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At 2/24/06 11:02 AM, Modnar wrote: Suddenly, he opened his eyes after a good night sleep, and found himslef posting on the BBS about an entrance. ftw?

ftl
D':

Overall: not used
Creativity: not used
Humor: not used
Impact: not used
Vocabulary: not used
Originality: not used

At 2/24/06 11:03 AM, Beniminishizm wrote: Newgrounds was once a peaceful countryside village... Beniminishizm is here.

Overall: 4
Creativity: 4
Humor: 4
Impact: 4
Vocabulary: 4
Originality: 4

At 2/24/06 11:10 AM, Enoll wrote: And lo, across the digital plains Enoll did ride...
...
... For now the BBS knew, Enoll was truly among them

Overall: 8.5
Creativity: 9
Humor: 8
Impact: 8
Vocabulary: 9
Originality: 8

At 2/24/06 12:09 PM, Zerok wrote:

At 2/24/06 11:08 AM, Zerok wrote: Hmmm, now let's see if I can't cook up something here...

I had a bit of creative fun with this. No real editting done. So any terrible grammatical errors I apologize in advance for
Then follows two posts of sheer godliness

:O o_O

Overall: 11
Creativity: 11
Humor: 11
Impact: 11
Vocabulary: 11
Originality: 11

Very great entrance, Enjoyed reading it and put a smile on my face. My one comment was that I asked for an entrance, not a fucking novel. ;) Good story though.

At 2/24/06 12:33 PM, -Opium- wrote: The sky rumbled while simultaneously the ...snip... down and as the sand lowered settling on the debris of several trees the dark figure emerged.

-Opium- had arisen from the storm.

Overall: 7.5
Creativity: 7.5
Humor: 7.5
Impact: 7.5
Vocabulary: 7.5
Originality: 7.5

It was a quiet day, on the Newgrounds BBS. People posting, people flaming, mods doing what mods are best at. Unbeknownst to them, they were being watched. Lurking in shadows and mist, he awaits his time to rise. Unknown, unseen, he walks the razor's line between light and insanity. Neither angel or daemon, yet above these creations all.

Crappy stick movies cower from his fury, unable to hide from his penetrating gaze. "Teh PSP shall not spin, while I have breath in my body," he says in a strong, reassuring voice. Gunshots echo across the Newgrounds plains in quick, stacatto bursts, as yet another 10kb file is snuffed from existence.

With the spear of the sun on his shoulders, he walks the paths of darkness, hunting vermin. An unclaimed throne awaits the day he dares to rise... Until that day, he stands, at the gateway, a lone guardian against the denizens of Flash Hell...

All was quiet on the Newgrounds front, quiet until it happened. With a loud CRASH, BANG, BOOM, PowerPrower ripped through the fabrics of existance and fell to the ground (landing face first for he has no grace) and then he layed there, motionless. No one made a move for no one knew what was going on or what to do at this moment. He stands up, looks around and shouts "Damn you muffins!" and leaps back into the sky, tails whirling and disappears into the dawn of the Newgrounds skies. To this day, no one knows who this person was, but now refer to him as Crazy Muffin Man.

At 2/27/06 12:12 PM, Guardian wrote: It was a quiet day, on the Newgrounds BBS. People posting, people flaming, mods doing what mods are best at. Unbeknownst to them, they were being watched. Lurking in shadows and mist, he awaits his time to rise. Unknown, unseen, he walks the razor's line between light and insanity. Neither angel or daemon, yet above these creations all.

Kind of over tried beginning. Almost all of these so far have this. No real grab. I read it, but I almost don't feel like I should continue to read. Its too normal and drab so far. And then your hint at yourself just isn't that great.

Crappy stick movies cower from his fury, unable to hide from his penetrating gaze. "Teh PSP shall not spin, while I have breath in my body," he says in a strong, reassuring voice. Gunshots echo across the Newgrounds plains in quick, stacatto bursts, as yet another 10kb file is snuffed from existence.

Stacatto, best word yet... a little better. You'll get some points for this paragraph, but it still could have been better. You could have put in more description and tension.

With the spear of the sun on his shoulders, he walks the paths of darkness, hunting vermin. An unclaimed throne awaits the day he dares to rise... Until that day, he stands, at the gateway, a lone guardian against the denizens of Flash Hell...

Meh, decent ending, still not great and you never really "came out"

Keep trying

Overall: 6
Creativity: 6
Humor: Not really used
Impact: 6
Vocabulary: 7
Originality: 5

At 2/27/06 01:38 PM, PowerPrower wrote: All was quiet on the Newgrounds front, quiet until it happened. With a loud CRASH, BANG, BOOM, PowerPrower ripped through the fabrics of existance and fell to the ground (landing face first for he has no grace) and then he layed there, motionless. No one made a move for no one knew what was going on or what to do at this moment. He stands up, looks around and shouts "Damn you muffins!" and leaps back into the sky, tails whirling and disappears into the dawn of the Newgrounds skies. To this day, no one knows who this person was, but now refer to him as Crazy Muffin Man.

Seriously not that great... I mean your name isn't even Crazy Muffin Man... not the worst I've seen but I'm not doing any commentary on it

Overall: 5
Creativity: 4
Humor: 3
Impact: 4
Vocabulary: 4
Originality: 3

rumble? crash? anyone?

KA-BOOM!

The Towers were alight! One stood, not caring, as the masses weeped their loss.
The one flicked his cigarrete. Bleeding, he got his packet, and lit a new one. The crowd stuttered in awe.

At 6/19/06 07:25 AM, SaiNT_SiLEiGHtY wrote: KA-BOOM!

The Towers were alight! One stood, not caring, as the masses weeped their loss.
The one flicked his cigarrete. Bleeding, he got his packet, and lit a new one. The crowd stuttered in awe.

After the contest is over I will continue rating these, but for now you might as well post this in the contestant thread.

It was an average day on newgrounds, around 10:05pm (GMT) on a thursday. spammers spammed, mods banned the spamming spammers and more kitty krew flash got blammed when all of a sudden there shined a bright light, in the bright light there was a god-like figure, meanwhile, on a normal, slightly kooky, average thread, Freaki-boy92 posted on a thread whithout knowing how long ago the last post was or whether or not it had been soft-locked... hopefully it won't be a catastrophic mistake

A flash of lightning struck causing everyone's monitor to shake. A red glow reflected off the screen, nearly blinding the BBS user's eyes. Suddenly an alarm was sounded and everybody in the BBS were posting like crazy asking what to do. Then TJoyal came out

TJoyal: Halo Thar!

Zenon bounced in the room!

":D"

I fucked my girlfriend in the ass lol.

as the gamer from many site was typing into the forum. he put on his music. and just when he was ready....."good o'l newgrounds what have you done today"-and the duh duh dhu music goes on."wtf was that?"

At first, 07' newfaRgs were bringing cancer to newgrounds. All hope was lost, the mods and regulars could not win, there were just too many crappy memes and retardism. But on January 1, 2008, there was....
McZero.

and then there's some cheesy 80's rock playing in the background while I slice many newfaRgs and idiots
such as davidzx.

Doom-Fan got up from sleeping and made a post.

Hurr.

Anko approached the large white doors fervently, excited, for his knew behind these doors await men and women who would risk death just to touch his 5 inch red stiletto heels.

Never in history has there been a more publicly accepted and adored cross-dresser. At the height of his career Anko performed for President Minute Maid! And the same Anko was about to address over 300,000 people.

The doors opened. Anko stepped out and was immediately hit with a barrage of light. He stumbled and fell.

The the lights were emanating from a policeman's flash light.

For Anko was drunk and was about to be arrested for braking into Saks Fifth Avenue, yet again.

President Minute Maid is made of 100% Juice.

On one sunny day, cosmopolitans of the B.B.S. were just regularly going about their daily lives, posting in threads of all kinds.News threads, masterbation threads, photoshop threads, you name it. Then at a abrupt moment, the ground started to tremble. The rocks started to bounce wildly and everything was practically being tossed down to the ground. The shaking stopped after a while. The people were shocked at what had just happened and took some time for them to realize that the shaking had stopped. Looking around in awe of all the destruction, they asked if everyone was all right. As they were wandering around, looking at the damage of their houses and threads, an enormous buldge come up from the ground at the center of town, about a quarter mile in all directions.

A big beam of light emitted from where the buldge through the cracks and shot up towards the heavens. Then something suddenly burst out from the ground and a huge wave of wind spread throught the town and brought everyone down on the ground. The "thing" seem to be a person as it was just floating in the air looking down on the little town. It also had things around it of what seemed to be level 1 through level 60 icons just floating around it in a gyroscope kind of manner.As the people looked closely they couldn't believe who it was.

He was only talked about in legend, fairytales, myths. But he was real; Randy was real.

Everyone was going about their daily posting. and I made this post.

King Fulp stared long at his kingdom. It was a normal day in the BBS, the under thirteens posting, mods locking threads anyway, nothing unusual. That was until the horrific day arrived. The day of the devil, they would call it. Tom trembled with fear as he watched the fall of the portal. Pico died, P-Bot's circuits turned to dust and all hell broke loose, with hell being the blammed portal submissions. Dogpup4 had arrived as everyone hid in the FAQ section. He tore his way to the corner, with the unread letters of the guide being demolished. He then roared:
"Hai guys, wanna see my new flash game?". EPIC.