Would be nice to know how much people would appreciate this if the sounds and playing were pro quality.
I think the music has a pleasing groove and some catchiness to it. Also the loop works really well if you want to listen to it multiple times. It's like a chorus starting over and over again, with small parts that make the chorus sound more rewarding.
I feel that many people can't get over the bad sounds, so they could enjoy the positive things in the songwriting.
I can't bring the pro quality sounds yet, but i still would like to know how good do you think the songwriting is and how it could be improved.
As someone who makes music, I have learned to look past the sounds to the songwriting, and i really think this one would be something good if the sounds were done right.