Hey, im fairly new to the flash scene, been messin around with it for about a month, anyway i dont wanna submit any of my crap into the portal because i've seen it done soo many times and it just ened up being blammed, i would like to make a good first impression. anyway i was thinking of submitting something that has this sort of style to it:
http://img487.imageshack.us/my.php?image=s
aradominstrike0hq.swf
by the way its based on a game called runescape, so what do you think? i know i should lengthen it but any other tips i could use? thanks a bunch :)