Box-Killa, you have a nice song there. Some improvments can be made, but they're good.
rafael3, just because your songs dont have reviews does not mean they aren't good. I understand you are new to FL Studio, but this thread is to ask for help with songs that dont have much publicity, not just reviews. Personally i cant stand users who submit their songs in hopes some poor soul will give them a 10. I have plenty of good songs with no reviews, so i think you have to wait. Spread the songs to your friends, dont just post in here to get more reviews to satisfy your over-crazed ego.