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hey where is this? is this a live thing or just a bbs topic?

Darkness veils my eyes,
I feel a cold shiver pass through my body.

The Grim reaper has entered my house,
And he is searching for me.

I hide and wimper in the corner,
But he finds me none the less.

His power overwhelms me,
And I join the past generations.

The silence smothers me, beating at my eardrums, deafening me
I scream my last lungs of air and let in emptiness
Falling through my body into an eternal void

My emotions and memories whirlwind through my skull
My life a slideshow on the back of my eyelids
Clinging desperately on to my heart’s final beat
The world spins as normal as I spin into nothing

Above me, a human puts down the fly spray.

Should I explain mine? It does I guess seem a bit confusing...

Grief

I’m stuck between a choice. Cry or die.
I ask for attention and they don’t know why.
I look up at the sky and cry while I say goodbye.
It’s just a dream, not committed suicide.
Please tell me why grief has to burn?
I’m not ignorant, it’s just hard for me to learn.
When will my life take it’s turn?
How can I get a grip on life when my grip's not firm?

Thanks Sarai, drinking and posting seriously messes up one posting habits. phew!

Im not allowed to post another poem, am I? I think I have another one.

I know there is a crazy list to follow, but I felt that some people might appreciate a weird poem I came up with.

"Pen Friend"

As I sit here with my favorite pen
I open up my heart to him
My favorite pen lets my emotions flow
Showing what I think I know
The world will read my poetry and disagree
They'll say a therapist I'll need
Poetry is my way of letting go
The shrinks say I'm insano
Medication will fix my head they say
"No." I say, I'm a okay
They locked me up in a psycho's den
And I sit her with my favorite pen

i joined this fucking competition dude, oh no its too late, my poems will blow you away faggot

At 12/10/05 09:13 PM, Squirrelmonki wrote: Im not allowed to post another poem, am I? I think I have another one.

No, according to the rules, each poet who made it to the second round may only submit one contribution to this round.

At 12/9/05 01:44 PM, Mick_the_champion wrote: Calm down, calm down.

I was very calm. I only state that I do not appreciate any bashing at all.

I was just making a joke, not slating your emo princess...

That is alright, my "emo princess" though... I do not wish any associations with such names. Sarai, is alright though.

At 12/10/05 09:20 PM, Zenmuron wrote: i joined this fucking competition dude, oh no its too late, my poems will blow you away faggot

According to the rules of this competition, which all contributors must follow if they expect to be in the competition, do say that you are too late and did not get to the second round.

And if you will continue to fill the competition with verbal abuse, then I am afraid that I will take action.

I wish i could right poetry...wait no i dont.

At 12/10/05 09:20 PM, Zenmuron wrote: i joined this fucking competition dude, oh no its too late, my poems will blow you away faggot

If you wish to be apart of this, its too late. I can't stop you from posting, but you won't be getting any votes either way. You aren't on the lists.

Anyway, thanks to all those cooperating.

And those who did not see this, there will be another eventually I am sure. Just as there will be another writing competition eventually. So just be patient and keep your eyes open.

At 12/11/05 12:29 PM, gumHaNukiah wrote:

At 12/10/05 09:20 PM, Zenmuron wrote: i joined this fucking competition dude, oh no its too late, my poems will blow you away faggot

If you wish to be apart of this, its too late. I can't stop you from posting, but you won't be getting any votes either way. You aren't on the lists.

You can always AIM me, I remove posts ;-)

At 12/11/05 02:08 PM, Sarai wrote: You can always AIM me, I remove posts ;-)

Thanks for the offer. I'll keep that in mind. :)

darkness, death, blood, waaah waaah waaah

Can I plz post another poem? The 1st 1 I just slapped together fast, but I have another one that I took my time on. Can I please post it? I dont like the way my first one turned out.

Here it is

Emptiness and fear consume my soul,
as I reach life's final goal.

On the inside, I feel cold and alone,
as I lay in a bed that is not my own.

As I die, I think about where my sould will roam,
then I see a light above me and know that I'm going home.

At 12/11/05 06:11 PM, Terkoz wrote: Here it is

Emptiness and fear consume my soul,
as I reach life's final goal.

On the inside, I feel cold and alone,
as I lay in a bed that is not my own.

As I die, I think about where my sould will roam,
then I see a light above me and know that I'm going home.

That one was really hilarious.

I cant believe some of the people here are serious with their teenage angsty poetry

At 12/11/05 08:04 PM, AITD wrote: That one was really hilarious.

I cant believe some of the people here are serious with their teenage angsty poetry

Hahahah you heartless bastard.

It is pretty funny though.

At 12/11/05 08:04 PM, AITD wrote: I cant believe some of the people here are serious with their teenage angsty poetry

There isn't any thing wrong with poetry. There isn't any thing wrong with the poem either. If you are going to comment on the poetry in hear, either make it constructive criticism or praise. Nothing else needs to be posted.

Can I please post my better poem?

At 12/11/05 09:36 PM, Squirrelmonki wrote: Can I please post my better poem?

no, and stop picture spamming. This is part of the competition. What you post, is what you post. Its like the mail.

just bumping

At 12/11/05 08:28 PM, madEyeMoody wrote:

At 12/11/05 08:04 PM, AITD wrote: I cant believe some of the people here are serious with their teenage angsty poetry

There isn't any thing wrong with poetry. There isn't any thing wrong with the poem either. If you are going to comment on the poetry in hear, either make it constructive criticism or praise. Nothing else needs to be posted.

ok ok ok.... geez, sorry mister- i-am-going-to-follow-the-leaves-on-their-d
ark-journey-to-death

At 12/12/05 11:08 AM, AITD wrote: Stuff...

AITD, gumOnShoe is right, the people who contribute to this competition does not wish to be insulted by their critics.

So please, take more time into your evaluations of their poems and make them as constructive as possible. Or do not post them at all.

At 12/11/05 08:04 PM, AITD wrote:

That one was really hilarious.

I cant believe some of the people here are serious with their teenage angsty poetry

wow. took me a while to check back. i'm not serious. i just want to win.

When roses become frail and lose their lucious color
This disease is my constant reminder
That nothing so beautiful can live forever

The petals of the world begin to decay
And like the rose, I age and slowly wilt away
The dying light from the sun shows the ending day

The rotting skin knows its future and welcomes it openly
Grim Reaper take me but pluck me gently

At 12/8/05 11:54 PM, GoldenClock wrote: Newgrounds sucks at poetry

Yes.

Very badly.

5 day mark

Bump

At 12/13/05 07:55 AM, madEyeMoody wrote: 5 day mark

Bump

correction 4 day mark

Shit, did I miss the deadline?

damn exams.