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How does. "Republican rising" sound for a title for a story about the Ira?

Please read my things and give feedback. I'm goin for now, though. Pissed and wicked sore.

At 1/11/05 11:10 AM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote:

At 1/10/05 05:30 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Speaking of age, only a few months till my 18th. It feels like a big deal, but it really isn't.l

Im 16 on sunday :P As soon as I hit 16 I can leave school,get pissed whenever I want, Get married and be legal to have sex.......but the last two arent gonna happen lol. So me being 16 is a big deal.:P Yay for me.

only 4 more months till Iam 15 *cough*liedonprofile*cough* oh how I cannot wait, mostly cuz Iam gonna try and get a job at Block Buster, do they have block buster in UK? well Block Buster is a movie rental place in USA if ya didnt know, I guess if they have McDonalds in Japan they might have Block Buster in UK I dunno? I've been waiting YEARS for a job, kinda wierd for a kid my age huh? my sister turned 18 a while ago and she just got a reall job recently, mostly she's just been baby sitting. right now I got a dog walking job $20 bucks a week, after this week I'll have $120 and I also have a $10 dollar gift card to EB games, OH they gotta have EB games in the UK (EB games is a video game store) ne way Iam gonna buy PoP: WW (prince of persia warior within) and Ninja Gaiden for Xbox (I know I'm a nerd!) eh just thought I'd tell you a bit about my life cuz Iam bored.

i want to join. I am a writer and I have a great idea for a seriese about Ng. Interested? contact me at Dparker46@cox.net

hey Wolf why'd you stop that thing about the animal people?
Hey guys i'm glad to be back from my bann, and i'm happy to say that i have alot of writing to do for school by friday, but I'm cool with it.

Here's somehitng i feel like writing right here and now, oh don't mark on speeling errors, i'm just yping this strai so i know that there's going to be a few. well here goes:

All my life I've been the undertoe, the downtrotted. Well today is my time to shine!
That's what I wake up and tell myself everyday. But to no avial, everyday is the same, always getting pushed aside or stepped on, sometimes I feel like giving it all up, ending it.....
But I keep my head high, casue I know everythings going to turn out alright! That's my attitude, I can live with pain, I can deal with emotions. Nothing can faze me! I have my select group of friends, and I'm content. I love helpping people, and I always know that I'm lucky.
Lucky to have a family that loves me. Lucky to have a God to look to. Lucky to have friends to lean on and talk to. Lucky to have music, my anti-drug. Lucky to have a brillient mind. Lucky know not be afraid to ask. Lucky to not be afraid to try. I'm lucky that I am not afraid to live!
This is me, my veiws on life. I will get stronger, I will surive, I can handle everyhitng that come my way! I can make it through the tunnel and to the light! No mattter how many fish I throw back into that sea, I will find the one that I keep forever some day. I can keep my head high and know that I'm alive and I'm lucky!

I didn't post those in here for nothing....

At 1/11/05 11:10 AM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote:

At 1/10/05 05:30 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: Speaking of age, only a few months till my 18th. It feels like a big deal, but it really isn't.l

Im 16 on sunday :P As soon as I hit 16 I can leave school,get pissed whenever I want, Get married and be legal to have sex.......but the last two arent gonna happen lol. So me being 16 is a big deal.:P Yay for me.

Heh, my 21st is coming up on the 29th of Feb. Gonna' hit the bars like crazy that night. Although I am not sure how much I will remember about it lol.

Also, maybe one of you guys can help me out with this. How do I make links to this place and other forums down below.(After the page break).

I want it to say "Writers Guild" and then people would just be able to click on it.(Make it easier for me too lol).

Also, I know I haven't posted and short stories on here in a long while, but I am working to get a book of short stories published, so I will post some stuff on here whenever I can.

At 1/11/05 11:00 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: r der EVEN eny flash artist in here? looks like evrybody iz jesta writer.

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no we're all writers looking hoplely for a flash artist, when all the good ones are using their time making flashes, not looking for scripts, casue these days you can make a flash by having two sticks fight eachother for a good 2 minutes, and everyone'll love it. Hark how times have changed.

At 1/11/05 08:16 PM, ImmortalDarkness wrote: I didn't post those in here for nothing....

sorry old chap :P Just read at leats one of your things. Quite nice I think. what is it for?(or did you say and I missed it?)

At 1/11/05 11:00 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: r der EVEN eny flash artist in here? looks like evrybody iz jesta writer.

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Im learning flash but it's a slow and painful process and I suck at it :-) but I do believe that some of the members do have certain skills in flash. I know I was surprised when someone joined and said they made flash so there is at least One.....can tremember who it is thouhg :-\

Sorry i have been away for a couple days. It seems i have missed more then i have the time t oread right now, so i am just going to make a few notes and hope everyone understand where i am coming from.

To all people who posted some lit: I deeply apologize for not giving my signature in-dpeth analysis of al lyuor works, but i am going through exams soon and i have been studying like mad the last couple days and will be doing so until late this month. I have alot of final projects due worth 10-20% of my marks, so i have been hectically busy. If you absolutle yinsist on having me, personally, read your stuff then do not hesitate to meail me, but please, don't waste my time, because i don't want to edit your work. I just want to give you my opinion. If there are loads of grammatical errors and spelling erros, or i just can't understand it; i won't bother reading it.

If there are any other important notes i must know about, or if anyone has any specific quesions... please reply to this post and i will see to it to find time to clear anything up.

I greatly apologize for not being around, but final projects and exams can get hectic... i am sure you all understand being students yourselves.

At 1/10/05 07:37 PM, ImmortalDarkness wrote: I think I have a one hit wonder to work on. How I feel about the girl I'm in love with.

These were excellent pieces. They really opened my eyes a little, regarding my own relationship 'dilemma' at the moment, though mine is slightly more advanced than yours (You'd expect it, because I am 8 years your senior...) and shift patterns keep us apart for days at a time, which makes me feel empty. (I spend loads texting her every day, but it's worth it.)

Good work, keep it up.

At 1/10/05 08:05 PM, LamboFactor wrote: The Sphere of Equus:

I loved where you left this. A great cliffhanger. I really need to read more of this. I'll probably email you more detailed feedback tomorrow, as I'm not working Huzzah! (Tho a little sad, because I'm not seeing my beloved Kat)

At 1/11/05 07:35 AM, Jamicus wrote: - Tommy -

Okay, that was quite a dark one. I think that maybe you do need your medication, plus maybe a trip to see your shrink again.

Other than that, the writing style was good and well presented in the first person.

At 1/12/05 04:26 PM, Coop83 wrote: These were excellent pieces. They really opened my eyes a little, regarding my own relationship 'dilemma' at the moment, though mine is slightly more advanced than yours (You'd expect it, because I am 8 years your senior...) and shift patterns keep us apart for days at a time, which makes me feel empty. (I spend loads texting her every day, but it's worth it.)

Good work, keep it up.

Thank you, she actually wanted me to put it into a book. I'll try to tackle it, but it's probably going to be a feat and a half.

At 1/12/05 11:58 AM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote: sorry old chap :P Just read at leats one of your things. Quite nice I think. what is it for?(or did you say and I missed it?)

It's to the girl that I love, lol.

I'm really glad you guys likes my stuff! :-D

hey can i joine cus i wright short story's,poetry,etc can i joine?

At 1/12/05 07:09 PM, corupthamster1 wrote: hey can i joine cus i wright short story's,poetry,etc can i joine?

lol.. i just replied to you.

Uhh, ya you are welcome for sure. Post your lit and our members will review, critique or praise it. And, if you havnt any to post right now, post your comments on other's works.

At 1/11/05 11:00 PM, DaSadGirl wrote: r der EVEN eny flash artist in here? looks like evrybody iz jesta writer.

I'm an ameteur Flash artist, check the profile. And hence the name, "Writer's Guild" we should be all writers.

her Immortal don't you think that Aasha abd Steven should join this club, they're amazing writers.

At 1/12/05 08:56 PM, DaSadGirl wrote:

At 1/12/05 08:09 PM, ImmortalDarkness wrote:

I'm an ameteur Flash artist, check the profile. And hence the name, "Writer's Guild" we should be all writers.

well if u gotta flash, en dont think ill make it through da portal den show it to me en Ill be able ta give u a whole grip of ideas to make it WAAY better.

It's a dressup. -_-

alot of choices, which is good, but let's not do a stick next time. PLease.

Oh my god! Writer's guild!

Hopefully I can be accepted into this guild as a writer, and have my some of my work recognized. The rest of it can be laughed at I guess.

Some people know my stuff, some don't. In case anyone cares, I have a story going on in the General board right now, and hope to keep continuing it.

I'm also looking for flash animators to illustrate and give life to some of my ideas, but I'm pretty sure we all are at some point. Seeing our work spring to life in an animation would be ever so bitchin'.

Look me up, read my stuff, leave me a "word up," whatever.

At 1/12/05 12:56 AM, newbman wrote: no we're all writers looking hoplely for a flash artist....

hey man speak for your self man. I suck at flash, but atleast Iam an artist man, I can animate man just not on computer, man its so much harder to do it on a computer, man I sound like cheech or chong man. random acts of randomness.

At 1/12/05 11:58 PM, Manman_and_Boyboy wrote: Oh my god! Writer's guild!

Give us a link to your story...
Post some of your lit here, we are happy to read it and give you our thoughts.
Welcome to the club!

At 1/13/05 08:02 AM, Myst_Williams wrote: Give us a link to your story...

It's in his sig, Myst. Some decent stuff, actually. I'd say it's worth a read. Manic has already been on the thread and posted, telling him to come here.

At 1/13/05 09:12 AM, Coop83 wrote: It's in his sig, Myst. Some decent stuff, actually. I'd say it's worth a read. Manic has already been on the thread and posted, telling him to come here.

Thanks bro. Got any comments or suggenstions about my work?

At 1/13/05 09:12 AM, Coop83 wrote:

At 1/13/05 08:02 AM, Myst_Williams wrote: Give us a link to your story...

It's in his sig, Myst. Some decent stuff, actually. I'd say it's worth a read. Manic has already been on the thread and posted, telling him to come here.

I did? hmmm it seems your right I did tell him to pop along here.

Meh. Im going to be starting a new project within the next few weeks my short sotry thing that was set in Victorian London is kind of screwed as It got deleted from my pc :-( But my next piece is going to be a story about the the IRA set in the near future. The peace talks have fallen through and the IRA have declared an all out war on Britian and Northern Ireland. Ther inhabitants of Ireland live in fear of being attacked. The unionists are afraid that the IRA will strike and the nationalists are afriad that the Unionist Paramilitary groups will attack in retaliation. the story revolves around the fate and demise of the main character (Micheal Gare) to start of with he is but a low ranking member of the IRa but pushes his way through the ranks and ends up as one of the main leaders of the IRA and a leading figure in the Sinn Fein Political party. After a series of unfortunate events he ends up going on the run across Ireland and must escape to America where his family now resides. before he can get to America though he is captured by the British Army and is intergates. He ends up revealing the names of every leader in the IRA and causing the IRA leaders to be captured and the IRa disbanded. Gare is then thrown in jail and thats all Im going to say cause when I get around to finsishing it I dont wnat to spoil the ending for you guys.

Characters- Micheal Gare
Michael is a member of the IRA and

At 1/13/05 01:25 PM, Manic_streetpreacher wrote:

Bah hit ost befor ei meant to

Characters- Micheal Gare
Michael is a member of the IRA and pushes his way up the ranks till he becomes a prominent figure and leader.

Sally O'Shea

Sally is the "Love interest" in the story./ She meets Michael Gare at a British army Party that he has gate crashed so he can assasinate a British Officer.

roger Mc'donald

Roger is Michaels bets freind in the IRA and is often found close by wherever Michael is. he is a quiet man but his passion for riffing ireland of the british " menace" is unmatched by any in the IRA.

those are all the characters IVe thought up so far. Not very in depth but Ive been working on the general story .

At 1/13/05 01:25 PM, Manman_and_Boyboy wrote: Thanks bro. Got any comments or suggenstions about my work?

When I get around to reading it over the next few days, I'll post a full review. However, my time is slightly limited at the moment.

At 1/12/05 11:52 PM, newbman wrote: alot of choices, which is good, but let's not do a stick next time. PLease.

LOL. We're making a nudey woman one just for the perverts and high marks! Moohahaha @ Cleverness

i am about to write a gang story, mainly about a hitman, but i need some some names. ill put the link to my live journal when im done with the story.

Okay, Manic, I've just read your brief intro and I quite like it. I would suggest that you go for a lot of research on this, before jumping into the deep end. Books and Videos are your friends here. I know it's fiction but season 1 of Ultimate force has a NI episode in it, dealing with paramilitary activity, so you may want to take a look (I think the episode was called 'the killing of a one armed bookie' or something like that)

That is going to be your main problem, the research. There are so many sources, that you should be alright, though.

Happy trawling.