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HERE'S MINE! IT'S FINISHED!!! WOOOO!!!

http://img171.images..mage=natecool4dw.swf

tell me what you think

At 8/13/05 12:29 AM, llammalrdsofsci wrote: HERE'S MINE! IT'S FINISHED!!! WOOOO!!!

http://img171.images..mage=natecool4dw.swf

tell me what you think

It's pretty good. But the nose looks weird.

At 8/13/05 01:05 AM, icycomputer wrote:

At 8/13/05 12:29 AM, llammalrdsofsci wrote: HERE'S MINE! IT'S FINISHED!!! WOOOO!!!

http://img171.images..mage=natecool4dw.swf

tell me what you think

It's pretty good. But the nose looks weird.

http://img224.images..mage=natecool5ec.swf

there fixed!!

At 8/12/05 06:07 PM, BucketHatBobby wrote: Any spaces left open?
At 8/12/05 07:56 PM, iceimp wrote: i woud like a part also.

Dunno if there are any open lines, the internet on my computer won't work so I don't have an access to the most updated list. Yet, i'm getting a new computer.. tommorow hopefully ^^ (it will be the best computer avaliable at the market)

At 8/13/05 12:29 AM, llammalrdsofsci wrote: HERE'S MINE! IT'S FINISHED!!! WOOOO!!!

http://img171.images..mage=natecool4dw.swf

tell me what you think

I'm sorry, but I remmember you wrote to me that you will do your best. I'm really sorry if that's your best, don't take it hard and all, but it's way too simple..

I hate to burst people's bubbles... :/

Anyway:

1 carmelhadinosaur done
2 DoctorChoclate
3 paiste done
4 Shifty55
5 Enoll
6 Fernando_Finamore
7
8 Bilbo31 done
9 Cheddar79
10 TmsT
11 -Puzz- done
12 icycomputer
13 Ben_Coombs
14
15 GuntherSwanh
16 llammalrdsofsci
17 MJKram done
18 onny yeung
19 Smoking_Chimney
20 smallydude
21 _darx_
22 jedi-hampster
23 iBear done
24 carmelhadinosaur done
25 23450 done
26 Jockey
27 Cheddar79
28 -Puzz-
29 AngryMouse14
30 -BigFoot- done
31 maldito-x
32 MooshD
33 paiste
34 Smoking_Chimney done

At 8/13/05 04:18 PM, carmelhadinosaur wrote:
I'm sorry, but I remmember you wrote to me that you will do your best. I'm really sorry if that's your best, don't take it hard and all, but it's way too simple..

WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING FOR?! IT'S 1000x better then evryting i've done for this before! please, sorry to blow up, but i did put work into this, i didn't just throw it together

can yu please give me some suggestions on how to fix it please?

At 8/13/05 06:06 PM, carmelhadinosaur wrote: I hate to burst people's bubbles... :/

Could I have part 7?
And when is this to be finished?

At 8/14/05 06:53 PM, llammalrdsofsci wrote: WHAT ARE YOU LOOKING FOR?! IT'S 1000x better then evryting i've done for this before! please, sorry to blow up, but i did put work into this, i didn't just throw it together

can yu please give me some suggestions on how to fix it please?

Hey, chill out, don't get pissed off, pissing off sux.
The thing is, that well, it's just simple, as I said.
Don't be offended, but others could have done the same thing in much less time, I think, and also I think that it is because you are less experienced with flash.
Like I repeat ten thousand times in a message, practice makes perfect.

At 8/14/05 07:51 PM, BucketHatBobby wrote: Could I have part 7?
And when is this to be finished?

Uhh sure.
It's to be finished in September hopefully, but im not worried about that, i'm worried about people's results being great O_o (yes i'm very picky)

Arg...Ive been trying for a while now but I cant make it to your standards...Again im still very new to animating and dont have much experience as you probably want for this so I think i'm just going to drop out :\ Sorry...but good luck to the rest of you guys :]

At 8/15/05 09:11 AM, MooshD wrote: Arg...Ive been trying for a while now but I cant make it to your standards

Hey, I think you better see my reviews before saying that..

...Again im still very new to animating and dont have much experience as you probably want for this so I think i'm just going to drop out :\ Sorry...but good luck to the rest of you guys :]

I only want dedication, because it shows good results.
Your day 1 preview (which was 5 days ago btw O_o) was pretty nice, so i'm sure you made it better as you said. I'd like to see it, then I can know better... What do you think?

Alright, I'll take 14. Gimme a few days.

Oh, and those examples were done in like, 2 hours. don't worry. If I got time, it'll be good.

Thanks Carmel

Well I was working on it for a while and I had trouble with the lip syncing and hair movement and other stuff. As you can see in my examples and preview, I only really have a grip on large body movements...so eventually I got really pissed and there really wasnt anything to show.

I've Had my share of sand kicked in my face, But I've come through!

Tell me what you think, and what i should change.

At 8/15/05 09:49 AM, Panzerp00 wrote: Alright, I'll take 14. Gimme a few days.

You can have more lol.
Well alright 14.

Oh, and those examples were done in like, 2 hours. don't worry. If I got time, it'll be good.

Thanks Carmel

Ok cool no problems, you have 100x times than 2 hours :P

At 8/15/05 09:58 AM, MooshD wrote: Well I was working on it for a while and I had trouble with the lip syncing and hair movement and other stuff. As you can see in my examples and preview, I only really have a grip on large body movements...so eventually I got really pissed and there really wasnt anything to show.

Oh, well, i'm sorry to hear *read* then.
Well, I think you have a good start in animating, and since you mostly work with AS, I think that you'd be able to make a big game project by yourself in let's say... a year from now, and it will totally kick ass right? :P

At 8/15/05 04:21 PM, BucketHatBobby wrote: I've Had my share of sand kicked in my face, But I've come through!

Tell me what you think, and what i should change.

Hehe, the character is really nice and I like the lip syncing.
Yet, i'm not sure that it being tweened across the screen is working too well. Plus you need a background, probably with animation...

Cheers, i'm gonna get myself some more protection points now.
I'll post an updated list when i'll get a super new awesome-o computer that I can work faster on flash with!

Alrighty, the scrolling has been cut.
I'll put backgrounds in it, but so it will fit in with my series, it'll look like the Newgrounds layout.

Stop kicking sand in my face!!!
Okay. New backgrounds, and a passing citizen.
I'm either going to cut the passer-by out, or add another one. what do you think?

P.S. Sorry, Double posties.

i fixed my part tell what you think!http://img154.images..ampionsremake7
at.swf

At 8/15/05 06:29 PM, Bilbo31 wrote: i fixed my part tell what you think!http://img154.images..ampionsremake7

at.swf

sry for double post but the file may be a little slow at first but just watch it again and it will be fine.

At 8/15/05 05:56 PM, BucketHatBobby wrote: Okay. New backgrounds, and a passing citizen.
I'm either going to cut the passer-by out, or add another one. what do you think?

Hehe, I like your style, it's like silly characters.
It's nice, but... Since clock day 05 pissed so many, and this is going to be released in probably a month now... I suggest.. Changing the character O_o

At 8/15/05 06:29 PM, Bilbo31 wrote: i fixed my part tell what you think!http://img154.images..ampionsremake7

at.swf

Well, it's better, and pretty nice I suppose.
But i'm just really sorry. Really, really. (different meanings)
Don't take it hard etc, practice makes perfect and all remmember, but what most of the NG viewers will call your flash is... a "n00bish" flash.
The lip syncing aren't too great, there's a lack of animation and lack of coloring. It looks as if you haven't put much feelings to it.
See, all works has places for improvment, but you just can't compare them. You can improve the same work for ages and yet not get nearly as closed as another original work with no improvments.
I'm sorry :(

I'm going to redo part 33 from scratch, I really don't like my current (almost complete) version.

At 8/16/05 02:56 PM, carmelhadinosaur wrote: Hehe, I like your style, it's like silly characters.
It's nice, but... Since clock day 05 pissed so many, and this is going to be released in probably a month now... I suggest.. Changing the character O_o

Hmm... Okay, would it be good if i just got rid of him, or should i replace him?

At 8/16/05 03:19 PM, HilariousGenocide wrote: I'm going to redo part 33 from scratch, I really don't like my current (almost complete) version.

Ok than, paiste..
I'm thinking of asking more artists though for the collab.. ;P

At 8/16/05 04:34 PM, BucketHatBobby wrote: Hmm... Okay, would it be good if i just got rid of him, or should i replace him?

Well, since they both mean the same thing, lol, you may choose yourself. I don't have an idea for you, but since it fits your series, why won't you put something else to fit your series?

At 8/17/05 02:53 AM, carmelhadinosaur wrote: Well, since they both mean the same thing, lol, you may choose yourself. I don't have an idea for you, but since it fits your series, why won't you put something else to fit your series?

Actually, "Replace" would mean to change him into a different character.
"Get rid of" would mean to have noone in the backreound at all.

I'm trying to find someone to replace SBC in the backround... If i can't, I'll just get rid of him.

At 8/17/05 11:38 AM, BucketHatBobby wrote: Actually, "Replace" would mean to change him into a different character.
"Get rid of" would mean to have noone in the backreound at all.

Oh yes..

I'm trying to find someone to replace SBC in the backround... If i can't, I'll just get rid of him.

I think I rather have him there than no one. It would be empty without any more animation in the back..

The only problem is, If i use another NG character, I'd need permission from the original creator. With SBC, I don't.
I'm not a great animator, And I'm willing to admit it, so I need to find something relatively easy to animate walking across the screen.

yesterday i saw i duck make it walk across the screen yaaaaayyyy

u can use that now put me in the credits for idea yuay

XD just kidding but u shouyld put a duck there kewlio

Erm... thanks?

Real thanks go out to caramelhadinosaur's sig. It inspired me with a very obvious VERY known NG character... The tank!

The sand is seriously blinding me, so if you could PLEASE stop kicking sand in my eyes...

At 8/19/05 01:15 PM, BucketHatBobby wrote: The only problem is, If i use another NG character, I'd need permission from the original creator. With SBC, I don't.

Err.. ok.

I'm not a great animator, And I'm willing to admit it, so I need to find something relatively easy to animate walking across the screen.

Oh..

Erm... thanks?

Real thanks go out to caramelhadinosaur's sig. It inspired me with a very obvious VERY known NG character... The tank!

The sand is seriously blinding me, so if you could PLEASE stop kicking sand in my eyes...

Hehe ok I guess it's nice than, but i'll send you the fla of the tank, this one is a little crunhcy... with outdated chocolate.
Can you give me your email?

Yet, if you think you can come up with a better idea, i'd be glad to see :P

At 8/19/05 01:24 PM, pillowclock wrote: yesterday i saw i duck make it walk across the screen yaaaaayyyy

... sez the man that deleted his own collab... :/

At 8/20/05 04:34 AM, carmelhadinosaur wrote: Hehe ok I guess it's nice than, but i'll send you the fla of the tank, this one is a little crunhcy... with outdated chocolate.
Can you give me your email?

Alright... but it's a secret okay? DON'T GO POSTING IT IN ONLINE FORUMS...
littlebobmatheson@hotmail.com

At 8/21/05 10:14 PM, BucketHatBobby wrote: Alright... but it's a secret okay? DON'T GO POSTING IT IN ONLINE FORUMS...
littlebobmatheson@hotmail.com

lolk you added me to MSN so we can talk there..

Bilbo31, i'm sorry, but as of this point line 8 is open, please leave comments and all...

-BigFoot-, if you're seeing this, i'd like to talk to you. I know you put alot of work on this and I really appreaciate it. But it's still just simple.. I'd like to see your opinion about shading and/or lightnings.