first sample: GrantM something
I'm glad you did this, but you definately sound young, and the variance was low. If you were to do any variations, it sounded forced, and over all, your voice was too soft for those lines, and emotionless, or boring. It's a good attempt, but you certantly need more training and work. Everything sounded similar, and your higher voice will make it hard when your variation is very limited.
Verdict: Resubmit
for your own good. People won't hire you or want you at your current state. Practice a bit more, that's all it takes.
Gito:
I love William Blake, but for the love of god don't try and literally ryme eye with symmetry(my spelling is off right now)! This was an extremely short clip with only one type of voice that gives no insight to what you can do. One voice, and not a bad one at that, but not enough.
verdict: resubmit, please
you look like with some more practice and variety, that you'd do very well. Please work on variations, serious is my favorite, so I'm glad you did, the poetry is a nice touch, but more!
Other than frog's, I'm prolly the toughest one, although Elliair and Kagome are the other spectrum of the sexes, Listen to those 3 before me, I'm still below them in this biz.