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[Darkaxl]

hi im doin A animation project and im hopin for it to be a series not paticuly a NG series not sure if it will be good enough.

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I was wondering if i shud keep it with no dialogue just music and sfx or to ad Vocal and tone down on the music i feel the music atm is workin well but i dont feel that dialogue wud go along with this.

If u would like to produce feedback just reply on this board Thx.

[UrbanNinja]

Thats some nice artwork you got for the background. I like what I see so far just make it longer and add sfx and you have a good movie. You don't necessarily need voices it's all up to you if you want to put them in, I would worry more about storyline and animation than sound. Good luck with finishing it.

[Devenger]

I suggest having only music, and having the music stay level during the whole presentation.

Very good so far.

[Darkaxl]

Thx i know its abit sketchy but it is my first flash PLus ive never used sticks before so they may suck abit. The bg was dun on pshop which helped alot. Still lookin for feedback

[Taylor-1]

hey it looks pretty nice. what photoshop did you use?
anyway I really like the table looks very real. not sure where the plot is going,but its off to a good start.

[Darkaxl]

i used photoshop 7 if u'd like the technique Mail me and ill send it to ya and thx.