you opinion please...

[hypractvmidget]

i started to make an "inspirational" type movie about suicde with my friend and we're unsure about a part in it... please watch this and tell us what you think of the fade out and fade in to the close up or if we should change that somehow... and remember, its nowhere near bein done so please give us crap about it... and yes, the leg goes straight out when it shouldn't i know, we're gonna fix that but we wanna get this done first so please give us your thoughts on it.
thanx
hypractvMIDGET

[Microgrim]

The first part is good but dont scroll left, scroll down so if he does infact kill himself you see his body fall, its alot more deep that way then showing the whole thing off screen.

[Max-Vador]

well.....it didn't make much sense, and the rotation was too jumpy, other than that, there wasn't really anything else

[Cybex]

I thought it was quite good. Except, after it fades in, it goes from him being completely still, to him having major spasms.

[hypractvmidget]

bump

[GuitarBrdArounO]

ya the fbf was alright.. except at parts where he jumped all over the place... keep up the good work tho.....

[Starogre]

It was ok, don't like suicidal themed flash movies because they make no sense and are pointless. But animation isn't everything. You want a good theme that everyone likes, not emo crap. Try harder on plot, if this is a full length movie. Otherwise, the animation was alright. You could still smooth out the lines though.

[yusque]

good ..........................................
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