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I have some critiques to make similar to others made already!
Numero 1: Kinda creepy, even if you are friends already! Good idea, it just could have been executed better! You could be jeapordising your friendship. I don't know A single girl that this wouldn't creep out!
Numero 2: What happened to your face? I saw a previous version and your face was completely different! It's worse off now. Change it back or redo your face completely. It aught to be of as good a standard as Katies face!
Numero 3: I mentioned it was creepy, right? I mean, I've tried something like this once but backed out at the last minute, thank god! It was a poem and looking back at it now I'm much better off for not giving it to the girl!

just talk to her dude, but hey, if you really think this is gonna work then give it a shot (if you havnt send it already)

yeah, i even felt kreeped out with the animation and all, but hey if you want give it a shot, i think that your chances would be higher if you just talk to her

At 3/27/05 02:20 AM, MrRombie wrote: ....uhh.... for the animation.... Which one out of the two people is the girl? First person looks like a guy, and the second one also looks like a guy…. Wait a second… are you not telling us something here…. :)

Ugh...I went through this in the last topic and I'm not going through it again. The first one looks absolutely nothing like a guy unless you want it to look like a guy, in which case the hottest girl in the world (which she is) couldn't keep you from thinking it was a dang guy.

lol, omg, i thought the same, but they are good pics, at least Katie's is, obviously, you do like her because her pic is a lot better then yours, just fix your face and the whole thing will be good, so don't worry about it that much, good luck and definatly change your face, (just a tip, or thought, when your pic is alone, make it look sad, but when her face is there make a smile on your face, and don't forget about shading, good luck man)

Yea I can't do my own face. I suxors. :( Thanks for the tips

At 3/27/05 02:40 AM, Schmut wrote: I have some critiques to make similar to others made already!
Numero 1: Kinda creepy, even if you are friends already! Good idea, it just could have been executed better! You could be jeapordising your friendship. I don't know A single girl that this wouldn't creep out!
Numero 2: What happened to your face? I saw a previous version and your face was completely different! It's worse off now. Change it back or redo your face completely. It aught to be of as good a standard as Katies face!
Numero 3: I mentioned it was creepy, right? I mean, I've tried something like this once but backed out at the last minute, thank god! It was a poem and looking back at it now I'm much better off for not giving it to the girl!

She likes this stuff, how much must I say that? And yea my face sucked both times I'm redoing it many times until I get it right or give up and contract someone else to do my face lol. It's not creepy, I know her, it's just...something I can't (obviously) explain to you guys.

At 3/27/05 02:59 AM, The_Mercenary wrote: just talk to her dude, but hey, if you really think this is gonna work then give it a shot (if you havnt send it already)

I answered this one already. I want critique on the movie, not the idea. I'm going through with the movie, period.

At 3/27/05 03:06 AM, Darx1000 wrote: yeah, i even felt kreeped out with the animation and all, but hey if you want give it a shot, i think that your chances would be higher if you just talk to her

I DID TALK TO HER! The end of that story...anyone else make a comment about how I should "just talk to her" it means your a n00b and you didn't read the rest of the topic. So please, critique my work, not the fact that I'm giving this to her.

At 3/27/05 03:10 AM, luminousnerd wrote: I DID TALK TO HER! The end of that story...anyone else make a comment about how I should "just talk to her" it means your a n00b and you didn't read the rest of the topic. So please, critique my work, not the fact that I'm giving this to her.

i'm sorry if i affended you with writing that, i don't know what happend in the past but, i know from experience that if you talk the chances are higher, although, i never made a flash so maybe the chaces are higher with that, but i do know that if you do one flash about her they might want more, but who am i to know, good luck..

At 3/27/05 03:29 AM, Darx1000 wrote:

At 3/27/05 03:10 AM, luminousnerd wrote: I DID TALK TO HER! The end of that story...anyone else make a comment about how I should "just talk to her" it means your a n00b and you didn't read the rest of the topic. So please, critique my work, not the fact that I'm giving this to her.

i'm sorry if i affended you with writing that, i don't know what happend in the past but, i know from experience that if you talk the chances are higher, although, i never made a flash so maybe the chaces are higher with that, but i do know that if you do one flash about her they might want more, but who am i to know, good luck..

it's not that you offended me...it's that I have gotten this comment 45 times and it's getting somewhat tedious to respond to. I know her personally, I can't explain it very well but her personality indicates that a flash like this would not only impress her that I have the ability to do it (it may not measure up to the best of the best on NG, but it's better than a lot of crap on here, and it's also much better than she's ever seen since she doesn't watch Flashes much if at all). And it will also show her that I have a deep side to me. Besides that I don't mind doing more for her...lol. Thanks though

At 3/27/05 03:10 AM, luminousnerd wrote:
She likes this stuff, how much must I say that? And yea my face sucked both times I'm redoing it many times until I get it right or give up and contract someone else to do my face lol. It's not creepy, I know her, it's just...something I can't (obviously) explain to you guys.

Yeah, I guess we're all retarded!
I think, it is now probably as good as it can be. Obviously your face needs redone but apart from that all I'd think to change would be the music. But there's probably a reason you've chosen that music. I guess the only reason I called it creepy is 'cos I obviously know girls completely different to this Katie of whom you speak. If she's into this sort of soppy romantic stuff then you should totally go for it! I wish you luck in getting this girl! You obviously like her... A LOT! So you have my best wishes! I hope it works for you!

id say the most vital thing would be to redraw the picture of yourself. it looks really bad. you spent a lot of time on the pic of her, but youre selling yourself. she already knows what she looks like. make yourself look a little better than that. she wants to date you, not a kindergarden scribble

At 3/27/05 07:48 AM, Schmut wrote:

At 3/27/05 03:10 AM, luminousnerd wrote:

Yeah, I guess we're all retarded!

No, no...I'm not saying that...it's just a special relationship we have.

I think, it is now probably as good as it can be. Obviously your face needs redone but apart from that all I'd think to change would be the music. But there's probably a reason you've chosen that music. I guess the only reason I called it creepy is 'cos I obviously know girls completely different to this Katie of whom you speak. If she's into this sort of soppy romantic stuff then you should totally go for it! I wish you luck in getting this girl! You obviously like her... A LOT! So you have my best wishes! I hope it works for you!

I like the music...I don't want it to divert from the movie. Thanks!! I'll let you guys know if she liked it, lol

At 3/27/05 10:22 AM, sanctuary13 wrote: id say the most vital thing would be to redraw the picture of yourself. it looks really bad. you spent a lot of time on the pic of her, but youre selling yourself. she already knows what she looks like. make yourself look a little better than that. she wants to date you, not a kindergarden scribble

Agreed...it's a terrible picture. I have to change it, definitely. but actually I didn't spend a lot of time on her pic, it just happened to come out alright. I spent about 2 hours on the one before, but people said redo it, so I did it in 15 minutes and it looked better somehow. I think I just got lucky. But agreed, thanks.

Dude you are 14. Why are you talking about "I can't find my happiness". She is just a girl. I've never met her, but I'm about 100% sure there will be others exactly like her. If you say "You don't know her" that means you haven't dated a lot. Plus this is kinda creepy. Just buy her flowers take her to a beach or something then ask her out. Don't send some flash video then log off aim and wait for her to call you. On a scale of worst ways to ask a girl out this is at the bottom right beneath writing her a note.

At 3/26/05 04:00 PM, luminousnerd wrote:

At 3/26/05 03:36 PM, PhoenixJ wrote: It's one of those jump out and scream at you flashes, isn't it -_- ?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! No I hate those...this is really for my (wannabe) GF

what Guardian Force do you want to go out with?...

I thought that was beautiful and i've been trying to do something similiar but theres one thing i found out sadly... Girls don't fall for guys who do computer animation

At 3/27/05 05:29 PM, luminousnerd wrote: Agreed...it's a terrible picture. I have to change it, definitely. but actually I didn't spend a lot of time on her pic, it just happened to come out alright. I spent about 2 hours on the one before, but people said redo it, so I did it in 15 minutes and it looked better somehow. I think I just got lucky. But agreed, thanks.

Sometimes it just comes out shitty, other times you get lucky. If be needed, just trace your picture so it looks better.

And for the "STUFF OUTSIDE FLASH SHOWING", thats because the window the movie is in doesn't have boundries (as in the browser size isn't exact same as flash dimensions). When you export a flash, everything that was on the edit screen (outside or inside the viewable area) is still there. You just don't see it if the flash movie's screen size is set like it was ment to be.

At 3/27/05 05:37 PM, Cojones893 wrote: Dude you are 14. Why are you talking about "I can't find my happiness". She is just a girl. I've never met her, but I'm about 100% sure there will be others exactly like her. If you say "You don't know her" that means you haven't dated a lot. Plus this is kinda creepy. Just buy her flowers take her to a beach or something then ask her out. Don't send some flash video then log off aim and wait for her to call you. On a scale of worst ways to ask a girl out this is at the bottom right beneath writing her a note.

14 has nothing to do with it. She's pretty important to me, just because I am 14 doesn't mean a thing. There's no one exactly like her. Don't be such a shallow hearted n00b.

At 3/27/05 05:41 PM, Todd_Studios wrote:

At 3/26/05 04:00 PM, luminousnerd wrote:

At 3/26/05 03:36 PM, PhoenixJ wrote: It's one of those jump out and scream at you flashes, isn't it -_- ?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! No I hate those...this is really for my (wannabe) GF

what Guardian Force do you want to go out with?...

What do you mean?

At 3/27/05 05:45 PM, Supersoyboy wrote: I thought that was beautiful and i've been trying to do something similiar but theres one thing i found out sadly... Girls don't fall for guys who do computer animation

Not all girls are the same, ever think of that? You're an idiot to think you can even begin to stereotype the female.

At 3/27/05 05:48 PM, Astropuff wrote:

At 3/27/05 05:29 PM, luminousnerd wrote: Agreed...it's a terrible picture. I have to change it, definitely. but actually I didn't spend a lot of time on her pic, it just happened to come out alright. I spent about 2 hours on the one before, but people said redo it, so I did it in 15 minutes and it looked better somehow. I think I just got lucky. But agreed, thanks.

Sometimes it just comes out shitty, other times you get lucky. If be needed, just trace your picture so it looks better.

I did trace it, but I'm gonna have to do it again...and again...and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........and again........you get the picture. Eventually maybe I'll get a good one.

And for the "STUFF OUTSIDE FLASH SHOWING", thats because the window the movie is in doesn't have boundries (as in the browser size isn't exact same as flash dimensions). When you export a flash, everything that was on the edit screen (outside or inside the viewable area) is still there. You just don't see it if the flash movie's screen size is set like it was ment to be.

ah, I see...well that's just confusing. And kind of annoying. But oh well, I'll just mask it. Thanks for the help dude.

At 3/27/05 05:54 PM, luminousnerd wrote:

At 3/27/05 05:41 PM, Todd_Studios wrote:

At 3/26/05 04:00 PM, luminousnerd wrote:

At 3/26/05 03:36 PM, PhoenixJ wrote: It's one of those jump out and scream at you flashes, isn't it -_- ?

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! No I hate those...this is really for my (wannabe) GF

what Guardian Force do you want to go out with?...

What do you mean?

In final fantasy eight.. you got monsters to summon called Guardian forces, and it was always abbreviated (GF)....

I'm not being shallow hearted and I'm not a noob, which doesn't even matter. Don't make her an animation. I'm just saying be romantic and not creepy. Take her for a walk on the beach have a little picnic tell her how you feel. Trust me you can stereotype girls. I've been around the block wayyy to many times. Also girls like to feel special and making an animation isn't going to make anyone feel special. Try the date thing. If she says 'no' move on.

you should stand outside her window and throw rocks at it until she looks out, and serenade her....

If that doesnt work then just give up.... no one likes someone who doesnt know when to quit.....

At 3/27/05 05:56 PM, Todd_Studios wrote:
In final fantasy eight.. you got monsters to summon called Guardian forces, and it was always abbreviated (GF)....

Oh lol I see I never played that one

wait wait wait wait. I just watched it in full. I kept stopping it because it was so creepy. I finally watched it. Which one is the girl. I'm really curious who are those 2 people at the end.

A few tips:

#1 Spell Check
#2 She's not your girlfriend (yet)
#3 Don't sound so desperate.
#4 Spell Check
#5 Spell Check
#6 Beautious? Wtf? Just say Beautiful.

Sounds like you've asked her out before, lawl.

Be sure to keep us updated on what happens.

so are u gonna give it to her already i wanna know what she says

dude it took me 21 hours to make an animation for a girl i liked and she ran off with and asshole and u wanna no whats sad... i can't get her out of my mind still and everyday i make more animations, Impress the girl with flowers not animation, do it after shes ur girlfriend (hopefully)it seems romantic

At 3/27/05 07:13 PM, Cojones893 wrote: wait wait wait wait. I just watched it in full. I kept stopping it because it was so creepy. I finally watched it. Which one is the girl. I'm really curious who are those 2 people at the end.

you, sir, are a dumbass. which one is the girl is quite obvious.

At 3/27/05 07:30 PM, Poop4brains wrote: A few tips:

#1 Spell Check

Everything is spelled right...so why don't you learn to spell?

#2 She's not your girlfriend (yet)

Umm...right...your point? I never said she was, this is irrelevant

#3 Don't sound so desperate.

Don't sound so n00bish.

#4 Spell Check

Dumbass check.

#5 Spell Check

Idiot check

#6 Beautious? Wtf? Just say Beautiful.

No.

Sounds like you've asked her out before, lawl.

I have...you should learn to read.

Be sure to keep us updated on what happens.

I will.

At 3/27/05 07:35 PM, sactownboy10 wrote: so are u gonna give it to her already i wanna know what she says

I'll probably give it to her monday if it's ready

At 3/27/05 09:33 PM, Supersoyboy wrote: dude it took me 21 hours to make an animation for a girl i liked and she ran off with and asshole and u wanna no whats sad... i can't get her out of my mind still and everyday i make more animations, Impress the girl with flowers not animation, do it after shes ur girlfriend (hopefully)it seems romantic

Sux2bu. Sorry man. But you are very wrong.

that would freak me out, just ask her out the old fashion way

...i seriously would not ask the republic of newgrounds on girl advice if i were you. ugh. bastards. j/k.

anyways...yeah this would scare the fuck out of me if i were a girl. just go up to her and be all like "hey i think i'd be good for you and you'd be good for me. so let's let it be" or something.

that thing is waaay too deep if you haven't started the relationship yet. that'll just make her feel like you're guilting her into it. which is bad. and creepy.

make it more lighthearted.

At 3/28/05 12:38 AM, BeaverElfEater wrote: that would freak me out, just ask her out the old fashion way

fuck a cow, dipshit

At 3/27/05 05:45 PM, Supersoyboy wrote: I thought that was beautiful and i've been trying to do something similiar but theres one thing i found out sadly... Girls don't fall for guys who do computer animation

they do, just as long as it's not the only thing you talk about lol. it would be like you going out with a girl and all she can talk about is sports or the stock market...it just doesn't interest them most of the time.

that is all.

At 3/28/05 12:44 AM, snapper0505 wrote:

At 3/27/05 05:45 PM, Supersoyboy wrote: I thought that was beautiful and i've been trying to do something similiar but theres one thing i found out sadly... Girls don't fall for guys who do computer animation

they do, just as long as it's not the only thing you talk about lol. it would be like you going out with a girl and all she can talk about is sports or the stock market...it just doesn't interest them most of the time.

that is all.

ACTUALLY, jackasses, it varies depending on the girl. Don't even fucking start to stereotype the female.

note, i said most of the time. i know that. i had a girlfriend who liked my animations once.