Savage Night

[Sarai]

I wonder how to ever make it through this savage night,
The road goes on, imagined shrouded-beams illuminating potted, cracked asphalt.
Tears are jerked out from me like daisy petal game,
"She loves me, She loves me not".
Other drivers, people, seeing blacked-out flying Mercedes, northward-Bound.

Bound; Ankles and wrists, also, metal devices crush skin and bruise flesh.
I see on mind-fantasy cinema, outside freedom, now, and past. Past to live.
Savage night future though is here-present, and a likely intimate future.
Started by betrayal, mine, my own. Folly against heart-sister once loved, now Hollow.

Hollowed out eyes, I wish to weep, but blood-tears are just injury, not sweet.
I laugh at this, laughter in the trunk, no one hears, still it is special, holy.
We made vows, two of us to not be apart, we'd share life together as University friends
Taking class and taking the world hand in hand, but then we met Him.

Chao, you wanted him and so did I. What a change, we didn't share this secret.
Depths of desire coursed through us both, gave passion to our love, but rather,
aimed at another. Another lover. Such a frail thing, feeble, but it broke us.
Chao, driving, driving. But soon you must decide a future, your Sarai sobs blood.

Blood on white sheets, I betrayed you Chao but it was unto me my own betrayal stung,
I lie here in your car Chao, wondering if it was worth it, worth this.
In times past we drove together, to beaches and shores, mountains and valleys.
My ears hear our road now, we go to our little cove where we shared love on warm sand.

I have time to think back as I hear a shovel digging in the saline sand, memory rush.
Three months have passed since blood betrayed our sister-and-more bond.
I moved out with him, you took it badly, ripples of anger on beautiful lecture-bored face.
I knew my wrong and the hurt such caused, but wanted it better than I deserved.

Deserving then I was, when used and discarded by Him, my worst fears were confirmed.
You found out, hid your reaction deep in renewed friendship-smiles.
You gave to me again but wound ran deep. Till this night though, I didn't suspect; murder.
We watched a film, I fell asleep on your lap, you murmured my future into my hair;
and threw the bottle of pills away.

Away from safety, we come at last to it. No eyes but I feel trunk open, sea-breath intrudes.
Gloved hands grasp me, I think yours, you don't have enough strength to lift me out,
So my arm tears on catch, involuntary scream wrenched out of tired shell.
Silently the senses abandon their connections, as shovel strikes down;
Then rolled to Sandy grave-rest, final kiss never realised.

And that's why you didn't see me on the forums a bit, I had to go find a new body.

[tazard-falcon]

Sexy simply sexy

[Mr-Miyamoto]

:0 thats a bit disturbing

[tazard-falcon]

SEXY not disturbing......

[dapperdan1]

sounds like a Jim Morrison Poem, nice one

[Sarai]

At 2/12/06 06:43 AM, tazard_falcon wrote: SEXY not disturbing......

Both are lovely comments *_*

I'm glad I did the event justice in an artistic form.

[TBF]

Sexy and disturbing, yes. Hidden messages...maybe.

Where does this come from? I can imagine if I were to go fishing inside you head, I would catch so many interesting, maybe even disturbing things. If this were anyone else I would have asked where they copied this from, but I know you and know how much your brain is like a washing machine full of words/emotions, words that you have this abilty to manipulate and control.

A sad yet etoric poem. Nicely done.

Remember you're my jidan, and this just shows me a little more of the inside :)

[Mast3rMind]

At 2/12/06 06:37 AM, Sarai wrote:

And that's why you didn't see me on the forums a bit, I had to go find a new body.

Nice to see you back regardless...the poem it itself was full of intrique, but I'm not gonna sugar coat it, since it's good as always, and nothing less. Very good.

[Sarai]

At 2/12/06 01:31 PM, Mast3rMind wrote:

At 2/12/06 06:37 AM, Sarai wrote:

And that's why you didn't see me on the forums a bit, I had to go find a new body.

Nice to see you back regardless...the poem it itself was full of intrique, but I'm not gonna sugar coat it, since it's good as always, and nothing less. Very good.

Thank you *_*

I do write bad ones, you just don't get to see them that often as I manage to press the delete key! (Quite often!) Also, this one was a new ground for me *_*

[Mast3rMind]

At 2/12/06 01:32 PM, Sarai wrote: I do write bad ones, you just don't get to see them that often as I manage to press the delete key! (Quite often!) Also, this one was a new ground for me *_*

I do the same thing, although it's not always my fault. Comp freezes up, new ideas come into play, and etc. I'm going to tap into some poetry very soon myself. You'll see it soon enough. We all do bad work, but it's the bad that we do that allows us to see our mistakes in order to make some progression. So, bad is good, every now and then. As long as it isn't excessive.

[Leeloo-Minai]

Good to see you again sarai. I think you've got it :)

[jn]

lame

[bigexplosions]

That's not even CLOSE to disturbing compared to the things I think up.

[Lost-Chances]

Confusing at first but then cleared up a bit. A good amount of mystery with the "Him". Interesting read and a nice break from the daily "WHOS GOT THE BIGGEST PENOR!11!" topics.

[Sarai]

At 2/12/06 02:00 PM, jetninjin wrote: lame

If you could explain, I'd like that!

Lost_Chances:

Sorry it was strange *_* Chao and I... Long story, she is she and well... *_*

[VirginLungs]

I had a savage night on Friday.

Got drunk,danced and scored.. What more could a guy ask for?

[Mr-Pope]

At 2/12/06 03:18 PM, VirginLungs wrote: I had a savage night on Friday.

Got drunk,danced and scored.. What more could a guy ask for?

Lmao, when i saw this topic i thought it would be by you, about you, girls, drugs and music.

Savage.

[Sarai]

At 2/12/06 03:19 PM, Mr_Pope wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:18 PM, VirginLungs wrote: I had a savage night on Friday.

Got drunk,danced and scored.. What more could a guy ask for?

Lmao, when i saw this topic i thought it would be by you, about you, girls, drugs and music.

Savage.

I don't mind, feel free, go on, let's see some pictures then :p

[VirginLungs]

At 2/12/06 03:21 PM, Sarai wrote:

Lmao, when i saw this topic i thought it would be by you, about you, girls, drugs and music.

Savage.

I don't mind, feel free, go on, let's see some pictures then :p

of my savage night??

[Monocrom]

At 2/12/06 03:19 PM, Mr_Pope wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:18 PM, VirginLungs wrote: I had a savage night on Friday.

Got drunk,danced and scored.. What more could a guy ask for?

Lmao, when i saw this topic i thought it would be by you, about you, girls, drugs and music.

Savage.

Agreed........ It's a lovely piece of art that you've created, but I too was expecting something different; considering the title of this topic.

[evilXbanana]

Ugh. I can't say I like it. But thats probably because my class just got through a lot of work on Emily Dickinson.

[Sarai]

At 2/12/06 03:24 PM, Monocrom wrote:
Agreed........ It's a lovely piece of art that you've created, but I too was expecting something different; considering the title of this topic.

What, getting murdered isn't a Savage Night?

[Monocrom]

At 2/12/06 03:26 PM, Sarai wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:24 PM, Monocrom wrote:
Agreed........ It's a lovely piece of art that you've created, but I too was expecting something different; considering the title of this topic.

What, getting murdered isn't a Savage Night?

Torture would be more savage......... But since you requested pics, ye shall recieve them my lady. Behold your Savage Night.........

[VirginLungs]

At 2/12/06 03:26 PM, Sarai wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:24 PM, Monocrom wrote:
Agreed........ It's a lovely piece of art that you've created, but I too was expecting something different; considering the title of this topic.

What, getting murdered isn't a Savage Night?

No. This is a savage night

[Monocrom]

At 2/12/06 03:33 PM, VirginLungs wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:26 PM, Sarai wrote:

What, getting murdered isn't a Savage Night?

No. This is a savage night

Savage = 3-way with two hot girls??

[VirginLungs]

At 2/12/06 03:44 PM, Monocrom wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:33 PM, VirginLungs wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:26 PM, Sarai wrote:

What, getting murdered isn't a Savage Night?

No. This is a savage night

Savage = 3-way with two hot girls??

Yup,but I wouldn't call them savage...

Although the one on the right is not bad but has an amazing body..

[BigLundi]

At 2/12/06 03:33 PM, VirginLungs wrote: No. This is a savage night

Hey wait a minute! That's my sister on the left!

[Monocrom]

At 2/12/06 03:51 PM, VirginLungs wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:44 PM, Monocrom wrote:
Savage = 3-way with two hot girls??

Yup,but I wouldn't call them savage...

Although the one on the right is not bad but has an amazing body..

Savage night only if you woke up the next morning bleeding, covered in scratches & bite-marks!

[VirginLungs]

At 2/12/06 03:55 PM, Monocrom wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:51 PM, VirginLungs wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:44 PM, Monocrom wrote:
Savage = 3-way with two hot girls??

Yup,but I wouldn't call them savage...

Although the one on the right is not bad but has an amazing body..

Savage night only if you woke up the next morning bleeding, covered in scratches & bite-marks!

That happened to me once.Not because I was with woman but because I slept in a hedge!

[Monocrom]

At 2/12/06 04:00 PM, VirginLungs wrote:

At 2/12/06 03:55 PM, Monocrom wrote:

Savage night only if you woke up the next morning bleeding, covered in scratches & bite-marks!

That happened to me once.Not because I was with woman but because I slept in a hedge!

How drunk were you, on that Savage Night??