Cycle