Will this get blammed?

[magpie1]

This is more a preview to tell the story for the series which i'm working on.Should I submit it or not.In the the proper movies I will doing it with my friends who are better at animating walking etc.The Robbery:the story

[anime-brit]

definately

yes

[different]

It will get blammed, yes.

[Denvish]

At 3/5/05 12:19 PM, magpie1 wrote: This is more a preview to tell the story for the series which i'm working on.Should I submit it or not.In the the proper movies I will doing it with my friends who are better at animating walking etc.The Robbery:the story

The way it stands at the moment, it will get blammed. No offence to you, but the graphics look way too amateur and childish.

[KJDunwoody]

In my opinion yes.

[Raptomex]

Sorry but yes.

[jonthomson]

Yeah, it's not the worst thing I've ever seen but it'll get blammed. Somewhere between 0.7 and 0.9.

[magpie1]

I mucked up the credits as well.this music is by calpomatt.

[Wizard-Lock]

Yes it will get blammed, sorry, make it readable aswell text is 1million times too fast

[KJDunwoody]

You can do better than that if you tried!

[TailsPrower]

Ummm if u submit it as it is right now, i bet anything that i'll get blammed within it's first month, no offense. But if u say the full version is gonna be 1,000,000 times better, i have faith in you.

P.S: the text was going by WAY too fast, just so u know. I gotta admit though, it was kinda funny! (^_^)

[liam]

At 3/5/05 12:52 PM, -KJDunwoody- wrote: You can do better than that if you tried!

Woah, go Kyle! LOL

I think it was crap, not enough movement... yea....

[flamesvamp]

you need to work on your anmation BIG TIME

[sanctuary13]

so you submitted it? did you just ignore what everyone said? crap like that clogs the portal, chokes out good crap, and makes you look and feel stupid.

[magpie1]

I know it was piece of crap.I have deleted the series from computer now,and have bought a scanner.I have bought an animation book as well.The only movies you will see from me know are manga and chibi style ones seeing as I can know get my drawings into flash.

[WillPostForFood]

yeah its a blam

[Goatpower]

Yes, I think so.

[Astropuff]

This was pretty much static images and some text.

Try adding animation next time, like make them move or whatnot when they talk. Really boring when its just text changing around.