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At 1/15/05 04:24 PM, -Manman- wrote: I was kind of worried, because I felt the abusive father/monster symbol might have been driven into the ground in the past few years, as more of that kind of thing comes to light in today's society.

I know what you mean, but, none the less, i like your approach towards the problem.

Thanks for the props man. I'm really getting a good feeling about this crew.

You can become a regular or pop in and out anytime you like. I like reading your stuff!

At 1/15/05 04:33 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: You can become a regular or pop in and out anytime you like. I like reading your stuff!

as do I but my mind is to frazzled to review it. You have a hell of a talent my friend we would be glad to have you as a member.

Btw Myst did you see my post about my idea for a story I made? If it isnt on this page its on the one before I think.

Manic, yes i did see it. Sorry i didn't reply. Scrapping time just to get on here, but i like it. It sounds like a good story and i can't wait to read it and find out that ending you held from us.
I can't really relate to britian and Northern Ireland, but i am very intrigued.
I like how the main charcter f's up and tells all the names. It makes it a better story because it shows no one is perfect (just make sure to make him be tortured really bad so he has no choice but say or something). And it shows the main charcter or heroic figure has a weakness and isn;t this unstopable killing machine or w/e. It helps the reader relate the character, because all of us are weak in some respect.

Anyway, those were my thoughts. I can't say much else until i read it, but i can't wait.

On another note: Omg almost page 50... it was that long ago i was aying 'Hey, page 30!' ^_^

At 1/15/05 05:15 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: On another note: Omg almost page 50... it was that long ago i was aying 'Hey, page 30!' ^_^

lol thansk for the review of the idea. Ill be starting it in the next few weeks hopefully. My exams ake first prioity and Im sure you can understand why.

At 1/15/05 05:18 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote:

lol thansk for the review of the idea.

Are you laughin because verything i write end up as an essay? lol. Iwas just thinking how that little review was far too long for only telling you i liked you idea. All i had to say was, 'Nice idea, Manic'. lol

Ill be starting it in the next few weeks hopefully. My exams ake first prioity and Im sure you can understand why.

Ya i got exams starting in a week, and al lthis week i am doing finall projects ans essays and such. I got one more painting to do before Friday too, worth 20% of my grade. So i will be getting back in here full tilt in Feb, but until then, less frequesnt visits.

At 1/15/05 05:22 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Are you laughin because verything i write end up as an essay? lol. Iwas just thinking how that little review was far too long for only telling you i liked you idea. All i had to say was, 'Nice idea, Manic'. lol

I was laughing at the " It seemes so long ago when i said Hey Page 30" comment you made

Ya i got exams starting in a week, and al lthis week i am doing finall projects ans essays and such. I got one more painting to do before Friday too, worth 20% of my grade. So i will be getting back in here full tilt in Feb, but until then, less frequesnt visits.

awwwwwwww. Oh well good luck with your exams etc though.

At 1/15/05 05:36 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: I was laughing at the " It seemes so long ago when i said Hey Page 30" comment you made

oh, okay. ^_^

awwwwwwww. Oh well good luck with your exams etc though.

Thanks, i will need it.

The shortest and newest poem of my collection. It hasn't been posted in LNL yes, but it will be soon most likely. And like all my poems is very metaphorical.
Here it is:

It all Begins
Fiction in Verse
By, K. Myst Williams

Drowning in a deep sea of glee,
Smiles and laughs; all except me.
Strangers cluster and rush.
All the world directed and busy, but me.
Adrift from the shore and unable to breath;
Lost and confused with no one to need.
I grieve.

At 1/15/05 08:11 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: The shortest and newest poem of my collection. It hasn't been posted in LNL yes, but it will be soon most likely. And like all my poems is very metaphorical.

my dear myst! The word you use should be "are" not "is" saying all my poems is very metaphorical make you sound like a wannabe rapper like Goldencat

Here it is:

Very nice. Only one problem with it IMo.

Smiles and laughs; all except me.

IMo it would sound better if there was a "For" in this sentence.

Smiles and laughs all except for me. thats just my opinion though.

At 1/16/05 05:44 AM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: my dear myst! The word you use should be "are" not "is" saying all my poems is very metaphorical make you sound like a wannabe rapper like Goldencat

Ya, punctuation error, i meant 'is' i just didn't put in proper punctuation. : P Silly me.
'And like all my poems, this is very metaphorical.' << that what i meant to type. Typos, plus not paying attention resulted in the mad chaos and rioting in the streets.

IMo it would sound better if there was a "For" in this sentence.

Smiles and laughs all except for me. thats just my opinion though.

ya, i know what you saying, but it takes away from the syllable sets, but i might just change it anyway.

At 1/16/05 10:44 AM, Myst_Williams wrote: ya, i know what you saying, but it takes away from the syllable sets, but i might just change it anyway.

ithought ti might be something to do with the syllable set up but it just sound right to me without the "for" in it.

Btw in case anyone interested its my birthday today :P

At 1/16/05 10:50 AM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: ithought ti might be something to do with the syllable set up but it just sound right to me without the "for" in it.

I know what you're saying.

Btw in case anyone interested its my birthday today :P

OMG!
Happy Brithday to you!
Happy Brithday to you!
Happy Brithday dear...
Manic/Fox
Happy Brithday to yoooooooooooooou!

*ahem*

How old are you now?

At 1/16/05 12:01 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:

At 1/16/05 10:50 AM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: ithought ti might be something to do with the syllable set up but it just sound right to me without the "for" in it.

I know what you're saying.

Btw in case anyone interested its my birthday today :P

Manic/Fox

lmao. I lvoe how ypou have no idea what to call me by :P

*ahem*

Got your dignity and composure back now?

How old are you now?

Im 16.
Im now allowed to drink alcohol, get married with my parents permission and have sex.oh yeah and smoke if I want to.

Got to love the british government.......not that any of them really effetc me as I dont smoke nor do i want to. I dont have a girlfriend so the marriage and sex ones dont apply at this moment in time either and I dont drink much anyway.

At 1/16/05 12:06 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: lmao. I lvoe how ypou have no idea what to call me by :P

lol, i did that just for you. ; )

Got your dignity and composure back now?

Ya, but not my dignity.

Im 16.
Im now allowed to drink alcohol, get married with my parents permission and have sex.oh yeah and smoke if I want to.

Good fun right thurr.

Got to love the british government.....

Oh, i do.... now.

At 1/16/05 12:06 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: Im 16.
Im now allowed to drink alcohol, get married with my parents permission and have sex.oh yeah and smoke if I want to.

Actually, you have been allowed to drink Alcohol, so long as someone else buys it for you since the age of 12. You still can't go and buy it yourself, until you are 18. Everything else is correct, though.

At 1/16/05 03:24 PM, Coop83 wrote: Actually, you have been allowed to drink Alcohol, so long as someone else buys it for you since the age of 12. You still can't go and buy it yourself, until you are 18. Everything else is correct, though.

really? Never knew that........how strange,

No one posts in the WOR anymore. : (

Immortal RP is still running smoothly, why does ours have to crash? Damn it all.

At 1/16/05 03:37 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: No one posts in the WOR anymore. : (

Immortal RP is still running smoothly, why does ours have to crash? Damn it all.

Don't worry, Myst. I think that I haven't seena new post on Trapped for about a week, so it isn't just WOR that's suffering.

I think the fatc that people liek Captain T and halo man have stopped rp'ing have hit the thread hard. its really only Me myst, the person that is Amour and Immortal darkness I believe. We need mroe members to make it more lively.

At 1/16/05 03:41 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: I think the fatc that people liek Captain T and halo man have stopped rp'ing have hit the thread hard. its really only Me myst, the person that is Amour and Immortal darkness I believe. We need mroe members to make it more lively.

I agree, i am going to advertise our Rp, subtly, of course.

OMG PAGE 50! We have reached the milestone?

No one ever told me what happened to LordSkeletor, does anyone know? I might start posting in the book club again, maybe we can revive it?

At 1/16/05 03:43 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: No one ever told me what happened to LordSkeletor, does anyone know? I might start posting in the book club again, maybe we can revive it?

I have no idea what happened to him. though my money is on exams. Lets try and revive it, it should be good for a laugh.

At 1/16/05 03:45 PM, Coop83 wrote: I have no idea what happened to him. though my money is on exams. Lets try and revive it, it should be good for a laugh.

Ya, should be. ^_^

Anyone written anything new lately?

I'm going to try and revive my writing of 'From Little Acorns'. I think all my women problems are sorting themselves out (She's leaving)

At 1/16/05 04:52 PM, Coop83 wrote: I'm going to try and revive my writing of 'From Little Acorns'. I think all my women problems are sorting themselves out (She's leaving)

Oh, well. Good riddence.. or... thats too bad. Whichever suites you best. But From Little Acorns is an amazing read. I honestly don't like the title, it makes me think of a dram, love story. If it ever gets published, you may want to cinsider changing the title to something my eye catching or though provoking. Acorns have never been exciting in my books. : P

At 1/16/05 05:10 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Oh, well. Good riddence.. or... thats too bad. Whichever suites you best. But From Little Acorns is an amazing read. I honestly don't like the title, it makes me think of a dram, love story. If it ever gets published, you may want to cinsider changing the title to something my eye catching or though provoking. Acorns have never been exciting in my books. : P

Well, it was something that I read in a poem:

From little acorns,
Mighty oaks grow.

I forget the rest of the verse, but I intend it to be a chronicle of the career of the seven adventurers.

Sorry I've been out. I really did want to get on , but I haven't had the chance. I'll post lots tonight to breath some life back into everything.

Here comes one pissed officer!

At 1/16/05 05:13 PM, Coop83 wrote: From little acorns,
Mighty oaks grow.

Oh well, maybe you should make both the lines your title, not just the first one. It would be more interesting that way and capture my attention, personally.

At 1/16/05 05:15 PM, Captain-T wrote: Sorry I've been out. I really did want to get on , but I haven't had the chance. I'll post lots tonight to breath some life back into everything.

OMG! You are back. Good to see you again man.

I just saw LordSkeleter post. Someone should ask him where he has been.

Coop, how long do you think From little Acorns will be? Estimation.

At 1/16/05 05:23 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Coop, how long do you think From little Acorns will be? Estimation.

I have absolutely no clue at the moment. I'm not even sure if the gang is going to have started their first job, by the end of the second chapter yet, but I'm gunning for around 100,000 words for a starting point. If that doesn't look long enough, then I'll just carry on.

At 1/16/05 05:26 PM, Coop83 wrote: I have absolutely no clue at the moment. I'm not even sure if the gang is going to have started their first job, by the end of the second chapter yet, but I'm gunning for around 100,000 words for a starting point. If that doesn't look long enough, then I'll just carry on.

That is a decent length. I thought it was gonna end up twice that, but that is an average length. Most pop fiction novels hover around 115,000.
See you are different then me. You just write, i wish i could do that. I plan out each chapter, i create a descriptive plot outline and decide on the amount of words i must at least have in each chapter (soome chapters being different fro mthe next), i then lay out how many chapters per part and how many chapters there will be. And what the goal for each part and/or chapter is.
Like i got pages and pages of informtion for my novel Evemortal, just explaining what each chapter is about etc. I am crazy organized when iwrite, but anything else, i am a very unorganized person. Weird. : P