would this get through?

[Murch]

would this get through on the portal?

[Cojones893]

No. Did that take 2 minutes to make?

[AGH]

At 5/26/05 12:33 AM, Murch wrote: would this get through on the portal?

I don't think so. You'd need a game menu, some form of level system, a more interesting background and some music.

[BlackmarketKraig]

Sorry, it wouldn't survive judgement on it's own, but it might make for a fun pre-loader. ;)

Oh, and holding down the Tab key is a cheat that you might want to work out before you make a highscore feature for it.

[AlienHeadX]

Should have obstacles that you cant touch or you will get game over. And menu, variety, music sound. And a background.

[Banjax]

Sorry it wouldn't survive ! - maybe you could have bad entries and good entires (green and black or crappy looking and holy looking) - subtract a point for every good entry you hit and add one for every crappy entry. And gain bonus points for killing <insert hated movie type here> movies.

Also add the stuff AlienHeadX and AGH suggested.

I know that extra work sucks but at the end of the day, if you want your flash to survive judgement you've got to put the work in - good luck :D

[Toast]

Let's see what would happen if you submitted it:

Dark Toaster:"Hmm...Let's have a look at the portal.Cool,a game under judgement,it might be fun"
*clicks at the game*
*plays*
Dark Toaster:"This is not worth to survie,Thou shalt die!"
*votes 0*

"You gave this entry a 0, lowering its score from 0.5693 to 0.5683!
If this movie is blammed you will get a BLAM point! "
Dark Toaster:"I will type a review!"
*types a review*

NOTE: Any attempt to promote an outside, unrelated website in this space will result in
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alein landing

1. Rate this movie in the six categories below. Ratings are based on a scale of 0-10.

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It needs MANY canges,power ups,more originality,places which you cannot touch,levels,manu,different enemies,guns selections to destroy swfs more easily...

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Here you go,that is what I would do if you submitted it :D

[Toast]

Sorry,these are the rates

Graphics Style Sound Violence Interactivity Humor Overall
3 1 0 3 4 0 3
Is there any sound at all?

[Toast]

Sorry for those double posts but I think it will finally work now :D

Graphics Style Sound Violence Interactivity Humor Overall
------3 --------1------ 0--------- 3------------- 4----------- 0--------- 3

[Denvish]

At 5/26/05 06:45 AM, Dark_Toaster wrote: Sorry for those double posts but I think it will finally work now :D

Graphics Style Sound Violence Interactivity Humor Overall
------3 --------1------ 0--------- 3------------- 4----------- 0--------- 3

Dude, quit it with the post spamming please

[Toast]

You can delete the one before if you want,and this one too.It was just to show him why the game wouldn't pass the judgment

[Dead-Man-Inc]

Why don't we have modify buttons?

[superschaap]

not to be whining or anything but isnt there a game (if u can call it that) just like this one above the portal listings???

[Toast]

At 5/26/05 06:55 AM, Imperium_Macabre wrote: Why don't we have modify buttons?

Because people would start a big thread like
"Actionscript codes here"(more than 250 pages)
and then edit their first posts and type
If you post here you are an idiot,then all those who tried to be nice and posted their codes would be refered to idiots

[littleNorwegians]

Ehhh....no!....Sorry...Well better luck next time!

[EvilSqueegee]

Heh, I was just about to post something just like this. I hope you don't mind if I just use this thread. :D

Does this look any good, should I continue working on it or just trash the project? It's all FBF, minus the obvious tweens of fades and the tank logo transparency/size change. The "old movie effect" was done via Action Script. :o

Also, if it -looks- promising, how can I improve what I've already got?

[Toast]

1)I am not sure,I think it is not going to get blammed though
2)it is not the same thing as his,your's is a movie
3)Make a new thread for that,I am sure the guy who made this thread doesn't want people posting their movies in his thread

[EvilSqueegee]

At 5/26/05 11:01 AM, Dark_Toaster wrote: 1)I am not sure,I think it is not going to get blammed though

Thanks for your help. I really wanted to know that. Honest. Oh, and also, thanks for that wonderful bunch of tips on how to improve what I've already got done.

2)it is not the same thing as his,your's is a movie

It was a "Would this get through the portal" question. In that aspect, I have yet to stand corrected.

3)Make a new thread for that,I am sure the guy who made this thread doesn't want people posting their movies in his thread

Speak for yourself. If he has a problem, he can tell me that. *mock ghasp*

[Simple-Logistics]

No, but it is well made!
Maybe if you put a menu in it, highscores, timer, things you don't want to touch and stuff like that!

[EvilSqueegee]

At 5/26/05 11:04 AM, EvilSqueegee wrote: Thanks for your help. I really wanted to know that. Honest. Oh, and also, thanks for that wonderful bunch of tips on how to improve what I've already got done.

Then this:

This was a "would this get through the portal" question.

Man, I'm tired. I mistook your post as one stating that it wouldn't get blammed as is. Sorry.

[Toast]

Please make a thread of your own,it is not the same subject at all!
Ok,you want hints,I will give you hints
1)higher fps
2)more detailed background
3)more deailed guy(i.e shadows,more reallistic clothes...)
4)Plot
5)End
6)Main menu with scene selection

[Rustygames]

I seriously hope not. That game is on the top of the flash portal anyways!!! But that one is better it actually makes sounds!!!!!!

[N2tZ]

I can play it at the protal if I want to
and i think it would not get through