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Look On The Bright Side

Send me to the trash, put me in the ashtray
Cause when all is said and done, there is nothing left to say
We live in silent twilight and stand completely still
And there's nothing left in this whole world to fill

So take me out and levitate me fine
And I'm going up, up, up to a place divine
And when I get there I look around but I'm surprised to find
This is simply the happiness that was lost in my mind

[Chorus]
So I wake up from my dream and take a look around
I still hear the song that was never written, a glorious sound
It's telling me to tell you that I was told to tell you this
Stop with everything, just calm down, or you're thrown into the abyss

Ohhhh, there's nothing left in this still picture frame
But that wont stop me from playing in this game
Everything is fine, despite the fatal flaw
And so we stare at life - like a perfect picture - in awe

It's never going no where and I'm going to regret
I'm going to the show where everyone left to forget
But I go in search of pain and that is where I went
I faced my fear and kept you near in my heart as to prevent
The sadness, it eats away, it eats away
It's prying into my mind and there's so much left to say
But it's blocking me, it's got me on mute
What do I do now?
I stand there wishing I was more astute
And what do I do now?

I'm once again in a fantasy world, everything lighted by the flame
And once again I look and realize I'm just playing this game
It's blue and red and even green, is this another realm?
It's the world we live the life we live, the problems try to overwhelm

[Chorus]

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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Requiem For A Victim

I stand here on the corner street, silent waiting for my ride
Check my watch and wait some more, grip the blade that's at my side
Waiting, watching, staring, thinking, one last chance to get inside
When the deed is done and over, the chaos will reach worldwide

Blue van, red car, pitch dark limo, stops and opens up it's door
I step inside and study their face, looks like they expected more
I'm just an assassin and I'm not that good, but this lifestyle I abhor
Sadly though it's all I'm good at, check my watch, going on four

With destination visibly in range, the limo slows it's pace
I step out again into the cold, a tone of sadness on my face
The innocent shall die tonight, crossed out from the human race
I unsheath my sword and rush inside, all the while I feel disgrace

They said take them out, every last one
Leave no evidence or you're on the run
Do it in the dark, no light, no sun
Too much evidence left by gun

Now I see the first mark, he sleeps in bed
I rest my blade upon his head
And raise my arm, lifes upon a thread
It drops like a guillotine and now he's dead

I sheath my weapon and run into the street
I left no marks except one of defeat
There was no witness, and if there was I would have to repeat
Kill them off because they messed with the elite

I'm sorry now, you're dead and gone
By my actions, and I know I'm wrong
The road of life is often cruel and long
And at the end I see torture, just where I'll belong

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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Posted at: 1/27/06 04:34 AM

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Me.
Anything you think I would like.
Please.

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Autobiography

So many people are empty and that's what they claim to be
They say we know them but we don't, they are a mystery
They want to be vagrant and perhaps they are
We'll never know them, they're forever scarred

Well you know, I try not to be like that
You can know me if you really want
Just come on and we'll have a chat
And yet, you don't know who I am...

So you know, they lock up like a personal diary
But I'm an open book, open up and you'll see
Perhaps you could read, but it's written in a language you can't understand
My autobiography, scribbled hastily by hand

And I don't try to be perfect, and I strive to be great
I can deal with my failures, I can avoid useless hate
And I try to be nice but it doesn't always work
And I know somewhere in me the negative side lurks

Now you're burning the books because you're advances on to the screen
Throw my life in the fire and trek back to your machine
The special effects throws others onto the high scene
And you took them for real, yet I'm the one that's serene

But did I care? No, I'm simply ashes on the ground
One last page remained and floated all around
It was caught by a stranger and they read it and sighed
The last page read "I'm sorry but the author has died"

So now I'm a ghost, and I write my tale once more
Too good for hell, to bad for heaven, so another life is in store

Well as long as I make it back so I could tell you goodbye
In this life I may die, and I don't want you to cry
It's fine, we'll carry on, I'm going places divine
And don't build me a monument, I don't require a shrine
Just remember me well, as I wrote in my book
And everytime I start to fade, simply have one more look
Remember my message, the words written loud and clear
"Even though my bodys lost, my spirit always remains near"

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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My problem: I don't know what I want and who I want, in terms of love life. I tend to get hung up on someone then go off them.

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write a song about a penguin who falls in love with a toaster, BUT... the toaster is in love with the penguins sister, who is lesbian.


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Posted at: 2/15/06 11:56 PM

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I'd love some feedback on the more serious songs. Also, I'll get to the requests eventually, I haven't forgotten. ^_^

Comments please:

My Mentality

The walls are striped with discontent
So we hide along the pure paint
But the horrid discolor does not relent
And I find myself trying to run but held back by restraint

[Bridge]
I cannot believe it
I cannot believe it
It's trying to pry through
But I cannot see
I cannot believe it
I cannot believe it
It's trying to pry through
But can't convince me

And now I'm pacing back and forth
Compass magnified shows me all but north
And the star of my answer lies in the nights sky
But when I try to find it I only die

[Chorus]
The lies and deceit are beginning to come clear
I tried to ignore them but they keep drawing me near
No matter what I try I cannot keep myself from checking
But every time seems more like you and my life it's wrecking

Wrong mentality
Wrong mentality
Parnoia burns
I feel the fire now

So I try to escape from this poorly built house
Fell calmly asleep on the matress til the spring popped out
And I'm running away now as the edge has roused
Tell me what the lies are about

[Bridge]

[Chorus]

Help me please! I know you can't
I sit alone saying my chant
"You love me, it's always true"
Though the sky will not turn blue

Help me please! You know I can't
I try to keep it in but only rant
"What's going on? I need to know"
Am I just on display, a twisted show?

No!

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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Posted at: 2/18/06 01:45 AM

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Fuck This Song

Fuck it...
Fuck it all...
Fuck every-fuckin'-thing in this motherfuckin' world
FUCK!

FUCK the internet and fuck all the trends
Fuck the bullshit that never fucking ends
Fuck all those who try to be unique
And fuck all those contemplatists and the fucking answers they seek

FUCK those who hate me and fuck those who care
Fuck all those who know me and fuck everyone out there
Fuck all the people who are so fucking stupid
Fuck all the laws and fuck everything "forbidden"

FUCK the schools and the fucking teachers
Fuck the gym and the poorly made bleachers
Fuck the students, every last stereo-fucking-type
Fuck the jocks, nerds, sluts, goths, emos, and everyone spreading the hype

FUCK the internet and everyone logged in
Fuck christianity and fuck all the sins
Fuck the fact that religion causes war
Fuck those at combat what the fuck are they fighting for!?

FUCK all of those who don't like to curse
Fuck you and your morals making us disperse
Fuck everyone who can't stand the fucking F word
Fuck the launguage of choice, and the language preffered

FUCK everyone who can't stand my song
Fuck you all cause it wont be long
Until I'm FUCKing rich, so fuck the critics
Fuck those in motion and fuck those paralytic

FUCK the living and fuck the dead
Fuck the genius's and those with problems in the head
Fuck the faggots, you heard me fuck the gays
Fuck the straights and their "normal" ways
Fuck the bisexual who mix them both
Fuck the nuns who took an abstinence oath

FUCK everyone who blames video games
Fuck those with a scapegoat they can burn in the flames
Fuck those who have no opinions of their own
Fuck those who are so sad they're alone

FUCK those with dates and fuck those with no one
Fuck everyone married and everyone having fun
Fuck everyone happy and fuck everyone sad
Fuck every-fucking-thing that made you mad
And for that matter fuck those that made you glad

Fuck it!
Fucking fuck it!
Fuck you!

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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At 12/28/05 03:18 AM, sjeika wrote: Hey, Star, uh...I don't normally do this, but uh *twiddles thumbs* I was wondering if you could so a song about me and psycological horror movies. That would be awesome. Thanks n_n.

I'd be happy to. ^_^

P.S. - Sorry about my post in your food colouring thread, I didn't realise you made those lyrics. I guess my neurotransmitters weren't working that day. Hehe.

Tiz alright. @.@

Now here's that song:

Get The Popco-OH MY GOD!

Sjeika went to Blockbuster one day
He got a horror movie cause he likes his movies that way
Packed with BLOOD and GORE
Made sure not to be a bore
But no no no not violence in streams
Not chopping off heads and bloody streams
Well that's always good but not tonight
It's a bloody HORROR movie to cause some FRIGHT!

Yeeeeaaaahhh! It's the movies expertise
Not the direct attempts to scare, but the subtleties
Yeah! Blood and guts!
Mysterious plots!
And death!
But all wound up in the horror of it all
Look at that corpse crawl!

Go go go go...
Uh yeah go go...

[Outro]
Let's pop in the movie
HOLY SHIT AHH!!!
AHH! OH MY GOD!
THAT'S THE SCARIEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN!
HOLY SHIT!
A DOCUMENTARY ON JACK THOMPSON!
AHHHGGG
I think I need a clean pair of underwear

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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At 12/28/05 07:53 PM, -TheFaces wrote: My biggest problem is I totaled my Z06

This must have some importance

If It's Not Broken, Don't Fix It... If It's Totalled, Can't Fix It...

-TheFaces was driving down the street
Wheels grip the street feel the friction and heat
And a sharp turn made them let go of the grip
The car was out of control, like a sinking ship
And it hit a tree, but the tree was small
And so it knocked it down and then slid into a mall
And it took out some shoppers who were buying clothes
The car continued to go forward and rolled over on some hoes
-TheFaces panicked and jumped out the side
As he watched in horror as his ride
Flipped over the edge and fell down to the ground
And hit a display, set on fire, a deafening sound

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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With Blinded Eyes, We Fight

[Intro - Fade in]
With blinded eyes we fight...
With blinded eyes we fight...

Quickly now, grab your blade
Charge with haste, don't be afraid
No time to stop, never drop
Can't die now, make it to the top
Deafening sounds, can't hear them anyhow
Blinding lights, we cannot see
Putrid sins this god cannot allow
Now corruption plagues society

[Chorus]
Up down left right, with blinded eyes we fight
They think we are weak, but we prevail with might
This was never about the war
About the cause, about the end
In fact I forgot what we're fighting for
But I cannot look like I'm weak, so I pretend

I am a soldier, merely a clone
I fight for the leader, I am just a drone
And so the mob charges, through the unknown

Maybe if we all try to look
We can stop lying, and actually read this book
The answer is lying right there

[Chorus]

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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Bomb Their Mentality

[Intro - Spoken]
"Well... Metaphorically speaking... I think they should be bombed."
"Metaphorically?"
"Yes. Exactly."
"With what?"
"...Music."

Been writing for years and I have no plans to quit
And I haven't got a band and can't rap for shit
No talent musically but I guess I can write
But as far as my future goes, there's nothing in sight
Because I'm only halfway done
All the knowledge and just no skill
Fucking bright as the sun
But no heat for cookin' on the grill

[Bridge]
But you see
It's the mentality
I may be fucking useless
Don't mean shit to me
When it comes to views
I've got the solution you see
All we've gotta do
Is fucking bomb their mentality

So I see you're greedy and you're looking out for number one
And once you've got your life set, that's it, you're done
Well come on bastard help somebody out
Because if there is a heaven, you're going to hell no doubt

So I see you're in a hurry, time is your concern
So when it comes to patience, you just can't wait your turn
Well come on bastard just wait in the line
Because this planet wasn't built to your design

So I see you're ignorant and refuse to listen to others
And when you don't like my opinon, you ask for another's
Well come on bastard just give me a chance
I have a good point but you wouldn't even give it a glance

[Bridge]

[Chorus]
Bomb! (Bomb) their mentality
Show them what they should be
Don't force it, that's just insanity
Suggest and maybe they'll agree

Too much drugs
Too much beer
Too many thugs
Too much fear
Can't go to parties cause we might get stoned
Drunk drivers all around so I guess we should stay home
Wouldn't want to get mugged, no can't go outside
Afraid for our lives because one out of a thousand died

BOMB! Their mentality
Fuck their stupid reality
BOMB! Their mentality
Maybe even though I'm useless
(You could listen to me)

And so now I must close and I think I'll end
On a positive note so lean close my friend
I'll only say this once, please listen to me
If you only spread one message, spread this:
BOMB THEIR MENTALITY!

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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Golden Erasure

"I love you" the words were spoken
A mutual bond never to be broken
I saw the words, I heard them too
And every time I heard them I believed you

But that's just me
There's always another story
Failure is iminent when it's all about lust
And after awhile, they lose the trust
(How 'bout an example!?)

Well "I love you" he painted on the wall
The wallpaper peeled in disgust
He only wants to get in her pants after all
After all the "love" that was discussed
And so now they're left
With nothing but a broken pile of trust

And now another wants to fit in
Can't find someone to love, starting to hurt within
Finally he finds someone, it's "love at first sight"
They even kissed and then talked all night
And even more amazing is the foundation of lies
It was obviously pseudo but true love in his eyes
And it finally breaks, feels like the end for him
Until two days later when he has another girlfriend

Now what we have is real I can feel it
Write it on fine paper, put it in an envelope and seal it
And should it catch fire well then we know we were lying
But it's been sitting on that shelf and it will be til the day that I'm dying
Cause I can't see inside your head but I believe you mean what you say
And listen to me closely because I treasure those words every day
And when I say it back, or when I say it first to you
"I love you" "I love you", the same words always hold true

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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Posted at: 3/19/06 04:44 PM

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Electric Love Lies In Everyone

Track List
1. Greetings
2. Heaven Can Wait
3. Love Is A Complex Simplicity
4. Zap!
5. The Sky Knows
6. Star Gazing
7. I Write This Letter
8. The Rights, The Wrongs, And You
9. Golden Erasure
10. Made In Minnesota
11. Sealed With Love

Greetings

[Insturmental intro]

Hello there, how are you?
Doing good? Well me too
And I want you to know that I miss you

Absense now, feeling later
Places apart by some creator
A glitch that I can no longer handle

I wanted to say the right words to you
But didn't know how to prove what I said
So now I'm writing you a song instead

So many songs inspired just by your love
And I'll compile them all into a CD
Even if it's never made that's not the point to me

[Insturmental outro]

Heaven Can Wait

If God was real and visited me today
And this is all he had to say
"You can go to heaven with no delay
Leave everything and fly away"
I would tell him "I'll have to decline,
You see right here on Earth I'm fine
I've got the person that I love
And I wouldn't leave her for heaven above"

And he would say "If you say no,
Then when you die you may just go
Straight to hell, and you don't want to be there"
And I'd tell him "It's okay, because this I declare..."

[Chorus]
Heaven can wait, because I'm already there
And you know sometimes life and death can be unfair
But when I'm with you it seems all okay
And I'd rather be with you than be in heaven any day
And when I'm with you, heaven comes too
Because you're so amazing, and I love you

And god left the earth and said "Okay fine,
When you're in hell don't come crying"
I said "Alright, I'll just enjoy my life here
I've got everything good, and got nothing to fear
Without my love there, it's not truley bliss
There has never been a heaven greater than this"

[Bridge]
And I love you...
Heaven can wait for another day
And I need you
It's not heaven without you anyways

[Chorus]

Love Is A Complex Simplicity

I love you, it's true, I don't know what to say
It's so easy and so hard to explain
And everytime I talk to you, you brighten up my day
In the storm of sadness you can put a stop to the rain

[Bridge]
And even though lately things have gotten a little hectic
We will always be together as long as we have true love
And any flaw is merely an illusion, there's no need to perfect it
Cause it's already as perfect as a fictional version of heaven above

Except this is really heaven here

I love you, I mean it, and I just wanted you to know
You love me, I know it, and it's not hard to show
Cause everytime I look at you, you have that radient glow
You're so perfect, in my eyes
No this is no disguise
Only reality

But when it all comes down to it
Is this song really needed
I think the best way to sum my feelings up is...
I love you

Zap!

[Intro - Spoken]
"So, you're making an album about love?"
"Yeah. It's called 'Electric Love Lies In Everyone'."
"Why?"
"Double purpose."
"Do tell."
"Well, first of all, it's true. True love is in all of us... Though it's hard for some people to find... But if it is found it's one of the most powerful forces you could feel. It's "electric" in a sense."
"And the second reason?"
"Just make it into an acronym."

[Insturmental Bridge]

(ZAP!)
(Can you feel that?)

Well you know how it goes when love is found
And we've all heart of heartbreak which is quite renowned
True love has faded and it's rarely felt
But when it gets you, you feel like you're gunna melt
Cause that lightning strikes you straight in your heart
And you realize that when you found it's only the start
Because you want to be with this person for the rest of you life
Even as a kid you want to eventually become husband and wife

[Chorus]
ZAP! Can you feel that? The love within you has broken it's shell
ZAP! Can you feel that? Feels like you've been put under a spell
ZAP! Can you feel that? Electric love lies in everyone
ZAP! Can you feel that? Lightning brighter than the sun

I can feel the love yeah I have the lightning
The electricty is extremely brightening
My life can never be all too low
When you come around and you simply say hello
Your voice already makes me happy enough
And I know that may sound odd and stuff
But it's true, and even when you're not here
I can always close my eyes and imagine you're near
And I feel you hug me and I feel the love
And I fall asleep, you're the one I'm dreaming of

[Chorus]

Well now let me clarify what I mean
Because sometimes people fall into a dream
They think they feel the ZAP but it's all a lie
And it's a sponge that sucks every sucker dry
They call it lust and it's a damn good emulation
For all the people on the love simulation
You've gotta open your eyes and realize
That in the end your partner you will despise
And sometimes half can feel the lightning bolt
But the other person cannot feel that jolt
And it ends in tragedy for the one who felt it true
They'll never feel the love again; it's that hard to renew
Plus love at first sight never existed
You may think you feel it but it's truley twisted
It probably wont work but you can always try
But you're a sucker and the sponge is sucking you dry

"Just remember to search for that real love"

[Chorus]

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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125% Chance Of Joy, 100% Chance Of Terror

Pushing up the average lies
Everyday inside who dies
Everyone - victime of deceit
Feeling fatigued, final defeat

I didn't think it could bring me down
But suddenly it feels like I'm gunna drown
I didn't think it could be true
And in the end I'll still love you

[Chorus]
But why, oh why, does this feeling persist?
Why, oh why, was terror made to exist?
When I'm so sure that everything was fine
Why wont things turn out divine?

This emptyness is all consuming and that is the irony
And I still can't find in the mirror what you could see in me
But in the end I'll never forget anything in the past
And in the begining I'll never remember any of the pain to last

[Bridge x2]
When did certainty become so scrambled?
Why does the evidence point guilty to you?
Got bad luck but still I gambled
Why does the feeling always come back to me?

And soon I'll know what is true
And I'm sure no matter what
No matter what, no matter what
I'm sure that I'll still love you

[Chorus]

Maybe it was staring me in the face
No no no, I will not fall from grace
What if everything that was a lie
Was really true?
What if it causes me to die?
And I'll still love you

[Chorus]

Now melting facades
And shining sceptors held high!
Downward watching gods
They say that I'm gunna die
Charge headfirst into the nest
The nest of the problem
Be eaten by the rest
The liars dissolve

[Bridge]
And somehow when we speak
It all floats away
Any scheme I could make up
Doesn't add up
How could someone like you betray?

[Chorus]

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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write a song about fish turd.

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wat are you going to do when the post is so hidden no one visits it


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At 5/29/06 08:24 PM, dag10 wrote: write a song about fish turd.

You bumped a topic to write that??? You suck.

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Write me a song about an emo guy liking a hot chick but she hates him and make it serios


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At 5/29/06 08:24 PM, dag10 wrote: write a song about fish turd.

Is that a challenge? >:)

I've never really owned a fish so I'm going by what I've seen
And I've had my share of pets since I am fifteen
Every single pet I've owned has shit wherever it went
But fish are a phenomenon that baffle me 100 percent

[Chorus]
I'm telling you I've seen a lot of fish in my time
I almost bought one for the cheap price of a dime
But I didn't, and I should have so I could solve this mystery
Because I've never seen a fish turd in history

There's something about these creatures
That baffle my feeble mind
But every time I see a tank
I cannot seem to find
Where any waste could have escaped
From the creatures swimming freely
From every colored fish, so oddly shaped
I cannot see the shit that they should emit

[Chorus]

Is it invisible? Solable? Or am I just not looking hard enough
Is it the same color as the water? Man why is this so fucking tough
I'm starting to give up, this is quite a hassle
Wait I think I've solved it! They must shit in the castle!

[Chorus]

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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Write a song about Mexico or my name MetalDart.

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http://metaldart.webs.com/ My freewebs website. Check it out dog.
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This topic is dead:
It has been read
a thousand times,
anyway the lyrics are insane,
so that´s why i´m posting this bullsh*t.
(to remember they´re here)


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You're lyrics suck. Everyone thinks they can write lyrics but all they're writing is general words. Anyone can write those lyrics.

Put more thought into it more than just saying general phrases.

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At 6/5/06 12:04 PM, Iron_Fries wrote: You're lyrics suck. Everyone thinks they can write lyrics but all they're writing is general words. Anyone can write those lyrics.

Put more thought into it more than just saying general phrases.

That's called writing in metaphors.. It's easily applied to poetry, harder to put into song form, but still not so hard to do.

This Song Has Thought

Travel to the other side of the clock to find
That the essence of time, a potion concocted of my mind
My thoughts, my ideals, and all of me
This picture I've painted is quite a sight to see

I've forgotten everything but my own mortality
My friends, my family, my morality
I'm breathing in so hard, trying to smell that diamond dust
But what I can't see is that all I'm getting is metalic rust

[Chorus]
When the clock strikes zero and we all fall down
Like dominos suspended, just waiting to touch the ground
It'll never happen, at least not how we portray
Until we've run out of things to do, run out of things to say

I was sitting in the twilight of the moon
Wasn't sure where I was, started whistling a tune
Decided it would be good with words to sing along
And so I pulled out a notebook and wrote this song

[Bridge]
Neon ignorance don't ignore the lights
Lost in what seems to be an emerald forest, with ruby nights

[Chorus]

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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A jewish ninja's story told by song.


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Could you make a song about me, sliced bread and getting drunk?

Thanks in advance.

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Write a song about me and how british I am (BRITISH WITH ATTITUDE.) and how I love pickles, please?


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Alright, I'm back in a writing mood, so I'm reopening this thread for requests.

At 6/5/06 05:32 PM, -OakTree- wrote: A jewish ninja's story told by song.

There once was a jew who dressed in all black
Sneaky and stealth and always ready to attack
This jew was a ninjer or so the people said
But then again anyone who denied it ended up dead...

[Chorus]
He's the jewish ninja that no one expected
Deadly and swift with his checkbook perfected
Doesn't eat pork and he'll kill you if you do
Yes you heard right he's a ninja, and a jew

Well once he was out performing ninja-like tasks
Thinking about trying on some new masks
When suddenly someone burst from the shade
It was the christian pirate! And so began the crusade...

[Chorus]

They fought a fierce battle which raged into the night
Each of them fought with oh so much might
And finally the jewish ninja did something quite bizarre...
He defeated the christian... By making a cross throwing star

[Chorus]

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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At 6/5/06 05:36 PM, -Broken_souls- wrote: Could you make a song about me, sliced bread and getting drunk?

Thanks in advance.

The Toast Is Gone!

-Broken_souls- woke up one Sunday morning
He didn't know what to do about his life anymore
And so he took this as an internetal warning
And screamed "I'm going to the store!"

He had the intention of getting bread if only to make toast
And then make a toast with a can of beer to making his life the most
So at the store he picked this up: twelve loafs and a keg
Figured in order to go up he'd have to knock himself down a peg

So he invited all his friends over and started slicing bread
Didn't even realize the foolish plan that was running through his head
And he almost chopped his finger off, he almost chopped it off
And sneezed on the bread but thankfully he did not cough

His friends arrived and he made the toast and started drinking beer
Held a cup of it on top of the toast in the air and shouted "Here here!"
And drank the cup and ate the toast and passed out on the lawn
Woke up monday morning to realize all the toast was gone

"In the house with the laughing windows, we're spilling blood like a cheap innuendo."
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