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Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 10:56:41 Reply

Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round Three!

Sorry for taking so much time, but now finally the third round is open for the following poets who made it to the third round:

(In no specific order).

Vertigo200
BloodredEuphoria
Myst_Williams
Mast3rMind
StarF68
Stoned_Slightly
Terkoz
Sarai
Earfetish
Rebel666

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Rules:
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Maximum characters: 1200
Maximum number of rows: 12
Minimum number of rows: 8
Topic: Elements (Earth, Wind, Water and Fire)
Number of contributions per poet: 1
Language: English
Must be turned in untill Friday 2005 - 12 - 30

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Good luck everyone!

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:03:35 Reply

Alright, Im in.
Hmmm, 6 days huh.
Well, Ill get crackin'
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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:05:03 Reply

Luck to all once again. It was hard to eliminate people this last time. Make it harder this time.


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:06:16 Reply

At 12/23/05 11:03 AM, StONeD_SiLEiGHtY wrote: Alright, Im in.

I am sorry that I misspelled your name... slightly. =P

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:06:34 Reply

Damn, you picked a really hard topic.
Its gonna take some creativity for this one..


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:07:18 Reply

Earfetish for teh win


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:18:15 Reply

The world is full of thoughts of crystal clarity
Our world itself posesses the upmost balnced soul,
Itself living, Itself Dying
As we had birth, are living, and will die.

Earth Brings us life.
Water sustains life.
Wind carries our last breathe.
Fire engulfs our very soul.

All is balanced with the world and ourselves.
Imbalance causes the elements to rage.
And if the elements are imbalanced.
Then life will be without meaning.
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Made this up whilst drinking my milk.


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:21:06 Reply

Sweet, made it to round three. The elements are a tough topic in regards to creativity. I'll try and come up with some smart way to go about it.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:22:27 Reply

At 12/23/05 11:21 AM, Earfetish wrote: Sweet, made it to round three. The elements are a tough topic in regards to creativity. I'll try and come up with some smart way to go about it.

Good luck to you.
I loved your last poem.
Made me think.


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:22:47 Reply

Does it have to contain all 4 elements coz thats a lot more dificult but allows people to show their true poetic talent

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:23:49 Reply

Ah, I did not make it in the third round. Death is a hard one. But good luck to everyone who has made it into the third round =).

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:30:03 Reply

At 12/23/05 11:22 AM, Starstreaker wrote: Does it have to contain all 4 elements coz thats a lot more dificult but allows people to show their true poetic talent

No, you can either just write about two elements, one element or all four. It is up to the poet. =)

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:33:48 Reply

At 12/23/05 11:22 AM, Starstreaker wrote: Does it have to contain all 4 elements coz thats a lot more dificult but allows people to show their true poetic talent

Im sorry, but you cannot compete due to the fact that this is the 3rd round of an ongoing competition. (previos topics, Love, Death)
Only 10 people may participate.
But nothing can stop you from posting, so if you do it for fun, post.

unless of course, Andersson does a Big Brother, Intruder Twist (Dont you dare!)

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:36:00 Reply

ho-damn, this sucker is still goin'? Dang...well good luck to all, MAY THE BEST LOSER WIN!!! :D


this guy fucking wants to be Cthulhu's jewish mother on some type of period and minopouse [sic] fusion!
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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:36:51 Reply

Hahaha Nice I had no idea this was going on, When are you planning on starting the next lot of rounds?


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:37:49 Reply

Thats wht I am trying to say :D

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:39:44 Reply

At 12/23/05 11:36 AM, JesseRay wrote: Hahaha Nice I had no idea this was going on, When are you planning on starting the next lot of rounds?

After this round, Three people will go on to Round four.
We'll get our subjects, restrictions and then a winner will be judged...


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:50:48 Reply

Bumped for good justice


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:52:17 Reply

The times when you just wish you had seen the first post :'(, i know earfetish pwns at poems...

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 11:56:25 Reply

At 12/23/05 11:52 AM, -SmEeRgO- wrote: The times when you just wish you had seen the first post :'(, i know earfetish pwns at poems...

Well lucky you

Original Comp
Round two


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 12:17:27 Reply

YAY I got one

Elements surrounding us
Bring life and death
Each one has a purpose
For we must all take out breath

Fire burns
While earth holds and bind
Water flushes out the strife
Yet wind howls out of its mind

If just one should disapear
then other will lately follow
Death soon will be here
For lifes shell is now hollow
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Dam pity I ain in the rankings though but I puit heart into htis please dont judge me coz I like doing poetry

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 13:36:42 Reply

At 12/23/05 11:52 AM, -SmEeRgO- wrote: The times when you just wish you had seen the first post :'(

Well, there will be a new competition after the first session has got it's winner. ;-)

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 14:07:26 Reply

(BadGuys2:)AppeasingTheGods

Time is fickle with greatness
Casting it down from might
Making those who ruled seem
Unremarkably light, for

Water is held by Freezers

Stoves dominate Fire

Vacuums draw in Earth

From Fans, Wind as desired

Lamentable is such a fate? No!
For the real merit is lost
And in this age of Science
Falsehoods inevitably rot

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To answer the likely question: Yes, I took the title from the popular flash movie, mainly because it fits the poem (although for purposes of the poem, you should ignore the part between the parenthesis) but also because I still find immensely funny the original flash.
I must admit though, that like last time, I'm not quite happy with this poem, but after having putting a considerable amount of effort into it, I loath to scrap it and begin again. Oh, and congrats to all those who passed! Cheers and kudos all round. =]


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To think about the world, click cat.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 14:30:12 Reply

Woot! I made it in! ^_^

And elements... Hmm, this should be interesting. I look forward to reading all the contributions. :D

Well, I'll write mine... I don't know, I'll just do it when I feel like it. XD

Probably sometime tonight.


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 16:02:15 Reply

yay me. third round! this one could be hard though. anyway, here's mine.

It is bright and unwavering like love and compassion,
this symbol of ever burning passion.

This double edged sword that we call fire,
can cause good or evil things to transpire.

It provides us with warmth and light,
to see us through even the darkest of nights.

But it can also be a source of pain and fear,
something that destroys all that we hold dear.

Fire can be two-faced to any master it serves,
unless it is given the respect it deserves.


I'm gonna go back to my room and be awesome.
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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 16:09:38 Reply

I hope for a winner.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-23 22:42:10 Reply

well, 3 poems in so far.
I hope everybody who made it actually sees this thread this time.


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-24 01:21:37 Reply

Can you choose an element? Or mix and match?

Or does it have to be all four elements? Just curious.

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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-24 01:24:31 Reply

At 12/24/05 01:21 AM, Myst_Williams wrote: Can you choose an element? Or mix and match?

Or does it have to be all four elements? Just curious.

hava any elements you want, as long as its about the elements.
eg: You can do a poem about water...


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Response to Newgrounds' Poem Competition Round3 2005-12-24 01:27:03 Reply

Fixing my spelling error
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The world is full of thoughts of crystal clarity
Our world itself posesses the upmost balanced soul,
Itself living, Itself Dying
As we had birth, are living, and will die.

Earth Brings us life.
Water sustains life.
Wind carries our last breathe.
Fire engulfs our very soul.

All is balanced with the world and ourselves.
Imbalance causes the elements to rage.
And if the elements are imbalanced.
Then life will be without meaning.
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Made this up whilst drinking my milk.


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