Hi there.. i need help to improve

[HappyGrave]

Hi there you all.. I am real new to flash and need a hand to improve my first game..
you will find it at http://www.newground..m/portal/view/264993

I also would like to know how to make somthing jump to another level (not level in the game sence but lvl as in a difrent level on the stage)

if you test my game you will see that the Bubbles(shots) follow the aliens arm after you have fired! how do i fix that skript error(i know why it is doing the error but i dont know how to make a shot that dont follow)?

i need lots of more help but this is what i want to fix first.. i you find other problems then please tell me what they are.

thank for your time

[Darkaxl]

i have no idea but Im bumping the topic cause it seems you honestly wanna improve. Which is always a good thing ^^;

[Fim]

It' not bad. I personally thin it'd look better if you were looking at the alien face on instead of side on but that's just my preference. Levels would be good, and bonus stuff like larger "bomb" shooter things, and lives that you could pick up.

Good job though.

[Polycronics]

I'd like to say that the look on that guys face proved humorous. A kid hit the ground, and I shot RIGHT afterwards, so he just looked like a delayed, oblivious retard. The grin was very Dad's Home.

As far as improvement, I know you are focusing primarily on scripting, but I thought that even that game was kinda fun. My tips to you would be in the way of visual details. Everything looks really basic and plain. Give a little bit more work in the art department to polish the game. Don't skimp on that kind of thing.

[HappyGrave]

ahh.. dident even think of that.. the sun thing.. it feel like i need somthing over there but i will put somthing else there then

You are right bout the "half finished" grafiks but as i say im new to this stuff so i dont know how to make dirt look good, if you have a way id love to know.

[PoisonedMemories]

its good you want to improve :)

[Inglor]

try by writing your code yourself instead of copying from tutorials.

[HappyGrave]

At 9/11/05 12:31 PM, Inglor wrote: try by writing your code yourself instead of copying from tutorials.

what are you talking about? I dont get it. what tutorials? I write all my code my self. sure i learnd how it all works from a tutorial but... never mind.. you proberly dident meen anything by it

[Squirrel245]

Wow

You said you've been working in flash for 2 weeks and you made that?

Thats heaps good :)