More Criticism

[Everblayde]

Hey guys. Since my movie has just recently dropped out of the 50 most recent practically no one is going to view it. I wanted some more ideas and opinions about what you the view think about it. Maybe even some ideas for my next flash.

http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/240122

[Remiraz]

rather entertaining for 4hrs worth of work.

[RageinCagein]

ok dude i liked the parts where the lines were actually morphing into something those parts were really cool... the parts that i didnt really like was when there just lines darting across the screen

The music i liked sence its not to comon anymoor on submissions. But the entire thing was pretty cool... thats my 2 cents dude i liked it

[Everblayde]

Ahh thanks, Rage I've heard very similar complaints about the randomness at times. This was actually my first frame by frame animation and I was screwing around at times. And being the horrible editor I am, I just left the crap in there... hehe!

Anyways if I do seem to make another one of this random line things, I'll probably make it have some kind of point? : )

But I need some more ideas and I really hope some people could post ideas of what I could work on. I'm not very creative when it comes to storylines n such.

Muahaha. Until next time.

EverBlayde

[AlphaSure]

maybe you should make a big random collab, i will join it :D
i want to start one but no one would join due to my nooby account.

[Everblayde]

About the collab, I was thinking about one, just haven't figured out if I REALLY wanted to do that. I've also been thinking about a music video, with frame by frame, that actually fits the song. Anymore ideas are very welcome.

Until later.

Everblayde

[Mushroomboy5]

The animation was good, just too simple. Also, come up with an origional story or good script

[Everblayde]

Yep, I started out as it being simple considering it was my first animation in over a year. I'm thinking of doing a much more complex work soon.

[Everblayde]

Any other critics? I love hearing the bad and the good! :)

[jamboreen]

I liked the song..i also like the smalla mount of humour put in and those lines are kind of entertaining.......but why not put one half of the screen black and other white and haver the lines change coulour as they pass throught...now that would be cool.

Nice little thing lol