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A New Ground’s Story – Part 9.1

They had finally reached the Forest. The descent had been a pretty extenuating ordeal. The second they had arrived under the coverage of the New Ground’s dark trees, they took a quick pause. Scott’s arm was injured, but he was keep saying that he was all right. But they were really tired. Even DancingTurkeyGod wanted to stop for a few minutes. Lidov was trying to find out in which part of the Forest they had fell in. When DTG put her feet in some murky water, there was no doubt: They had arrived in the marshes. Immediately, the young girl got a flash;
-Jeremy Lokken! He lives in these marshes… I’m sure he will help us. He helped me once, when Ramagi banned me.
Lidov wide-opened his mouth with fear.
-Jeremy… Lokken? asked ScottMale. You mean that crazy old man who lives in the Forest?
-Crazy, crazy… said DancingTurkeyGod. I’m supposedly crazy too, ain’t I? DanMalo sprayed crazy rumors about him after he got banned. He said he had murdered his family, burrowed them in the Forest and…
-And? asked Lidov.
But she wasn’t listening at him. She was looking at the trees. All her senses up. Scottmale drew his handgun and questioned her.
-I’ve just heard something from behind us. We’re not alone. Let’s move! Let’s go to Lokken’s house… if we can find it.
Luckily, after walking five minutes in the muddy marsh, they arrived at the researched house. House wasn’t the word. If they could have find a word for it, they would have called it a “shack”. But it was all right for the moment. Lidov knocked on the door. No response. He knocked again, but DTG opened the door. Inside, it was pretty clean, for a small hut in the middle of a marsh.
-He’s not here… she said.
She entered the house, followed by Lidov.
A gun shot. A pain noise. A corpse falling in water.
-NO! shouted Lidov.
A woman was standing just outside of the door. ScottMale at her feet. She was holding a long dagger covered of blood.
They immediately went back inside. Closed the door and blocked it with an old table.
-We must get out of here, said DancingTurkeyGod. The Asylum wants us dead, I think.
-She got ScottMale… slowly said Lidov. She killed him…
DTG looked for an exit.
-Follow me! she said before jumping in a window without any hesitation.

After leaving Night Crawler’s Manor, Ozcar immediately went back on his horse and hurried to the Mountain. After thirty minutes, when he finally reached the Asylum, he fired with his rifle.
-I need back-up! he shouted.
A couple of minutes after, the Asylum’s entrance doors opened. Funk was standing in the all, outfitted as always with his long leather coat covered of metal spikes. DanMalo was next to him, paired with PsychoMonkeyParade, his monkey.
-Funk, I need the twins badly, said Ozcar in a breath. Tell them to start hunting for the old Nightcrawler. They better not fail, this Nightcrawler doesn’t belong to New Ground anymore. Tell them to kill him as fast as they can when they’ll find him. He was too quick for me, I hope they will be able to get him…
Funk smiled.
-They never fail.

At 10/24/05 09:10 AM, FBIpolux wrote: which part of the Forest they had fell in.

Fallen in

>:)

At 10/24/05 09:22 AM, JohnnyWang wrote:

Haha, don't start again. I said Myst_William will correct everything when the story will be over so we can put it on his website.

I would like comments from you, not corrections.

At 10/24/05 09:46 AM, FBIpolux wrote:

At 10/24/05 09:22 AM, JohnnyWang wrote:

Haha, don't start again. I said Myst_William will correct everything when the story will be over so we can put it on his website.

I would like comments from you, not corrections.

Just fucking around with ya :)

Great story, it is quite refressing compared to most of the NG stories.

Im so impatient my nuts are imploding.
PUT ME IN THE STORY!

if you havent written me in yet :/

At 10/24/05 08:06 AM, FBIpolux wrote: Use the search bar :) I thought she had posted at page 1 or so in this thread anyway...

I could, but then I am just reading what seems to be aimless posts.

Working on part 9.1 right now.

It was great man. Keep up the good work. My site is coming along too, faster than I thought. I am probably 50% complete. : )

At 10/23/05 02:57 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: So who is this Sarai? I dont think I have ever seen her around.

If you see this m'lady, please post. : )

Boo :)

xxx

Is it possible for me to pull a Jesus and be resurrected? lol.

At 10/24/05 01:31 PM, Vegeton wrote: Is it possible for me to pull a Jesus and be resurrected? lol.

I hope you liked your character :)

He wore a jason mask and a chainsaw.

At 10/24/05 01:26 PM, Sarai wrote: Boo :)

Haha, hey. I am supposedly your master. ; )

Note: The wink was not a sexual insinuation. : )

At 10/24/05 03:39 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Haha, hey. I am supposedly your master. ; )

You'll be happy when I'll release part 9.1 :)

Tonight.

I hope I will be happy to!

;-)

*poke*

by the way, I'm sorry my posts are really poor recently, I'm so busy, I've not got time for my normal intelligent witty chat :(

*cries*

At 10/24/05 04:28 PM, FBIpolux wrote: You'll be happy when I'll release part 9.1 :)

Oh shit, now you got me excited. : )

Two parts in one day? Oh snap! :o

A New Ground’s Story – Part 9.2

Another car arrived in front of the huge iron doors protecting the Asylum. Again, they were just opened enough to let someone pass. Protege-moi closed her Chevy’s door. She grabbed a silenced 9mm pistol, a couple of hand grenades, some night vision goggles and a long knife in the car’s boot and put it all in her small backpack. She loaded the pistol and put it in her holster. She’ll always love her job. She took a water draft and locked her car’s doors. Protege-moi crossed the doors with feline steps. Once again, she would use every thing she had learned from her master. When she was still an adolescent, Protege-moi had joined an Auto-defense class in Macromedia City, where she used to live before. She had been attacked by a man and almost get raped. But luckily, a man had arrived and kicked her aggressor’s ass out. This one had died a few days ago from a broken spine and internal bleeding. Protege-moi was so thankful to the man who had saved her that he proposed she join his personal and private school. At the beginning, she was only going in the school a few hours per week. The first time she went there, she have been really surprised. Her Master, called “the Mystic William”, had created an underground and secret association. Only some rare and talented persons were allowed in it. The locals were located in an abandoned Gym, in the middle of the town. They were around ten students, all young girls like her. She hadn’t been surprised when she saw that their training area was an old boxing arena. What surprised her was the speed their performances were increasing with the help of Mystic William’s teaching. Quickly, she became lethal and dangerous. After 1 year of training, she was able to knock out somewhere holding a gun pointed at her 40 meters away before he shoots. In this class she learned Kung-fu, Judo, karate, brawl fighting, street fighting, gun, sword and bow handling. Plus she learned a bit of the Ninja art, katana handling and nunchaku fighting. After having trained for four years, she finally reached her 20th birthday, and decided to become a bounty huntress. Supported by her friend Sarai, another student of Myst William, she finally started her new job, even if her parents hated her for this. Most of Myst William’s students followed her path. But some others, like Sarai, preferred to live a peaceful life. But some others wanted blood. Like the Twins. Everyone called them the Twins because they were always together. Mary and Nephthys, the two sadistic huntresses. They had lived so many horrors in their lives, according to the few things Myst William said about them. They had entered the school before her, and left it when she was 19. She had totally lost their trace and wasn’t really bothered about it. They were the best but also the most pitiless students. She would have liked to stay in Myst William’s school for a couple more years but mysteriously, he disappeared, leading to the school’s end. At the same time, she got her first contract: assassinating HilariousGenocide, a member of the NBS, a British association.
And now she was standing in front of the biggest challenge she ever faced. Entering New Ground’s Asylum, kidnapping a murderer and bringing him back to the Village. Her hardest challenge. But she was ready. Myst William had been like the father she never had. He had helped her all the way to what she had become today: a rich bounty huntress feared of her enemies. Nev was sure the murderer was hiding somewhere in that ancient and huge building. She would have to find out where this murderer, whoever he was, was hiding. She had no clues. No idea. Nothing. Except a thing about a motorbike. But it wouldn’t help her much. She continued on the little path leading to the Asylum’s entrance. There was no guards, nobody in the yard, which was strange. She finally entered the great hall. The Greek architecture first surprised her, but she had to concentrate on her mission. She looked for doors. There was three. One leading to the stairs, two others leading to corridors. She headed to the stairs, going up. But as she entered the stairs, a big and tall man appeared from a door. His coat was covered of long metal spikes and he was looking at the girl with hatred, a long whip in his right hand, ready to strike.
-What are you doing here? asked the giant to Protege-moi.
She took her distances. Staying out of the whip’s range.
-Doing my job, handsome boy. Would you let me, please?
Funk didn’t smile and repeated his question.
-I’m doing my job, all right! Now let me go or I’ll have to kill you.
Funk finally smiled.
-I’ll have to do mine, now, he said.
And he released his whip. With agility, Protege-moi managed to dodge it and tried to grab her pistol. But the supposedly missed whip grabbed her left foot, forcing her to fall on the ground violently. Funk approached her, put a foot on her chest and laughed.
-You were doing what? he asked with a sarcastic tone. Please repeat, girl.
She tried to breath, but Funk’s foot was choking her. She tried to grab her knife, but it was out of her range. Finally, she got an idea. The simplest thing and probably the first thing Myst William had taught to them. She kicked the giant in the nuts with her right foot. Immediately, he released her and she grabbed her silenced pistol, shot three times in the head and kicked the corpse.
-I was doing my job, handsome boy.

At 10/24/05 09:50 AM, JohnnyWang wrote: Great story, it is quite *refressing compared to most of the NG stories.

*Refreshing. Annoying, isn't it?

The story is great FBI. We might need to make a fan club soon *gasp*.

Wow it keeps getting better.

And its got raped :)

This is totally awesome, FBI.
I hope I make more appearances, and I hope to see more great work.
I'm getting inspired to do a big user story.

*can't wait for next few parts*

Still a great story, even though I haven't seen me yet. Sorry, ego is a bitch. Awesome story.

At 10/24/05 09:56 PM, FBIpolux wrote: Finally, she got an idea. The simplest thing and probably the first thing Myst William had taught to them. She kicked the giant in the nuts with her right foot.

Haha, classic. I am a good teacher. : ) I wonders if Mystic Williams shall ever be seen again? I like how you gave my character this cool Raiden vibe, but with some extra 'Mystery'. ^_^

Another awesome piece man. I already have speculations as to who I think the killer is, but I will keep it to myself just incase. So much going on at once - I love it!

let me have an EXTRA PART in it

PLEASE

ILL BE A BUS BOY Or sumthing :)

At 10/24/05 11:28 PM, TheBoneThug wrote: Still a great story, even though I haven't seen me yet. Sorry, ego is a bitch. Awesome story.

6 more Parts to come, plus decimals :)

At 10/24/05 11:21 PM, JadeTheAssassin wrote: I'm getting inspired to do a big user story.

Not another one!

j/k, actually, I like them...

At 10/24/05 10:41 PM, DancingTurkeyGod wrote: The story is great FBI. We might need to make a fan club soon *gasp*.

*Gasp*

I need one just for this odd screenshot. I SWEAR IT'S NOT PHOTOSHOPPED.

At 10/25/05 12:05 AM, FBIpolux wrote:

At 10/24/05 11:28 PM, TheBoneThug wrote: Still a great story, even though I haven't seen me yet. Sorry, ego is a bitch. Awesome story.

6 more Parts to come, plus decimals :)

Dam, that's going to be long...

Not that I complain, more Polux gewdness.

A bit short but well, it was part 9's ending :)

A New Ground’s Story – Part 9.2

Sarai immediately reloaded her crossbow. Now she had to get out of that room. She grabbed her katana lying on the ground and moved to the door in front of her. But as she was walking to it, a couple of people arrived in the room from a third door behind her. “The security” she thought.
-Drop your weapons! yelled someone behind her as she dropped her katana, turning to face her new opponents and hiding her crossbow in her back.
There was two mans in front of her. They were standing 20 meters away from her, pointing a pistol on her. They had some strange signs on their chests and she recognized their faces. They were both ancient residents of New Ground, just like her. The guy at her left was named Gunter. He used to be a lumberjack for the village. He had disappeared a few years ago and now it looked like he was working for the Asylum. She would have to investigate on this. The second person was DanAbnormal. He used to live in the village too, but he had been chased from it after everyone thought he had killed Olskoo, an ancient Moderator. And seeing him now working for the Asylum was strange. He also used to work for the NBS, an association reputed for their crimes. Why would they hire a weirdo and maybe a criminal to protect this secret building? There was no times for questions at the moment, though.
-I said drop your weapons! yelled Gunter again.
She dropped her crossbow and prepared herself for some action. Her body was ready. Now she had to wait for the good moment.
-Now raise your hands and come with us, slowly said Gunter.
Sarai started to move in their direction. But when she saw DanAbnormal’s concentration started to dissolve, she passed to action. Quickly, she crouched behind a seat and jumped a few meters on her left. A couple of bullets got shot in direction of the seat she was standing behind a few seconds ago. She gone round a seat row and sneaky arrived behind Gunter. She sent a kick directly to his head, sending him to the ground. DanAbnormal turned to her but she was too fast. She had already approached him and kicked him in the stomach. He felt on the ground, unconscious and choked. She grabbed their gun, thrown them in the fireplace, grabbed her katana and her crossbow and ran to the door she was heading to before those two guards arrive. But for a second she got a flash. She went back to the bodies. There was a sign on their shirts… A Ying-Yang sign… Could they be the murderers? “Probably not” she told herself. They looked more like security guards than serial killers to her. She would have to talk about this to Jeremy Lokken when she’ll find him. She ran to the door again and opened it. Another long and white corridor filled of metal doors and at its end, another staircase.
-I hate stairs… she sighed before starting ascending them.

hey FBI Bolux how could u leave your good freind deckmaster171 out

See Dan, that's what you get for begiing for a role, you get cast as an evil henchman who gets killed 3 minutes into his first appearance.

...roleblz. You know you want to kill me:

mans

It's men. Nyah nyah nyah.

At 10/25/05 10:47 AM, JohnnyWang wrote: See Dan, that's what you get for begiing for a role, you get cast as an evil henchman who gets killed 3 minutes into his first appearance.

:(
Oh well.
I just wont read it anymore >:(

yes i will :(

At 10/25/05 10:47 AM, JohnnyWang wrote: See Dan, that's what you get for begiing for a role, you get cast as an evil henchman who gets killed 3 minutes into his first appearance.

Killed? Mostly choked and stunned.

At 10/25/05 10:51 AM, FBIpolux wrote:

At 10/25/05 10:47 AM, JohnnyWang wrote: See Dan, that's what you get for begiing for a role, you get cast as an evil henchman who gets killed 3 minutes into his first appearance.

Killed? Mostly choked and stunned.

Oh come on, how about brain damaged as well :p

;-)

If you need any characters that you just want to kill off, im definetely up for that :D

At 10/25/05 01:51 PM, Sarai wrote: Oh come on, how about brain damaged as well :p

;-)

Tsk, I won't say anything else.

Part 10.1 tomorrow. :)