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yes,u. I cant wait for more!

If were giving sample then.... hmmmm.....

The in-breed being of darkness and light stood upon a small grassy hill with a cherry tree in early bloom. He looked upon the strange place he called home, Myth City. His pure white hair was played in a classic (to his home at least) super saiyan style. His eyes were deep purple and his ears played back like a elves. His face like that of Miroku (Google it, might be mispelled) but innocent. He wore no shirt, for reasons unknown, but it revealed a large slash across his stomach and a horrendous hole in his right shoulder. He wore pant at least though. Plain faded jeans.

"I am Psycrone."

At 11/21/05 12:51 PM, Tri-Nitro-Toluene wrote: my favourite was, Tony Blair, at the general election,talking about his foot fetish to an audienc eof two old men and a lost duck.

'What duck?'
'Buggrit!'

It just sounds like something straight out of Discworld.

At 11/21/05 05:32 PM, chachiny wrote: yes,u. I cant wait for more!

ok, then if u want some more...i'll give you chapter2

Dragonball-chaotic future (dbcf)

Chapter2.

“your wish is my command” the boy heard as he turned around. Emperor squild flew up from the ground to see who the dragon was looking at.the boy recognized the emperor and ran away.”get him!!”the emperor yelled and not a second later his henchmen chased our young boy but greatly catching up.the boy said “you’ll never catch me alive”and he jumped off a cliff.one of the henchmen said as the boy was falling”that’s okay”and then they turned back to their master.the boy closed his eyes when he was thinking how he lived his live,when he was done he was still falling”come on already, I’m done flashing my live before my….what the?he opened his eyes,and saw he was floating in mid-air.
He tried to fly further into the deep canyon,but since it’s his first time, he hit a couple of rocks,making loud noise.
He still wondered why he was flying and he didn’t get hurt badly when flying into those rocks.the henchmen and the emperor heard the noise,”you, go check it out”one of the stronger looking henchmen said,when he pointed at a regular one.the henchman went to the spot where the young boy crashed into the rocks.first there appears to be nothing.the boy was sneaking away a few meters further.everything was fine, ‘till he stept on a groundhog.”goddamnit!!,….oh shit”he flew as steady as he can,as fast as he can.but of course the henchman was closing up on him,with great speed…

I am confused as to where we are on this collab. Is it still going?

O_O

holy fuck.

you really did take me seriously.

At 11/22/05 12:46 PM, Myst_Williams wrote: I am confused as to where we are on this collab. Is it still going?

Mick's doing his section methinks.

At 11/22/05 01:40 PM, Mick_the_champion wrote: Yeah, I'll crack it out during the week unless anyone is in a rush?

Nah, I just wasnt sure what was going on. I have so many essays coming out of my ass right now... that a rush is one thing I am not in.

and here is the third part of my story.(still writing...)comments are well appreciated.

Dbcf

Chapter 3

The henchman grabbed our brave boy”got yah,you little punk!””noooo!!get off meeeeeeeee”the henchman sensed there was something wrong,the boy furious with rage,punched him right in the face,sending the trooper flying away.
The trooper wouldn’t give up”you,…you sucker punched me!!”ill make you payyyy!!!!”he flew with great speed at the kid,the kid raised his hands in front of him to block the incoming attack.”raaaagh!!!”a huge blast shot out of his palms, frying the trooper.the boy greatly surprised, took this opportunity to escape.the emperor and his men already returning to base.saw the flash and decided to check it out,cuz his own trooper wasn’t returning.when they got there”master, our trooper is lying here,dead.” *silence*……..the emperor lifts his hand pointing at,the idiot who said that.”noo please!!”a red coloured zap,pierced the henchman. the emperor:”this is quite interesting”a stronger trooper:”should I go and find him,my lord?”the emperor: ”no,i want to see how this unravels.they all flew back to HQ.Our boy seeing they where gone,”what the hell was that!?” he found some ruins nearby and decided to take a rest, and grab some food from the abandoned mall.The next morning:when he woke up it was time to hit the road again.he was searching for a U.H.U.A camp station.the U.H.U.A was the “underground humans united association”a secret rebellion force wich has weapons and soldiers.he wanted to stay there cuz he feared scouting-troopers would spot him.on the way to the next town it was starting to get dark again.he stumbled on a small village,or at least what was left of it.after dark,every human,slave or not gets killed instantly,by the scouting-troopers,knowing he wouldn’t stand a chance alone,he decided to spend the night in an mostly intact basement…..

At 11/22/05 02:28 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:

I have so many essays coming out of my ass right now...

That sounds incredibly painful.
You should probably see a doctor or something.

At 11/22/05 04:11 PM, -TheDoctor- wrote:

At 11/22/05 02:28 PM, Myst_Williams wrote:

I have so many essays coming out of my ass right now...

That sounds incredibly painful.
You should probably see a doctor or something.

he should see you!......you know.....with the docter..and.. the....ass
*leaves*

Alright, I would really like some comments on this war poem. I made it in like 10 minutes so it ain't a huge thing. But I would like some comments:

-=Word of Fear=-

Yet no-one has spoken a word, though they breath heavy
I can see smoke and a beach, but no Germans in my view

I control my rifle, is my helmet on?
Are we dead men, or die only those who does not carry on?

On the beach we debark
As a blood-thirsty shark

We run into the fire which flares
Into enemy lines only great men dares

They are shot and they are shooting
We are shot and we are shooting

Bright lights of muzzle-breaks loot
Each time the youngsters shoot

A war of freedom, terror and opression
Honourable men's last session

To victory and some's death
Our passion and last breath

Blood floats and heads roll
We do not know if we will full fill our goal

But to which cost we might ever loose or win
We must stop this forbidden sin

Towards death or victory...

At 11/22/05 04:41 PM, anotherguy wrote:

he should see you!......you know.....with the docter..and.. the....ass
*leaves*

I think I still have some Chateau deBlanc in the fridge...

Chapter 1 The night of insecurity
Rain, hate, death and dieseses. All which our village contains. The agonizing cold mornings, biting the skin of many people. The harsh summers, where all you can do is hope for the refreshing rain to trinkle on the crops and your face. The nights were as painful as winter. Darkness combined with frezzing cold, enough to see the grim reapers face. "Sir, our defenses have been slaughterd at the west gate!" The warlord exclaimed to the emporrer. " How could this be?" The emperer asked to his undividingly servents. The cracks through the bricks made everything wet and cold, including our beds. I could feel everything around me. The hot breath of the people, the coldness of the bitter night, and the blood going up and down through my vains.

thats mostly all i got for my new story. sorry to myst. use ice it should help!

I just finished up reading "Cyrano de Bergerac" it's a good play. Lots of action and poetry from the hereo of the story Cyrano with his massive noce.

So how is everyone? Anybody going to do anything for Thanksgiving assuming that you havn't already celibrated it, or you don't. I havn't been able to sit still in one place anymore I don't seem to have that ability anymore so I guess I should learn how to run/drive/work and be able to write at the same time = D. I have been able to make up funny little things that just pop up into my head, but they really do stink. I got one for everyone.

Restless

Nothing could every keep me away from you
There's nothing a hundred men or more could do
It's going to take a lot to eep me away from you
I'll swim the sevens see to hear you laugh
I'll climb the highest mountain to see you smile
Your love would keep me going never restless for your love

That's all I got really it's sucks since I didn't get to write it down I'm writing it fomr memory, but I'm sure there's something missing to it, but it's ok with me.
Watch out for the SS Thanksgiving collab I will be in it so vote FIVE.

repent, that poem was neat. i need to send that to my gf! ill try to vote five. but if it has drew pickles....you dont wana know>:~)!

At 11/19/05 04:48 PM, ElectroMagnetic wrote:

Kevin, a little, gray chinchilla, stood, balancing himself on a tall fence near trash cans. The loud noises of the garbage truck directed his attention to it. Kevin tried to walk closer to it, forgetting he was on a fence, he walked to it but fell in an open trash bag. He panicked as he sank deeper and deeper in to the bag. He struggled until he was exhausted. He let the garbage swallow him as if he were a bite-sized snack.

Did everyone forget I posted this? I didn't see any responses to it. I wanna know if I should continue it. Because I already have a bit of it written.

At 11/22/05 10:56 PM, ElectroMagnetic wrote: Did everyone forget I posted this? I didn't see any responses to it. I wanna know if I should continue it. Because I already have a bit of it written.

Dude don't get mad because no one has replyed to your post you continue it if you want to continue it don't let others effect your writing unless it needs some help with it, but for the most part if no one sees your post then don't worry about it just go on to the next bit I've posted some things, and everyone has ignored what I said.

Oh and that Chaching I could make it longer so it won't seem so weak.

Damm I'm off today correction on my last two posts.
SS Thanksgiving collab is SC Thanksgiving collab
Chaching is Chachiny

That's all.

At 11/22/05 01:28 PM, -TheDoctor- wrote: Mick's doing his section methinks.

That was where I thought we were as well.

if u read the first 3 parts of bdcf,you might aswell read the 4th part

Dbcf

Chapter 4

…he saw the trooper he killed.”you,..you sucker punched me”then he saw how he killed him…”aaarggh.,huh?oh it’s just a dream!”well at least he was still alive.”time to get go...”BOOM,a flash lighted up the whole room.”what the hell whas th..”BOOM,another followed.”who the hell is bothering..”he opend the door and saw an arm of troopers,”they must be looking for a dragonball,I can’t let them get it!”he sneaked out of the basement,conviced he would die if they saw him.he sneaked behind a house and saw a trooper with scouter,”those are the machines they use to fid dragonballs,I got to have one of those!”he picked up a rock and threw it against a wall,a trooper at the other side came to check it out.when the trooper turned to the side where the boy was at,he got one small punch in the face knocking him out.”there now just to get that ball,how does this thing work?”after pressing some buttons he saw round object hidden in the ground right next him.”that was easy,now to get out of here”he TRIED to sneak out,but a trooper saw him”hey you”he hid the dragonball behind his back”me?”,yeah,you!,where’s your uniform?”, “my uniform?!,uhhhmm…”he saw another trooper just walking away”that guy took it!”pointing at the trooper..the commander said”hey you,stop!men,get him!!”every trooper in the area went after the innocent trooper,and of course he started running!
The boy:”well that covers me!” he flew away to the next town with the dragonball and the scouter…

At 11/23/05 07:30 AM, Mick_the_champion wrote: I've got an article for my Journalism class and a 90 second Newsreport to come up with for Radio class

Why don't you add at the end 'And in sport, it has been rumoured that former Manchester United star Roy Keane has signed a three year deal to play for Celtic.'

Might just give people a laugh

At 11/23/05 08:16 AM, Coop83 wrote:

At 11/23/05 07:30 AM, Mick_the_champion wrote: I've got an article for my Journalism class and a 90 second Newsreport to come up with for Radio class

Why don't you add at the end 'And in sport, it has been rumoured that former Manchester United star Roy Keane has signed a three year deal to play for Celtic.'

Might just give people a laugh

lol,it does!
well i here's another chapter.you can read,it you can ignore it,but you can't dislike it
(yes,you can)

Dbcf

Chapter 5

…When he was flying on the way to the next town,he still heard the troopes killing the one who””stole his uniform””,
and with loud noise,but what he didn’t noticed,was that the trooper commander he saw earlier was watching him and, knew who he was,but he just stood there. His flying skills where getting better ,and so far no more rock crashing occurred.With his new scouter he could also detect anybody with a reasonable power level,so not to worry about anyone sneaking up on him any more.And with a dragonball in his possession the emperor could not finish the wish he started,yep,things where looking great.until…”
Commander: master,I have news for you.”..
Emperor: ”yes,speak”
commander: ”the boy who interrupted your wish has been sighted at our latest dragonball search-area”
Emperor: ”hmm,interesting did you dispose of him?
Commander: uuhh,not exactly..he kinda….stole..the dragonball…
Emperor: WHAT!!??..you imbecile!!Why didn’t you stop him?!
Commander : you said not to hurt him,my lord.
Emperor: that was before he stole the dragonball! It was fun to see him try to stop me,but now he’s actually succeeding he is becoming a pest!!This is the last failure I except from you,Vira.
Vira:….yes,master..
Emperor: you have full permission to kill everyone who gets in the way of our plans!now get out of my sight before I kill you right now!!
Vira: certainly,master.
Our boy was now the master of the sky!he enjoyed flying very much,since it was the first fun he had in years!
Well..it wouldn’t last long…

there is somthing about my name that repent had said. Chachiny was really supposed to be Chachingy, but its a cheap typo. and i luv it! but chachingy is about money, but chachiny is about blam/protect points!:)

At 11/23/05 11:58 AM, chachiny wrote: there is somthing about my name that repent had said. Chachiny was really supposed to be Chachingy, but its a cheap typo.

Well, you could always change it.

and i luv it!

I guess this means that you aren't.

but chachingy is about money, but chachiny is about blam/protect points!:)

How did you ever come up with a name like that?

Coop83, you would not mind reading my poem above and just give me some critique?

I would really appreciate it.

To Coop's message "how did you come up with a name like that" i say... you dont wana know. really. its boring :)

At 11/23/05 12:09 PM, chachiny wrote: To Coop's message "how did you come up with a name like that" i say... you dont wana know. really. its boring :)

Well that's what we here at the Writer's Guild are all about long and boring stories.
So go ahead it's just like what everyone else posts here lolZZZZZZZ.

Fuck, tonight I am writing something.
Even if it kills me.

Robot Noir.

At 11/23/05 01:49 PM, Mick_the_champion wrote:

There's an episode of Samurai Jack that's like Robot Noir...it's fucking hawt.

They stole the idea from me, obviously.