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i think anybody can, but remember that they will be voted and only the 5 best will be in, or co-authored, cant rmemeber

At 3/9/05 05:15 PM, -Puzz- wrote:

Can I join too, or is full?

Never too full for you.

At 3/9/05 05:35 PM, demon_xion wrote: i think anybody can, but remember that they will be voted and only the 5 best will be in, or co-authored, cant rmemeber

I think they ment join the club of people who don't think they'll be able to make it. It's pretty cool that there's a club for such things! I think I'll start a club for folks who have every intention of joining but "will get to it later" and then throw something together at the last minute. =)

Anyone can get in that has a good movie. We are NOT limiting to a certain number. That would be plain retarded. It's just that only 4 + myname get coauthor. Any GOOD (or good enough; it's entirely subjective) submissions get in.

Amin, dude I overreacted. I just hate racists. And any type of "ists," I just thought you were being (as they say my animations are like virtual tours) "tourists" (heh heh get it? I'm the PUNisher!! lOL!!!).

I haven't got more work done cause I'm a lazy bastard...
Plus I gots lotsa homework and my retarded health teacher is giving me a D because I was absent on the day he assigned something and he's giving me a 0. Weak! My parents aren't letting me get my PERMIT!! (I'm 16!!! It's a little late!!! I've been waiting long enough!!) until I get no interim. I'm getting an interim from him. MOTHER FUCKER NOOOOOO!!!!!!

At 3/9/05 03:39 PM, elkrobber wrote: http://img148.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img148&image=shadesobship22eq.swf

I really don't have much at all.
But still, i would apriciate comments and crititisim.

Its a good start. Try to finish it.

btw I like the link in your sig.

At 3/10/05 12:16 AM, Greedom wrote:

At 3/9/05 03:39 PM, elkrobber wrote: http://img148.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img148&image=shadesobship22eq.swf

I really don't have much at all.
But still, i would apriciate comments and crititisim.

Its a good start. Try to finish it.

Will do.

btw I like the link in your sig.

Which one?
The one to the SoR, or the hamsters, or the topiuc about me.

At 3/10/05 10:41 AM, elkrobber wrote:

Which one?

the hamsters.

At 3/10/05 01:16 PM, Greedom wrote:

At 3/10/05 10:41 AM, elkrobber wrote:

Which one?

the hamsters.

Lol, i got the URL from here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/banners/index.html

At 3/10/05 01:19 PM, elkrobber wrote:

At 3/10/05 01:16 PM, Greedom wrote:

At 3/10/05 10:41 AM, elkrobber wrote:

Which one?

the hamsters.

Lol, i got the URL from here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/banners/index.html

That is crazy, I never went to that page before.

At 3/10/05 01:36 PM, Greedom wrote:

At 3/10/05 01:19 PM, elkrobber wrote:

At 3/10/05 01:16 PM, Greedom wrote:

At 3/10/05 10:41 AM, elkrobber wrote:

Which one?

the hamsters.

Lol, i got the URL from here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/banners/index.html

That is crazy, I never went to that page before.

Its in the panel at the bottom of the page.
I'm so observant.

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At 3/10/05 02:47 PM, elkrobber wrote:
Its in the panel at the bottom of the page.
I'm so observant.

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ahh yes, I see it now. Thanks.

hey you might wanna ask TOXIC BOMB if he wants to join... he is awsome on fbf animations

At 3/8/05 09:44 PM, eh-productions wrote: here's what i got so far. sorry if i'm posting my progress way too often. hope you guys like it.
any ideas for how i could incorporate more water into my move?

http://img163.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img163&image=fivesobcollab3rq.swf

do u make the rain by drawing a bunch of lines then moving it sideways and making it pay over and over because i need to make that.

At 3/10/05 06:18 PM, Sam_Fisher_Clock wrote: hey you might wanna ask TOXIC BOMB if he wants to join... he is awsome on fbf animations

We should ask James Farr if he wants to join.

heres what i got so far on my submission. clcik here :)

Eh. Not much done. But here it is anyway.

FISHIE, BITCH!

At 3/10/05 10:05 PM, kla_kla wrote:

At 3/8/05 09:44 PM, eh-productions wrote: here's what i got so far. sorry if i'm posting my progress way too often. hope you guys like it.
any ideas for how i could incorporate more water into my move?

http://img163.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img163=fivesobcollab3rq.swf

do u make the rain by drawing a bunch of lines then moving it sideways and making it pay over and over because i need to make that.

ya i just had a 3 frame loop. try to always have a few lines coming from the top of the screen and a few leaving from the bottom.

At 3/10/05 11:20 PM, Stereovisionary wrote: Eh. Not much done. But here it is anyway.

FISHIE, BITCH!

Its really good, but honestly i liked your first attempt better.

Stereo's 1st attempt awesome fbf action GGGOOOOO!!!!!

At 3/10/05 11:20 PM, Stereovisionary wrote: Eh. Not much done. But here it is anyway.

FISHIE, BITCH!

The fish has awesome style but you should try to animate it's tail or fins, to show movement.

At 3/8/05 09:50 PM, TwinsenDude wrote: wow djamin, I thought you might be a nice guy. instead, when i try to give some constructive criticism, you go ahead and insult my work. You wanted what needed be better, I tried to help. I made ONE flash that was a "virtual tour" as you call it, and you go ahead and just judge everything I do.

What is wrong with people like you?

You don't know me. You don't know my flash. You're a n00b to these animations, and you go ahead and make a largely false generalization that stretches over every flash I've ever made.

What makes you think you are king of the world and everyone views you as the shit?

Don't judge me. I'm atheist, but I know that most Americans are christians and it says in the bible not to judge people. so don't.

Next time you want to talk, I suggest you think over what you are about to say for one hour. THEN, if you still think it is a smart thing to say: by all means, say it.

Don't turn into an asshole. I was just telling you what (if you don't change it) people are going to say in reviews if you submit it later. Don't start a war.

Dude get over your self, the world isnt out to get you, and btw constructive crit also comes with solutions to what you see as problems, not just stating that you disliked something. And dont say you didnt cuz you did. And I not djamin said your flash was a VISUAL tour. So aside from making an ass of yourself again, you've shown how stupid you are, djamin said he had no idea why you would say it was boring because you didnt say why you thought that. And stop trying to run the way people are doing things for these collabs, your not the leader your a participant. Oh and your obviously a pesemist because djamin said nothing that could be misconstrued as an insult to your work, I did. So stop being so god damn head strong and blame the correct people.

Good luck peeps on your flash and have fun with it you still have a month.

is this still open to enter? for some reason i got alot done tonight, on something that just popped into my mind... 13/48 secs completed =o

if you want me to upload a sample, itll have to wait until tomorrow, cuz i am tired >_>

At 3/11/05 02:08 AM, KrazeeD wrote: is this still open to enter? for some reason i got alot done tonight, on something that just popped into my mind... 13/48 secs completed =o

if you want me to upload a sample, itll have to wait until tomorrow, cuz i am tired >_>

anybody is open to enter. you just need to comply with all the rules, get it done by the due date, and have it voted in the top. only the 4 best will be co-authored and the rest will have their names writen in the authors comments.

At 3/11/05 11:11 AM, eh-productions wrote: anybody is open to enter. you just need to comply with all the rules, get it done by the due date, and have it voted in the top. only the 4 best will be co-authored and the rest will have their names writen in the authors comments.

Does that mean you will be including all of them again??? If so, put some form of order into the appearence of the submissions. Like have the most-voted ones on the very left of the scrolly thing, then descending votes as you scroll to the right. It was so random in the Green-Collab, I gave up fishing through them all.

At 3/11/05 12:26 PM, Astropuff wrote:

At 3/11/05 11:11 AM, eh-productions wrote: anybody is open to enter. you just need to comply with all the rules, get it done by the due date, and have it voted in the top. only the 4 best will be co-authored and the rest will have their names writen in the authors comments.

Does that mean you will be including all of them again??? If so, put some form of order into the appearence of the submissions. Like have the most-voted ones on the very left of the scrolly thing, then descending votes as you scroll to the right. It was so random in the Green-Collab, I gave up fishing through them all.

I doubt they will ALL make it in, because even last time not every single one was included. But the runner ups in the voting did get their submissions put later in the Shades of Red. So I suppose if there is room this time as well then the runner ups (as long as they're good) will get in too. I think it's a matter of space and quality.

At 3/9/05 03:39 PM, elkrobber wrote: http://img148.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img148=shadesobship22eq.swf

I really don't have much at all.
But still, i would apriciate comments and crititisim.

I shall give you criticism >:)

On the top-right of the boat, there is a floating spec. I keep staring at it as your movie plays, watching the one dot bob up and down. And the submarine looks much lower quality than the boat, like it was rushed. Mostly due to the wobblyness of the lines. Something that is closer should look better than stuff that is far away, thats why its an issue with me :P

I can't really say your movie was good or bad due to the tiny length of it, which you already stated that you had lots to do still.

check it out... Not much done but give your opinion (specially mynamewont fittin and spacechicken )
little bugger

At 3/11/05 01:26 AM, Omnilurk wrote: Dude get over your self, the world isnt out to get you, and btw constructive crit also comes with solutions to what you see as problems, not just stating that you disliked something. And dont say you didnt cuz you did. And I not djamin said your flash was a VISUAL tour. So aside from making an ass of yourself again, you've shown how stupid you are, djamin said he had no idea why you would say it was boring because you didnt say why you thought that. And stop trying to run the way people are doing things for these collabs, your not the leader your a participant. Oh and your obviously a pesemist because djamin said nothing that could be misconstrued as an insult to your work, I did. So stop being so god damn head strong and blame the correct people.

Good luck peeps on your flash and have fun with it you still have a month.

You are an asshole.

You'll notice we practically explicitly apoligized to each other afterwards.

In case YOU didn't notice, YOU also aren't the shit. You're trying to give ME advice when it looks to me when you can't even spell.

If I blamed the wrong person, w/e. Amin knows what he's doin, whereas you don't.

Where the fuck did I say I thought I ran this collab?

I just had a lot of influence on the green one because I was helping a whole shitload on putting the thing together, so I got to know myname some.

Now that today has been turned into a fuckfest, what with watching a kid die with a 110 fever twitching in a seizure from an OD on ecstacy in health class and you being such an asshole, you can go suck yourself.

I personnally don't care about you. You're just some foreign speck of annoyance in my life, and I'll just choose to ignore your ignorant ass.

Go bother someone else.

At 3/11/05 01:38 PM, TheLionZ wrote: check it out... Not much done but give your opinion (specially mynamewont fittin and spacechicken )
little bugger

Although I'm not a huge fan of the style/drawings, the fbf is really nice.

There are some great frames that look really smooth.

The random appearance of Pico and his killing are a little weird but overall you have an original plot, which is always a good thing.

I think you should work on the splash as they enter the water. It just doesn't look very realistic. It also goes by too quickly. When people jump into a pool, that is a lot of water displaced. It splashes, and the keeps rippling for a while. DO NOT however make a loop of rippling that goes on for a while, as this looks horribly tacky. Just draw some new frames of that.

Hope this helps.

Twinsen, as much as i like you, calm down, arguing is just a waste of time.

SPREAD THE LOVE, BITCHES.

At 3/11/05 01:38 PM, TheLionZ wrote: check it out... Not much done but give your opinion (specially mynamewont fittin and spacechicken )
little bugger

Hooray! My opinion means something to someone! =)
Seriously though you've got a GREAT start going here! I just see a few places to touch up and you'll be well on your way, my friend.
Here goes:
First, the speed lines when the car first drives away with the shoe need work. They aren't smooth enough to fit with all the other excellent animation.
I have to say, the twirling of the blue guy ROCKS! Best part visually if you ask me.
Your opening half deals a lot in the water, but then doesn't after that. I think you should cut the shooting personally, because it A) adds to the length of the parts that DON'T include water and B) does absolutely nothing to improve your story/idea. Perhaps you think differently or I'm missing something, so I'll let you decide if you want to keep it or not. I believe replacing it with perhaps a part where the one character slips on a puddle of water would improve your overal cartoon (and add some extra comedy and water!)
Finally what do you think about adding a little gnomish laugh at the end with the tiny guy sitting on the big guy's shoulder? Just a "Hee hee!" might add to the toon's ending.

You've got a really nice thing started here, and I can't WAIT to see the final product (if you do decide to change anything.) Really original and fun- great work!