i need a critique on my site plz

[young-hova19]

hey,

im new here, but i have a site up. i want the 'good' people of newgrounds to see my site and tell me what you think of it. i dont care if u call me an idiot or asshole or whatever (lol), but just post an opinion of it, with any suggestions you may have.

http://hovaonline.cjb.net

thanx in advance

[flangazor]

It looks like a good site where you can post pics of your friends so thay can see them, especially if you guys are splitting up to go to college or after college or whatever. A keeping in touch page.

The interface is clean and basic. No faults.

It doesnt seem to have anything useful for anyone else but your friends. If that was the goal, fine. But you asked people on newgrounds to remark on it. Look at your site and on each page think "why would someone I don't know thank me for this page. Why am I telling them this information?"

You got a lot of work done. If you are trying to make it a site for anyone to go to, you still have quite a bit to do.

Good luck!
-ewan

[young-hova19]

At 8/9/02 01:30 PM, flangazor wrote: It looks like a good site where you can post pics of your friends so thay can see them, especially if you guys are splitting up to go to college or after college or whatever. A keeping in touch page.

The interface is clean and basic. No faults.

It doesnt seem to have anything useful for anyone else but your friends. If that was the goal, fine. But you asked people on newgrounds to remark on it. Look at your site and on each page think "why would someone I don't know thank me for this page. Why am I telling them this information?"

You got a lot of work done. If you are trying to make it a site for anyone to go to, you still have quite a bit to do.

Good luck!
-ewan

thanx man ill do something about it, mabye add some flash i made or something.

ill find a theme

[loserpoop]

hey, nice site! :)