Forum Topic: Hmm, what you think of this style?

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Trinidex

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Posted at: 2/5/06 09:10 AM

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Hey, im fairly new to the flash scene, been messin around with it for about a month, anyway i dont wanna submit any of my crap into the portal because i've seen it done soo many times and it just ened up being blammed, i would like to make a good first impression. anyway i was thinking of submitting something that has this sort of style to it:

http://img487.imageshack.us/my.php?image=s
aradominstrike0hq.swf

by the way its based on a game called runescape, so what do you think? i know i should lengthen it but any other tips i could use? thanks a bunch :)

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Posted at: 2/5/06 09:12 AM

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At 2/5/06 09:10 AM, Trinidex wrote: Hey

its quite good nice graphics and smooth animation, make it longer
good luck


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Posted at: 2/5/06 12:31 PM

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looks too much like a clock/lock/glockesque style try to have your charactors have you know limbs


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Posted at: 2/5/06 12:36 PM

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Decent...nothing above average... You should try harder :)

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Posted at: 2/5/06 12:47 PM

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NOOOOOOOOO!! RUNESCAPE!!! Dude..Runescape sucks..nice animation though..its ok

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Posted at: 2/5/06 01:03 PM

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by the way its based on a game called runescape, so what do you think? i know i should lengthen it but any other tips i could use? thanks a bunch :)

runescape wasted over 8 months of my life


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Posted at: 2/5/06 01:13 PM

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1. It's ok, but not that good.

2. I'd be forced to 0 it because of it's theme (RuneScape). It's the only way of slowing down the RS virus... do not feed it!

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Posted at: 2/5/06 01:18 PM

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nice RS stuff.

LONG LIVE RS!!!!

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Posted at: 2/5/06 01:20 PM

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If you feel lazy, you could make it a game instead of animating everything. I can script (plain bored).

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nokotin

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Posted at: 2/5/06 01:28 PM

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its pretty good! nice animation and all make it a bit longer and add a preloader...
it does kinda look like runescape so cool.. although i dont like runescae, wasted my precious life.


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Trinidex

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Posted at: 2/5/06 03:10 PM

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hey woah dude dont worry bout me submittin this crap, i was just wonderin if i should work at this style or not, by this style i mean bkib things bouncing around killing each other with some sort of polt thrown in ; ) lol

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Posted at: 2/5/06 03:20 PM

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Personnaly i think rs sucks .... just my opinion

...BUT....

i think : the figure on the left was decent but i got to say the one on the right was really bad. try to put more efford in it. i know it takes long couse when i create something half way i get bored. .... im lazy :s hope ur not :D

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Posted at: 2/5/06 03:23 PM

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its good. but make it longer


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