Lookin for suggestions

[IamMark]

Well, I posted a new song today and was hoping to get some feedback on it. My problem right now is like i have the tune down, but no lead sound. its like listening to green day with no guitars. If any of you check out the earlier stuff i did...sorry. the 1st three up to crystal were done on the dm2 mixman board and i actually hate them.
crystal was done on aquostica along with using creative keyboard and then everything else was done on fruity loops. you might notice some sound cracking going on in a few songs...sorry i had too many effects running on my sound card so it was slowing performance. so since i changed my sound preferences things are working much better.

Back to feedback, what I am looking for is some advice or even some hints on what i may be missing. I am also having a little bit of a hard time ending them. But do listen to "the watchers" it is the latest one i did and i did fix some things i felt i was going wrong with.

My music

[PiePie]

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