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[Max-Vador]

this is an unfinished movie that i'm thinking of submitting when i'm done. it was actually made in a time trial contest in which it had to be FbF, 30 seconds, and 4 hours to complete.

please tell me what it needs beside sound, and a score of 1-10.
thanks

http://img388.images..p?image=trial2ye.swf

[MadGiraffe]

At 2/14/06 08:55 PM, MaxV wrote: this is an unfinished movie that i'm thinking of submitting when i'm done. it was actually made in a time trial contest in which it had to be FbF, 30 seconds, and 4 hours to complete.

please tell me what it needs beside sound, and a score of 1-10.
thanks

http://img388.images..p?image=trial2ye.swf

It is a stick movie which is short, has no background, cheap 3d turn around, cliche theming weird ending and is inconsistant in the figures and the blood looks bad.

I'd say that would make a measly 5

[Johnny]

Not "Horrible" for a stick movie, but still needs a shit ton of work. I would like to see it again with sounds and a background.

[spike899]

it needs a lot of work, first, it needs sound desperately, try to put in like a scenic bakground but id give it a 7

[Bigfoot3290]

If it passed, it would only be by a little. There wasn't enough violence/deaths for a stick movie and it was about a minute too short. The graphics were alright though, and the 3D part was nicely done.

[Nintendo-Ninja]

PLOT!!!!!!!!
It needs some music and sfx.
Background is desperatly needed
At the very end he looks wierd while he's standing.

[xflashmanx0]

pretty good...you made it look sorta 3d and it needs to be longer and needs sound so it wont get blammed