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At 3/12/05 10:45 PM, OmegaSyn wrote: Thx for the boost in self esteem i just hope i can animate every thing else as well as all that came out...things are looking good about now. :)

Its a good start, it makes me want to see the rest of it.

15 secs into my movie..lol and heres a little screeny for anyone who really cares( the reason its so dark is cuz of a fading effect taking place)

I hait this series but ill try it cause im that bored.
lol

At 3/13/05 12:24 PM, secksbot2000 wrote: I hait this series

great... we always love people coming in and pretending like they care about their submission but hating the series so not really wanting it to do well.

Besides, this probably isn't your real account. you're probably just playin a joke. I mean, with only like 24 posts.

count meh in

I changed some stuff, and I think this looks alot better. I would like some feedback from everybody partisipating in this collab http://img83.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img83&image=5ofblu9na.swf

I forgot to ask, but which do you think looks better, the rocks on the left, or the rocks on the right?

At 3/13/05 02:31 PM, mushroomboy5 wrote: I changed some stuff, and I think this looks alot better. I would like some feedback from everybody partisipating in this collab http://img83.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img83&image=5ofblu9na.swf

shit...my flash isnt gonna make it in the best 5

At 3/13/05 02:31 PM, mushroomboy5 wrote: I changed some stuff, and I think this looks alot better. I would like some feedback from everybody partisipating in this collab http://img83.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img83&image=5ofblu9na.swf

oh snap! you really worked on improving. Good job!

i really like the fade highlights on the left rocks, it looks like the light shining down from above. The kelp looks AWESOME! Especially in comparison to what it was before.

Everything looks better.

SUGGESTION: make some type of looping movieclip with alpha'd rays of light (gradient of from alpha 0 to alpha maybe 50 to 0 long rectangles that rotate back and forth NOT in unison to each other (have a bunch of em). That would look SOOO KICKASS!

So you're gonna have more happen right? That's not going to be the whole thing right? Cause what you have so far looks really nice. you need some nice music

Wow thanks for the comments guys. I alredy have some music picked out one is called flight of the dingleberry, and the other is called underwater world (both in the audio portal). And yes twinsen dude there will be more. This is about a third of what I have planned.

At 3/13/05 02:36 PM, demon_xion wrote:

At 3/13/05 02:31 PM, mushroomboy5 wrote: I changed some stuff, and I think this looks alot better. I would like some feedback from everybody partisipating in this collab http://img83.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img83&image=5ofblu9na.swf

shit...my flash isnt gonna make it in the best 5

Personally I think it will, I still gotta get started on mine though XD I better not make this a last minute job again :P

At 3/13/05 02:36 PM, demon_xion wrote:

shit...my flash isnt gonna make it in the best 5

Mine wont either, oh well.

At 3/13/05 02:31 PM, mushroomboy5 wrote: I changed some stuff, and I think this looks alot better. I would like some feedback from everybody partisipating in this collab http://img83.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img83&image=5ofblu9na.swf

The sharks tail fin seems like it stretches when its going back and forth, or i think it looks that way. And the fin on the sharks side is not colored the same as the body and looks awkward.

shit...my flash isnt gonna make it in the best 5

Demon-Xion i like the way you made the hair but the thing that brings your flash down is the fight scene. It is really hard to make a fight scene look good with tweens and only one set of symbols. If you worked on that scene some more, and put more perspectives in it and such, and draw out the punches so it doenst look like flailing circles. Im pretty sure you'd get in the top 5

At 3/13/05 11:27 AM, -Pako- wrote: 15 secs into my movie..lol and heres a little screeny for anyone who really cares( the reason its so dark is cuz of a fading effect taking place)

I'm a fan of our work Pako, I can't wait to see it.

At 3/13/05 10:39 PM, Greedom wrote:

At 3/13/05 11:27 AM, -Pako- wrote: 15 secs into my movie..lol and heres a little screeny for anyone who really cares( the reason its so dark is cuz of a fading effect taking place)

I'm a fan of our work Pako, I can't wait to see it.

Im a fan of *your work. I wish there was an edit button, sorry.

Hey -Jparadox- im having alot of scenes with fire in my flash and was wondering if you could give some tips on how to make the fire look good and natural and shit. Cuz you seem to be pro at animating fire. If you could give some tips or an example or something i'd appreciate it.

Oh and twinson, i dont care for a feud so whatever im sorry if your offended.

On 03/11/2005 Space_Chicken wrote (as a review):
The little story was funny and your character was well drawn. The fire in the opening was GREAT. Perhaps next time you could use some actual typeface for THE END because hand drawn words look kinda bad. You've got a great start here, keep at it!

Then ZekeySpaceyLizard relied to it with:
A great Start?

Dont you recognize me, Space? From the Shades collab thing. We are bruddahs from the same collab, yo foshizzle!

But you can't reply to review replies so Space_Chicken is saying here right now:
DOH! So sorry ZekeySL! I never really look at who makes the movie... I just watch them! Oops. My bad. Tell you what, I'll start looking at the name and next time you'll get a 5 and all 10s, ok? =)
Again, sorry!

At 3/13/05 10:54 PM, Omnilurk wrote: im sorry

don't lie

if you're sincere... then w/e

but don't lie

what do you guys think of my movie so far
http://img67.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img67&image=fivesobcollab3lp.swf
what can i do to improve the underwater scene? does anybody know how to make some sort of distortion ripples in the water?
tell me what you think!

Ok, i'm sorry, but, how do you make your signiatures reapeat, or do they do that already??? do you loop them or what???

At 3/13/05 11:29 PM, Space_Chicken wrote:
But you can't reply to review replies so Space_Chicken is saying here right now:
DOH! So sorry ZekeySL! I never really look at who makes the movie... I just watch them! Oops. My bad. Tell you what, I'll start looking at the name and next time you'll get a 5 and all 10s, ok? =)
Again, sorry!

Heh. Dont do that, dude! Thats not fair to everyone else. :p

Also, to the mushroom fellow, those fading blobs of light on the rocks looked really good.

Ok, i have the sig done, it was done under flash, how do you make it a jpeg??

Whens the deadline? I figured that if I dont get all tangled up in World of Warcraft, I might join.

Must know, please..... the sig into a jpeg file.. please help...

At 3/14/05 02:46 AM, Darx1000 wrote: Must know, please..... the sig into a jpeg file.. please help...

Export > Image, then pick Jpeg.

At 3/14/05 12:57 AM, eh-productions wrote: what do you guys think of my movie so far
http://img67.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img67&image=fivesobcollab3lp.swf
what can i do to improve the underwater scene? does anybody know how to make some sort of distortion ripples in the water?
tell me what you think!

oh wow you REALLY improved your splash part, everything about that part. Good job.

There was a post earlier, don't remember which page with a link to a circular and also sideways distortion.

TIP: make the bubbles be created UNDER the stage. Having the bubbles pop into existance in the middle of the water is pretty weird. Have less of them, make them have a more transparent inside and more opaque edge, have them go to the top of the screen, and don't have them accelerate, or if you do, don't have it be much.

the way i made the bubbes was with actionscript. based on the alpha of the waterdrop, it automatically reverts to the beggining.
i'll try to make a layer in front of them with a solid ground and make them float a bit higher.

heres the final product kinda:

review please...

Looking forward to this collab. If it's as great as the other two, it'll definately get through without a problem.